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Photographer
Duran Photography
Posts: 88

Hey guys,

I will critique your port in exchange for critique.

I will also list any potential list shots if you will do the same

first 20
togs or models
Sep 11 09 08:34 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mickey Rountree
Posts: 125

So let's do this already!
Sep 11 09 08:39 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Harbor M
Posts: 49

Sounds great!!
Sep 11 09 08:40 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jessica Rose Fuller
Posts: 11

Eh, I know my port needs some help...but hit me anyway
Sep 11 09 08:41 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mickey Rountree
Posts: 125

Overall I like your port. A couple of things that are just my opinion:

#8 is a bit dark - particularly toward the right side. Open up the shadows some.

I am not a fan of unusual makeup like in 5, 7 9 14, but they are well photographed.

I like your avatar, #1, but I would like to see less lens flare. Again it's personal taste, some like flare and do it intentionally.

My personal favorite is #3. I like the pose and the expressions.
Sep 11 09 08:50 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jessica Rose Fuller
Posts: 11

I love your models in the street photo, and the Gucci one...it would be really cool to have some interacton btw the models or some guys in the shots...that's my opinion!
Sep 11 09 08:50 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Duran Photography
Posts: 88

dont forget to critique /list me to (if listable etc)


Mickey

first 2 lines of your port and I'm already happy that youre versatile.
A mix of legs, faces, and full bodies.

I don't like the angle of the telescope shot. the idea is there, but her head is not in proportion to her body because of the angle.

I can see its in lists, but im not a fan of it at all

The toplessasian lady, the pic shows your skill,but her face is like 'can you put your pants on so I can sleep already?'

im sure you have better imges.

great photoshopping with the sword and petals

added the petal shot to my lists

too much blur in the pool shot?
the pool table leg is right next to her leg, so should have the same focus.

good composition though.

witch shot = list










Harbour May
for a novice = not bad.

The first thing I noticed about your port is that your images are all dull colorwise. they aren't bright etc

great range of shots though, and you look good in all of them.
listed the mirror and hat shots

the hat shot is veyr 70s 'abba'
i really like it

listed the 'crim' shot too!










Jessica
once again, someshots lack brightness

the irst to jump out at me is the last on the 2nd row
excellent light, composition and pose
says a lot about confident women
your legs ruin the shot though.
are they really veiny naturally? the photographer should have made them a uniform color to start with.
its a stunning shot though besides that

listed

last image is great too
like u walked in on somebody doing it!
listed

your face has good bones
do more shoots
more shoots more shoots
Sep 11 09 08:50 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Heather S Kennedy
Posts: 281

I love the variety in your port -- plus the colors are so vibrant and images are crisp and clear.  The one thing that bothers me though is your logo; it's really pretty distracting, especially in photos #5 and #7.  Overall though you have some really creative stuff!  smile
Sep 11 09 08:55 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
EA Photographics
Posts: 9,994

Count me in please!

I like your use of bold colors and bold compositions.  Some of the post work appears, to me, to be a bit much, but I like your creativity and the way you present your images overall.
Sep 11 09 08:56 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Zhi Feng
Posts: 945

Me please (:
Sep 11 09 08:56 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Paul Tirado Photography
Posts: 1,304

Take a look. Thanks for your time.
Sep 11 09 08:58 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jessica Rose Fuller
Posts: 11

Most of my port is not retouched...the downside of TF CD's....
Sep 11 09 09:00 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
GARY HINDS
Posts: 270

IM GAME
GARY
Sep 11 09 09:04 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Refraction Studio
Posts: 125

Please let me know what you think.
Thanks
Sep 11 09 09:06 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
GARY HINDS
Posts: 270

YES I like your portfolio 100% its not something i shoot at all. but it does catch your eye. good work
gary
Sep 11 09 09:06 am  Link  Quote 
Model
-Rachele-
Posts: 25

Sep 11 09 09:08 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Trouble Shooter
Posts: 249

let me know what you think and I will do the same!
Sep 11 09 09:09 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Kess M
Posts: 6,719

Sep 11 09 09:11 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Refraction Studio
Posts: 125

A lot of variety and different style in your portfolio.
I personally like 2 and 10 the best as that is more the style that I am accustomed to.
Overall a very nice portfolio.
Sep 11 09 09:11 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Philip Chain
Posts: 17

very solid port you have. i actually think the avatar is one of your weaker pictures. a lot of lens flare and i don't it to be an exciting shot.

photos 13, 14 and 17 are my favorites. the make up around the eyes on 14 especially stands out. all 3 id call list worthy.
Sep 11 09 09:11 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Paul Reiffer
Posts: 169

OK...
Sep 11 09 09:12 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Nor-Cal Photography
Posts: 576

OK, I'll play.

http://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090526/19/4a1ca21370144_m.jpg

Super cute. Just love the "wardrobe", makeup, pose, expression, etc. Just so well done!

For suggestions - Your B&W has great contrast. You might try more of this.
Sep 11 09 09:13 am  Link  Quote 
Model
James Wani
Posts: 91

Hi ...  sure go for it : )
Sep 11 09 09:14 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Trouble Shooter
Posts: 249

I like the intensity and colors of your work a lot... One thing I noticed is that almost every pic in your port has the model(s) making direct eye contact with the camera... While it definitely strengthens the connection with the viewer, you may want to mix it up a bit to add to the diversity...
Sep 11 09 09:14 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Trouble Shooter
Posts: 249

Was it something I said? lol
Sep 11 09 06:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
ElizaMaria
Posts: 230

Am I in time?!
Sep 11 09 06:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Aesthete Studios
Posts: 1,829

Perhaps I made it.
Sep 11 09 07:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
G-B
Posts: 120

Oh I hope I made it, I'd love to hear what you have to say!
Sep 11 09 07:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
PhillipPhotography
Posts: 917

I make it?  Checking out your port!
Sep 11 09 09:17 pm  Link  Quote 
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