Wow.. this is in a class of its own. I love that it establishes an idea/concept of motherly love and how she cherishes the child, who is comfortable in her arm... words can't describe it completely, making this photograph even more special.
In contrast, this says here she is, not more, not less. Light's harsh, flat and doesn't establish anything, as most of your work. I see you got great potential w/ above image and wish you'd spend more time preparing, making images than snap.
mitsu_model wrote: I'd like to know you opinion, please
Love it. In fact, I always thought tilted cam is overdone, but very well done here, giving impression of downhill rolling, which is very appropriate in this case. Love your pose as well expression. Love it.
Well I feel this is your weakest image. Light's flat, straight on. Setting's busy and confusing w/ deer head etc... Like your work so far and would love to see more.
This is my fav because it seemingly says something. Selective color is way overdone and wish composition not cutting the violin. Not sure about the concept, but it seems to contrast between you & the instrument. Still, an interesting image.
Love it.
Another that I really like.
Another that I really like. The contrast in tones, pose establishes drama and got viewer to wonder what it is that you're looking at. Really like it.
So much potential, great to create a hippy-ish image in blk/white, color etc... Don't like it as is.
LOL. Kinda like your port so far knowing you can do more.
Saw your port before and really like this shot; very casual and strong. Would love to see your simple image w/ personality shining through. Maybe, some w/ a smile as of now, haven't seen your teeth
Saw your port before and really like this shot; very casual and strong. Would love to see your simple image w/ personality shining through. Maybe, some w/ a smile as of now, haven't seen your teeth
Thank you! Aaaand, I actually did a shoot last week with images I should be seeing soon. ALL teeth!
First set, I feel the light's little low and doesn't really set a mood. In pp, not sure what you did beside localized contrast, as in high pass. Also, I found the dark hair really bothers me as they are not lit and the background's pipe, horizontal line, drips too much in the way.
2nd set, I feel although the light accentuate her body, her face's in the dark, unsuccesfully competing w/ lighter background. W/ darker tone, you need to maximize direct reflection to increase lightness w/out changing exposure. In pp, not sure to what you did, as above.
Love your port and style, but can't help but wanting to look for something more, something w/ color, shadows, drama etc...
http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_ … d=&ua= I think you might be heading for this direction, and I really like this image. Her expression carries it well, something sad, full of drama due to contrast, but wish to see more setting involved, established, connected w/ subject.
Thanks alot. I guess this is something different, but some people didnt like the hair colour and stuff. Hard to please everyone. But yeah i personally like it too. hahaha. Thanks for your comments.
Brandon Ralph wrote: Thanks alot. I guess this is something different, but some people didnt like the hair colour and stuff. Hard to please everyone. But yeah i personally like it too. hahaha. Thanks for your comments.
Yea, the color's off but hey, "correct" is sometimes overrated
First set, I feel the light's little low and doesn't really set a mood. In pp, not sure what you did beside localized contrast, as in high pass. Also, I found the dark hair really bothers me as they are not lit and the background's pipe, horizontal line, drips too much in the way.
2nd set, I feel although the light accentuate her body, her face's in the dark, unsuccesfully competing w/ lighter background. W/ darker tone, you need to maximize direct reflection to increase lightness w/out changing exposure. In pp, not sure to what you did, as above.
Thanks for the critique. Here are some gifs to make the postprocessing more apparent:
