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Retoucher

ARTURIUM

Posts: 49

Nikopol', Dnipropetrovs'ka, Ukraine

Hello! I am a professional painter retoucher (I’m drawing from the age of 10, you can look at my drawings on my page or on the channel), I decided to master a new direction in retouching photo models for myself, I ask my critics for my work ::
before
link1 https://cdn1.radikalno.ru/uploads/2019/1/16/9722e6e8dd7254faf13aa678aaf9558a-full.jpg
link 2 https://drive.google.com/file/d/1W2tN_5 … sp=sharing
after
link 1 https://cdn1.radikalno.ru/uploads/2019/1/16/ffd1b3450978b1140ec8c81c6570debe-full.jpg
link 2 https://drive.google.com/file/d/11yHTJv … sp=sharing
before
link 1 https://cdn1.radikalno.ru/uploads/2019/1/16/f4035d86af8bd7a19e2b18d97a03fc00-full.jpg
link 2 https://drive.google.com/file/d/1fhDCRc … sp=sharing
after
link 1 https://a.radikal.ru/a00/1901/03/d13522fe8a5d.jpg
link 2 https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jXVOeK … sp=sharing

Jan 16 19 04:12 am Link

Photographer

Markus Andrews

Posts: 472

Miami Beach, Florida, US

Overall I think you did a solid job. In my opinion the photos are a tad soft, but this is personal choice. I think you could become a amazing retoucher if you continue sharpening your skills.


Good Job!


Markus

Jan 31 19 08:38 am Link

Retoucher

ARTURIUM

Posts: 49

Nikopol', Dnipropetrovs'ka, Ukraine

Markus Andrews wrote:
Overall I think you did a solid job. In my opinion the photos are a tad soft, but this is personal choice. I think you could become a amazing retoucher if you continue sharpening your skills.


Good Job!


Markus

Hello! These are my old works !!!
I have new ones in my portfolio.
Rate them
and answer the topic smile
Please !!!

in high resolution
here before after ::
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/ … sp=sharing


https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/g6L5ZG0dgZpfo7I7w0Dgm2we6ylY5AEQqEhPwwmu85FpSuDcQYhDSd8eWEUKGNbtfWsIHCWgCyTtYq1uhlf0PXqSRuWgHWNkk6d_5wdDMYe4beyjYVL6CRZo93JiVMo8NqMhqhSE6UV3A7EFPt8w79L_sPEBwPLBC6JCBW1rTfI7nr5AwUjyBuDAkcC6peQvZX5_CiZsDOslMiNApzNfAahkTciv6fNjhuS7nqc1KNgXPw13p9_EQxPeX0nk2OzZSVuLexrbuRTRj8qXsJVQGJkOtG3YMPJH1b6oHGaCefMwn3irVJwV5hTVfIDPMGEm7mGTx6gMoimNQj59xmoCR-hEEgfiPSovFflwdHIHZtbooR1h1fzAIeqLH82Q1cW6bs6a_Vqczu623Q3sUXkfIDdHipu0-0iqJwmhHoWR2wJrOMmTAUq9MdCZtI0zNDGYL2iuezAvqsCJuOmGGEkKi8_lafwqxmhmgfdF9oCYRIt8uVByKa7xuMvHEzxPjYt9AUVOJSiTuTMSU_leeLirxwHNOpjPyKofkOjilh58pUGNScTiX3xMyHtSsPaJOLCibBzC8bIXWPUdXni7AI3hVewGNTfIicOwu5tcZBoZWdHtwO1M6nWoRUQk0mn6OQOgQCwJmljcuG7XzZ8WcWvEYbxK0v26H2mbZK-FK5-1D7BFrhthqo55-2kz5-LH5zPcOqddkcOmfGY8SsKMXof3dY_D=w555-h832-no

https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/zYDyc2wiW-AbsLfnLVdkrar-lnpcfyZA1POCwbk5ufZo7fEPLVW9RN4gHTzoKNhCuwSOtn5gQUfm0YAVGKoOEJl_YsCKnm3wE4gdXdUdBm4c4oo5Ug_JdCyYjbSWtU03QpG0ANwsIJ3oDv3jhH-1ncHu8Hh4oJm3QzRjggmvZyuPLNL0ts0uegQf0YyxLAPYcotrh5HgAMpA53VJHoP6tbRVuch_n4aQuoKri5nQgBHFhNpsULcayODC8GdEp6_VSCLfcar904FyTZV9FTuaAhl-Dlac7_OTg-y6kOoujAC9v_-vDNCX2ElkfdUpMpi6rvVOJ2NzYiL-Ckbtx-p5LbYXnXAsvg6C5HhE6ROIuDLcJLm3nynFHJBYEXb7s5lh0We1JmlRe62aVjcFH0w0253bufIb2EH3t2ruuviEQv0vwngQZSVkf-P3eIaJZcitA8AWJhfIuf8LG9959wPNKlL-G0RsyQc9giOPPAuEtEsznQLGulkjfq518SQ8AOSrlo-nLq1ndqSFlHVxUiRXFJE1IovTZOn_8XOTcg34iakgLRnJ7GLLPB0n-BXDHNLtoXOmyaotjFiXoJ-IsTllx21vV4karn2pw6T6fOZkHqQ9THMaAGjxLUD-16MfOvLSMQSyHimnaoQ-IH_5Cf_Eu9_aMVbZmAZsQUO_SIXaSS937XuB3gIuJeVJTxptx4PG3KsZQjwx-kBrFd4Zav9VR_uo=w554-h832-no

https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/tIAmJlHXS2_vJKZWd3dpFvctELQOc9l-QfyAjTompPd4eR_KBDb5ka8dEYprtp-UPLhlz7cPRtML6HThyM9YnIebMqurHkpXtxTMsPCFDWGTJWH1yj8na1S4IABQoDDC1Cci8FO5SpQDHQZcdBtd4pKpQMxJttugxKUOMGLrBho92ik8rrmrgNleSxBLaEe6g3SSCLEcguIytC3XirpjxodlfUjHtbQzU0ugOg5p7vo4Gu2prR74hl0KBxKmsO8J3_QgeUKvFeQUOibhObXvUoqW3AoIqSyUXMRJqWnfqhR9b3x1PhWkPocfKANndUHJME4x9l-Y0oRAJHikUHqnG1R9p2BlfiTeIjmBGnx8kF6IadqAlBQekgZjaIf2lYA-84FdJdqXNLgatI_RdbinibBzYAbNLyxH1huoA8w7qf-sYvaudLn1SpHrWmM4aAlxdfjv_8bpHuHJrcD0mhm6z9pRFGl2xRHQutL_g4M0fTo7RoqaluhyNbOyxsYh4BjJMJdSIdX2LMpUAR-66MSCyzFcbdvYE0YQsgZAg9flntLhxYjJYOK6bHD4Ri339DrKFZhfhyPV51xVM_4-IK5iXIL_OQ3lqcM4FvsGERvxYd_WcDqToizx2ClL_CVC2TQiyt2Vd2am5oCTxDYZGn3gqInKwpswEYKVym56AAbYhI-EpeW3124dv43f_C8KPmAUoMLuYYIf95R1TI-Rp-5G4_AE=w554-h832-no

Feb 23 19 10:08 am Link

Retoucher

Mike Needham Retouching

Posts: 385

Cheltenham, England, United Kingdom

It's all very subjective obviously, but for my taste the skin seems overworked and a little 'plasticky' - can I ask what your process is for the retouch? (especially the skin). If I had to guess I would say you have used a high pass type of move or perhaps split frequency as in the first image there seems to have been 'peach fuzz' introduced in the hairline to the left.

It's always a matter of opinion and you certainly show a lot of promise in my view, however ultimately you are the arbiter of your own taste.

Your pencil artwork is f*c*ing amazing though and your more recent retouches have obviously advanced your skill levels.

Jul 09 19 09:29 am Link