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Model

Heather LeStabbityDeath

Posts: 22617

Alexandria, Virginia, US

I'm alternative! Me please?

Nov 30 08 03:58 pm Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

XlcrMoon wrote:
what do u think of me Wenchi?

https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/081112/14/491b318826287_m.jpg
This is absolutely amazing.
I don't understand why it's not your avatar.

Nov 30 08 04:02 pm Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

Heather LeStabbityDeath wrote:
I'm alternative! Me please?

https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080722/16/4886499d1ac63_m.jpg

This shows how awesome you are.  If you had an after picture with the needle in your tongue with a similar expression (with a twinkle of gratification) it would make it even better.

Nov 30 08 04:07 pm Link

Model

Alia Noree

Posts: 69

Tours, Centre, France

me?big_smile

Nov 30 08 04:14 pm Link

Model

M E Grace

Posts: 22

PARSIPPANY, New Jersey, US

If your still going, I'd love to know what you think!

Nov 30 08 04:14 pm Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

Alia Noree wrote:
me?big_smile

I love how vulnerable you look here.
https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/081112/13/491b1ad3d5bd5_m.jpg
You almost look like you're in severe emotional pain, but your body is completely numb.

Nov 30 08 04:15 pm Link

Model

Irina Banita

Posts: 189

Wenchi wrote:
I'll critique you.

I'm not promising anything good.

I'll do one picture of my choice and maybe something else.

-wench

Nov 30 08 04:16 pm Link

Model

Irina Banita

Posts: 189

Wenchi wrote:

I love how vulnerable you look here.
https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/081112/13/491b1ad3d5bd5_m.jpg
You almost look like you're in severe emotional pain, but your body is completely numb.

Nov 30 08 04:16 pm Link

Model

Irina Banita

Posts: 189

M E Grace wrote:
If your still going, I'd love to know what you think!

Nov 30 08 04:16 pm Link

Model

Irina Banita

Posts: 189

Wenchi wrote:

https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080722/16/4886499d1ac63_m.jpg

This shows how awesome you are.  If you had an after picture with the needle in your tongue with a similar expression (with a twinkle of gratification) it would make it even better.

Nov 30 08 04:16 pm Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

M E Grace wrote:
If your still going, I'd love to know what you think!

Less studio
https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080930/21/48e2d13b2320f_m.jpg
More black and whites.

You should spice it up a bit somehow.  Get more emotion flowing.

Nov 30 08 04:17 pm Link

Model

Irina Banita

Posts: 189

Alia Noree wrote:
me?big_smile

Nov 30 08 04:17 pm Link

Model

Irina Banita

Posts: 189

Heather LeStabbityDeath wrote:
I'm alternative! Me please?

Nov 30 08 04:17 pm Link

Model

Irina Banita

Posts: 189

Alia Noree wrote:
me?big_smile

Nov 30 08 04:17 pm Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

Irina Banita wrote:

You aren't alternative
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/081116/09/49202ddf7c90a_m.jpg
But I love how crazed you look here.

You have the potential if you've got the balls.

Why so many quotes without any text?

Nov 30 08 04:18 pm Link

Model

M E Grace

Posts: 22

PARSIPPANY, New Jersey, US

Thanks! Awaiting some pics from a gore shoot, I think that will help spice it up.

Nov 30 08 04:23 pm Link

Model

Lady Rhiannon Victoria

Posts: 291

Norfolk, Virginia, US

I'm up for it!! ^_^

Nov 30 08 04:24 pm Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

Synthicide wrote:
I'm up for it!! ^_^

I like the style...
but the expressions in your face are all the same
you don't use your eyes and you hide them.

Bring your hair out of your face.
https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080127/19/479d1c0458439_m.jpg
Toss this.  It won't get you any work.
https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080127/18/479d196d854ea_m.jpg
This is good.  You do look very stiff and posed however.

Loosen up!  You'll do FANTASTIC if you make some minor changes.  Get better photogs as well.  I understand you have to work your way up...it's hard.

You don't want to look the same as every other hot topic goth walking down the street.  It's so over done and boring.

Nov 30 08 04:29 pm Link

Model

The_Siren

Posts: 13

Alameda, California, US

Wenchi wrote:

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080313/13/47d9681c5785f_m.jpg
You have absolutely amazing facial expressions.  Use them more!  Your avatar is great as well.

Thank you! most people only talk about the one with the fence. it's nice to get some perspective on my other shots. especially the zombie one. its a candid :p

Nov 30 08 05:26 pm Link

Photographer

Grace Prater

Posts: 106

Nicholasville, Kentucky, US

I'm game.

Nov 30 08 05:31 pm Link

Photographer

Grace Prater

Posts: 106

Nicholasville, Kentucky, US

Nov 30 08 05:31 pm Link

Model

Layne D'Angelo

Posts: 138

Dallas, Texas, US

You still going? I'd love your feedback!

Nov 30 08 06:07 pm Link

Model

N o v a DELETED

Posts: 3457

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

what about me? smile

Nov 30 08 06:09 pm Link

Model

Sarah Slaykitty

Posts: 2480

Tucson, Arizona, US

Id love to hear what you have to say.

Nov 30 08 06:11 pm Link

Model

Bella vonBlue

Posts: 2

Los Angeles, California, US

Okay.  Go ahead and do me.

Nov 30 08 06:17 pm Link

Model

Mischief Vixen

Posts: 5734

Toledo, Ohio, US

Do I qualify?

Nov 30 08 07:24 pm Link

Model

Nori Zay

Posts: 12279

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Anything good to say about me?

Nov 30 08 07:42 pm Link

Model

Deanna Deadly

Posts: 4469

Chicago, Illinois, US

Would love to know your opinion smile

Nov 30 08 08:07 pm Link

Model

T Dreams

Posts: 19

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Wenchi wrote:

You should be a rabid vampire.  It would work well for you.  All of your pictures on your end are good, but you need to mix it up, get out of the studio!

Thanks, working on it.  Have a few pics out of doors, but the lighting wasn't right and the pics didn't turn out to suit me.  Will work on the vampire thing - good idea.  (slurp!)

Nov 30 08 10:00 pm Link

Model

noelle mouse

Posts: 762

Los Angeles, California, US

Please oh, please, have your way with me!!!

Dec 01 08 12:03 am Link

Model

Eva I

Posts: 10

Hanover, New Hampshire, US

You still doing it? Can I get a go? ^.^

Dec 01 08 12:41 am Link

Photographer

Bleu Fetish Videos

Posts: 26

Hackensack, New Jersey, US

Wenchi wrote:

You rock my socks hands down

You could've done nothing better in this picture
https://mayhem-photos.s3.amazonaws.com/070128/23/45bd7f45182e4_m.jpg
Your eyes are beautiful and scream in the perfect way.

This is one of my favorite images on MM... nice thread btw wink

Dec 01 08 12:49 am Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

Grace Prater wrote:
I'm game.

You don't have anything alternative in your port...

I'd critique something if you did, but there's nothing.

Dec 01 08 02:49 am Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

Layne D'Angelo wrote:
You still going? I'd love your feedback!

I guess I'm just really into zombies or something, but I just love this picture.  it's so utterly graphic without being blatantly erotic.  I love it.
https://img3.modelmayhem.com/060329/07/442a8f43c4d5b_m.jpg

Dec 01 08 02:52 am Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

MeganGardner wrote:
what about me? smile

This is the best way to spend a lazy summer day.
https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080628/01/4865cb01db80a_m.jpg
You're fantastic, if I ever get the chance to work with you I'm going to snatch it up.

Dec 01 08 02:56 am Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

Slaykitty wrote:
Id love to hear what you have to say.

If only your eyes were open here with a cat like look on your face.  It would make it perfect.
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/081027/15/49061a5ba8218_m.jpg
The feeling emanating off of this picture is amazing however.  You look so gratified.

Dec 01 08 02:59 am Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

Bella vonBlue wrote:
Okay.  Go ahead and do me.

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/081129/00/4930d9991d37d_m.jpg
This is so sensual in such a sad way.  I'm crying with your captivation here.

Dec 01 08 03:02 am Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

Mischief Vixen wrote:
Do I qualify?

This is so close to home for me it gave me goosebumps.
https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080929/02/48e07945f275a_m.jpg
I've got body dismorphic disorder (in an opposite way than most), and every time I look in the mirror without makeup on I look like a dying cancer patient.  Modeling is my way of telling my psyche "fuck off" so I can acknowledge how beautiful of a person I am when I do good and help people.
This picture just says so much.

Dec 01 08 03:07 am Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

T Dreams wrote:

Thanks, working on it.  Have a few pics out of doors, but the lighting wasn't right and the pics didn't turn out to suit me.  Will work on the vampire thing - good idea.  (slurp!)

Make sure you get a photographer who has used stage blood and had it look good in the photos.  Make it look as crazy as possible.  When I mean rabid I mean spitting and drooling blood as well as looking hot with it.

Dec 01 08 03:10 am Link

Model

Wenchi

Posts: 678

San Francisco, California, US

Nori Zay Nishi wrote:
Anything good to say about me?

I love love love your work.
https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/081126/09/492d5b671805a_m.jpg
If only you had a knife just barely sticking into the photo near your chest.  It would be great.  Your expression is priceless.  It's like that little girl "uh oh" face.

Dec 01 08 03:12 am Link