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Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Please refer to the NEW thread.
Min 18 and over I dont review/critique minors.

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...25%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...25%
(3)Posing and agility factor...25%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...25%


Total Score:

Let's Roll ... >>>
Oct 09 09 05:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Nnnnos
Posts: 52
Abbeville, Alabama, US


me please, bored waiting to leave!
Oct 09 09 05:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
TILL H S
Posts: 1,699
London, England, United Kingdom


http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090423/20/49f132fbb1914_m.jpg

this is my fav, for sure

there is a lot of attention to detail, which is great...and i can tell that you direct well...
most of your models also look very comfortable, which i like a lot

it's very upbeat, which is refreshing

i wish you were brave enough to shoot guys more often smile
Oct 09 09 06:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Yahya wrote:
me please, bored waiting to leave!

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...17% - Show more skin and dare to expand.
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...20% - Great smile suited to lifestyle stock photo or commercial catalogue work.
(3)Posing and agility factor...17%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...15%-Show more versatility through some daring out of the box concepts your port is limited and is too conservative.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=10554892&group_id=&ua=
Total Score:69%

Oct 09 09 06:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Laura A Shodire
Posts: 1,154
Rancho Cucamonga, California, US


moi? smile
Oct 09 09 06:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Dekilah
Posts: 4,857
Detroit, Michigan, US


Me please

Edit: I'm in love with most of the wardrobe you've used. I also like that you have both black and white and color in your port. And it looks like you know how to play to the strengths of each one. You don't have a single photo I don't like.
Oct 09 09 06:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Zandrea
Posts: 2,304
New York, New York, US


Im in

I love your portfolio. the images are so soft and delicate. It is exactly what any bride wants from a photographer.
You have a few photos, that if you pulled from your portfolio it would make you look like a professional.
No offense but I think think this one is quite tacky compared to the rest of your work.

http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … aeebfd.jpg

Also the one with the red dress is very pretty, but its completely different from what you have.

This is gorgeous! I want this for my book! Great work!

http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090317/06/49bfa66661899_m.jpg
Oct 09 09 06:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


TILL H  wrote:
http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090423/20/49f132fbb1914_m.jpg

this is my fav, for sure

there is a lot of attention to detail, which is great...and i can tell that you direct well...
most of your models also look very comfortable, which i like a lot

it's very upbeat, which is refreshing

i wish you were brave enough to shoot guys more often smile

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape factor...17% - Try shooting from the ground up more to amplify the height issue and to bring out the boldness in capture.
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...16%
(3)Posing and agility factor...18% - Based on your height you work with what you have well.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...22%
- Good diversity shows you are not limited to a particular genre or style.

Total Score:73%

Oct 09 09 06:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Laura A Shodire wrote:
moi? smile

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...18%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...16%
(3)Posing and agility factor...20%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...22%


Total Score:76%

Oct 09 09 06:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
TILL H S
Posts: 1,699
London, England, United Kingdom


Jonexpo wrote:

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape factor...17% - Try shooting from the ground up more to amplify the height issue and to bring out the boldness in capture.
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...16%
(3)Posing and agility factor...18% - Based on your height you work with what you have well.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...22%
- Good diversity shows you are not limited to a particular genre or style.

Total Score:73%

in school, that would be a low "C"... ugh....interesting, though.......thanx for the input !  smile

Oct 09 09 06:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
LeAnnaMarie
Posts: 90
Fort Worth, Texas, US


I wanna play smile
Oct 09 09 06:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Dekilah wrote:
Me please

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...17%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...17%-Too many repetitive lack lustre expressions would love to see a smile here or there to invite the viewer in more and to entice an emotion. 
(3)Posing and agility factor...17% - Once again too repetitive although your overall material is nice.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...19%-Although well suited to artistic nudity dont limit yourself to that style,you would also suit a no of themes eg pin-up or studio portraiture.


Total Score:70%

Oct 09 09 06:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jessica Lynn87
Posts: 129
Fort Collins, Colorado, US


do me please! i enjoyed everything in your port, but this is my favorite:
http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090730/00/4a714ae8b36bc.jpg
i love the models you choose and how you capture their natural beauty. You are clearly a master of lighting, which though i'm not a photographer, I'd say is probably somewhere around 60% of a good shot. You have a beautiful collection of work!
Oct 09 09 06:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jennifer Barker
Posts: 8,009
Houston, Arkansas, US


okay .. raises hand  wink
Oct 09 09 06:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Dekilah
Posts: 4,857
Detroit, Michigan, US


Jonexpo wrote:

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...17%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...17%-Too many repetitive lack lustre expressions would love to see a smile here or there to invite the viewer in more and to entice an emotion. 
(3)Posing and agility factor...17% - Once again too repetitive although your overall material is nice.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...19%-Although well suited to artistic nudity dont limit yourself to that style,you would also suit a no of themes eg pin-up or studio portraiture.


Total Score:70%

Thank you for your opinion. I work with what I have. Art nudes is what is available to me right now. I've done other work, but it's never as good as the art nudes. I'd love to try pin-up, but I don't have the resources right now. If I could find a good MUA and hair stylist, plus somewhere to get wardrobe, I'd be set. Knoxville just really isn't that great for any of that stuff. I do have a clothed port but since this is my nude port, you're naturally going to see, well, art nudes.

Oct 09 09 06:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Steve T W
Posts: 33
Grand Rapids, Michigan, US


I'm not your traditional model, but what do you think?  Should I keep at it or hang it up and get a real job??
Oct 09 09 06:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Zandrea wrote:
Im in

I love your portfolio. the images are so soft and delicate. It is exactly what any bride wants from a photographer.
You have a few photos, that if you pulled from your portfolio it would make you look like a professional.
No offense but I think think this one is quite tacky compared to the rest of your work.

http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … aeebfd.jpg

Also the one with the red dress is very pretty, but its completely different from what you have.

This is gorgeous! I want this for my book! Great work!

http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090317/06/49bfa66661899_m.jpg

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...20% - Nice fluidity and presentation you are aware of what physically translates well onto a captured image
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...16%-Why so serious always nice to show the lighter side with a smile here or there to balance out your port...
(3)Posing and agility factor...19%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...20%-Nice and diverse however would throw in a few thought provoking implied's to spice things up.


Total Score:75%

Oct 09 09 06:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


LeAnnaMarie wrote:
I wanna play smile

Oct 09 09 06:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
The Epic Syla Simone
Posts: 84
Norfolk, Virginia, US


ME PLEASE
Oct 09 09 06:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
The Epic Syla Simone
Posts: 84
Norfolk, Virginia, US


Syla Simone wrote:
ME PLEASE

Oct 09 09 06:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Jessica Lynn87 wrote:
do me please! i enjoyed everything in your port, but this is my favorite:
http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090730/00/4a714ae8b36bc.jpg
i love the models you choose and how you capture their natural beauty. You are clearly a master of lighting, which though i'm not a photographer, I'd say is probably somewhere around 60% of a good shot. You have a beautiful collection of work!

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...17% - Cute
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...20% - Nice smile great energy would be accentuated by good lighting & photography.
(3)Posing and agility factor...18%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...17% - Is somewhat limited atm but will surely develop with time.


Total Score:72%

Oct 09 09 06:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
QuietAsKept
Posts: 5,935
Baltimore, Maryland, US


Me?
Oct 09 09 06:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Jennifer Barker wrote:
okay .. raises hand  wink

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...21%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...20% - Love the brooding eyes and encapsulating depth but would love to see a giggle here or there to show the human lighthearted element.
(3)Posing and agility factor...20%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...19%


Total Score:80%

Oct 09 09 06:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


littledubs wrote:
I'm not your traditional model, but what do you think?  Should I keep at it or hang it up and get a real job??

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape factor...20%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...20%
(3)Posing and agility factor...17% - Too repetitive try mixing it up a bit.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...15% - Once again too much of the same conservative style more diversity will come with time and experience.


Total Score:72%

Oct 09 09 06:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jennifer Barker
Posts: 8,009
Houston, Arkansas, US


Jonexpo wrote:

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...21%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...20% - Love the brooding eyes and encapsulating depth but would love to see a giggle here or there to show the human lighthearted element.
(3)Posing and agility factor...20%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...19%


Total Score:80%

Thank You  smile

Oct 09 09 06:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Syla Simone wrote:

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...20%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...18%
(3)Posing and agility factor...17%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...15% - Not too much material to critique i would seek out strong photographers to bring out your potential the pics in your port are poorly lit and dont do your look justice.


Total Score:70%

Oct 09 09 06:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Dana LL
Posts: 576
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Me please smile
Oct 09 09 07:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Dana LL wrote:
Me please smile

Sure...:-)

Oct 09 09 08:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


MsDarlyn wrote:
Me?

Cant do a detailed critique with only 2 images...Nice smile though.

Oct 09 09 09:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
zhiffy
Posts: 1,208
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


me pls (:
Oct 09 09 09:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Amanda Lentini
Posts: 173
St Louis, Saskatchewan, Canada


Your port is amazing.  I love the models and your pictures.

This http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090814/05/4a855f0aed2cd_m.jpg is my favorite picture because there is such care and emotion emanating from it.
Oct 09 09 09:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Migdalia B
Posts: 771
Kaysville, Utah, US


Jonexpo wrote:
Simply critique my port honestly and i'll rate you based on the following criteria:

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...25%
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...25%
(3)Posing and agility factor...25%
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...25%


Total Score:

still up for some welcomed judging?

Oct 09 09 09:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Mitzu Robinson
Posts: 306
Santa Cruz, California, US


Um...I'm thinking I don't want to know my score....but, I'd love to hear it anyways. I'm a new model, if that explains anything. ( : So, lots to improve, I'm assuming.
Oct 09 09 09:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Martha Mae
Posts: 1,113
Stevensville, Montana, US


http://www.cartoonstock.com/newscartoons/cartoonists/swl/lowres/swln78l.jpg   umm... What they say tongue

Edit: As for critiquing your portfolio, I must say amazing. Nice choice of models and props and backgrounds, lighting... I could go on!
Oct 09 09 09:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Bethany Efaw
Posts: 230
Portland, Oregon, US


me please!big_smile

Your work is stunning, your avi is gorgeous, fav!!
Oct 09 09 09:33 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ashley Van Schoonhoven
Posts: 27
BOISE, Idaho, US


me please left a tag and comments you have an amazing port
Oct 09 09 09:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
erikaaa
Posts: 42
Cary, North Carolina, US


TILL H  wrote:
http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090423/20/49f132fbb1914_m.jpg

this is my fav, for sure

This is also my favorite. I really love your portfolio. It's beautiful. I would like to see more color, though. Don't get me wrong, your b&w images are gorgeous.. but so are are your colorful ones, and there seem to be quite a bit less of the latter.

Would love to hear what you think.

Oct 09 09 09:44 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Zhi Feng wrote:
me pls (:

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...15% - I feel you are holding back in your shoots. the ability to come out of your shell and scream sass and confidence will come with time and experience.
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...16%
(3)Posing and agility factor...16% - Too much repetition atm.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...15% - Your material is limited atm and could do with some more outdoor shots with varying locations.


Total Score:62%

Oct 09 09 09:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
JennyL
Posts: 71
Chicago, Illinois, US


me please
Oct 09 09 09:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jonexpo
Posts: 2,114
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Amanda Lentini wrote:
Your port is amazing.  I love the models and your pictures.

This http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090814/05/4a855f0aed2cd_m.jpg is my favorite picture because there is such care and emotion emanating from it.

(1)Aesthetics Body Shape & spunk factor...17% - Strong nice and confident.
(2)Photogenic Face expression & Smile factor...17% - More personality needs to be conveyed to draw in the viewer.
(3)Posing and agility factor...18% - Nice nudity element but try some alternate angles which will need to be discussed with your photographers prior.
(4)Creative diversity and conceptual versatility...20% - Daring and bold,would show more diversity with natural outdoor full length clothed themes and a few headshots to appreciate the facial element.


Total Score:72%

Oct 09 09 09:52 pm  Link  Quote 
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