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Model

camerongalbreath

Posts: 3

Birmingham, Alabama, US

Unfortunately I haven't been able to post all of my best photos on Model Mayhem because they are too large. I have more photos on instagram @cameron_galbreath but it would be appreciated to get feedback on my portfolio that I have up on here or both.

Jan 12 20 03:19 pm Link

Photographer

Garry k

Posts: 30128

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

You are a Handsome Young Man

You just need to work with better and better Photographers

also unless the Fashion ( or something else about the photo ) is exceptional don’t post more than a couple of photos of that look

Finally -You need some good Headshots

Oh and I think your avatar is your best shot - beautiful lighting

Jan 14 20 08:46 am Link

Photographer

Rough Hewn Images

Posts: 52

Salem, Oregon, US

A few good ones in the set.  As mentioned, find and possibly pay for a better photographer(s) that will be attentive to lighting and overall composition.  You could see about finding local photographers that have some experience and do a couple of TFP sessions to see what you can get.  Might be a few but would only be a time investment.

Completely ditch all the angled shots.  Those are fine for a personal Instagram set of pics but not for a professional presentation.

As noted above, get a good straight head shot and some clean full body shots too, not nude, just full length clean shots.

Apr 02 20 11:23 am Link