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Model

Andiel

Posts: 122

Reading, England, United Kingdom

Hi there, I did an outdoor shoot recently and wanted a bit of feedback on my portfolio, specifically the first 4 photos. Are they all worth keeping in or should any be deleted?

Thanks.

Jan 24 20 03:22 pm Link

Photographer

JT Life Photography

Posts: 624

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Andiel wrote:
Hi there, I did an outdoor shoot recently and wanted a bit of feedback on my portfolio, specifically the first 4 photos. Are they all worth keeping in or should any be deleted?

Thanks.

Going left to right.
I'm not keen on #1 and #2.
I like #3 and #4.
JT

Jan 24 20 04:46 pm Link

Photographer

Acraftman1313

Posts: 223

Greensboro, North Carolina, US

1,3,4 are my favs.

Jan 24 20 06:04 pm Link

Photographer

Nor-Cal Photography

Posts: 3718

Walnut Creek, California, US

JT Life Photography wrote:
I like #3 and #4.

+1

Jan 24 20 09:34 pm Link

Model

Andiel

Posts: 122

Reading, England, United Kingdom

Thanks all

Feb 03 20 09:36 am Link

Hair Stylist

rick lesser

Posts: 1116

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

Over all I like your other stuff much better.  With that said, the first your makeup is off.  Your skin doesn't look it's best and the liner should never stand out from the lipstick.  I would have done a more clean look given the setting. The second, your fingers are not attractive on one hand.  It looks like you are missing one. The 3rd and 4th. I would have loved to see the last one as a full body shot.  I don't think the crop is doing you any justice.  If I had to pick one from those last two you need only one, you have the same outfit on in both probably keep the 4th until you can replace it with something better.  Less is more.  Rick

Feb 06 20 12:19 am Link