Ashley McMahan wrote:
What happens if I tear up? lol just a kidding

I want to see you with different hair. I dont like your expression here.


You look alien and creepy here. Your pose is bad...Your left hand is flat against the tree, and your right is dead. You lost all of your body shape. The outfit is horrible.
Bad photo. Just because you see a cool tree doesnt mean you can pose with it.


Please work on your hands. This photo rocks besides your dead hand.


...This bugs me. Do something with your face.


Delete. Did you photoshop this yourself?


THE CLAW!!! Watch out for the CLAWWWWWW! Mwahahahaha.



MM demands better photos than Myspace.


Bowed leg and THE CLAWWWWWW. Watch how red your face gets....makeup friend.


Better hair, retarded face.


You need a cooler window to pull this off. . .I enjoy the lighting...but the plastic, modern window sucks ass.

Shaun Tia wrote:

Just because you see a cool tree doesnt mean you can pose with it.

I agree with everything you said... but that line just cracked me up!

Elaine Ford wrote:
ok:)

Ive told you before, and you dont like to take the advice...Pick *one* freaking photo from each outfit.
FORCE yourself to pick the best.


This is aweful.


Cropped hand. Ditzy blonde face.


Get this stupid freaking photo out of your freaking port.
UGH. Ive told you before. TELL people on your port what shows you were in, we dont need to see some bad quality photo that makes you look aweful.


This is your best. I like that you have only one photo of this. Its niiiiicce.

Aderial wrote:
i am intrested

Are you begging for people to shoot with you?? Oh my goodness thats pathetic.

By your port, I can see why though.

The FIRST photo in your port is this:

What. The. Hell.
This is horrible.


You look so red. Work with a makeup artist and a better photog.


This is nice, I cant see much of you.


CHIN! Why is it cropped at the CHIN?! Learn makeup please.


Bleahhhhhhhhhhhhhchalk. Point your toes. Always. There arent exceptions for you.


Why are you afraid to show your toes?
Are you wearing a table cloth? Where is your left hand? What is that expression? Is that supposed to be alluring?


Neck is VERY important as a model. Do. Not. Do. This. Ever. Again.


Sad?

18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … up_id=&ua=
Your armpits and stomach look weird. I dont like your breasts.
Why are you wearing a fat lady's denim skirt?
You have one leg.
You lost neck and added chins.


This is nice except for the foot coming out of your head and cropped fingers.

18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … up_id=&ua=
Point. Your. Toes.
Having your arms above your head flattens your chest. Keep that in mind.

Im done here.

Tyrone Lavigne wrote:
What do you say?

First off get rid of the folder. You have ten photos. I can handle looking at them all at once. Trust me. Im a big girl.

Your choice for avi is terrible.

Your photos can stand alone, I would advise straying away your safe zone. Pick the strongest photo.


This is a step up from a Myspace picture.


Please, Ive told you before. Get rid of this.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … =76518&ua=
You should know to direct your models to point their toes. This series doesnt work. At all.



Maybe you should shoot men more....

Renagade Graphics GFX wrote:
OK i'll bite

Your port makes me want to be racist. This is ghetto.


This is so fucking horrible.

I have no words to describe how horrible and disgusting this photo is. It literally makes us ill.

18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua=
Did you learn photoshop from a 5-year-old?
No...they would know better than that.

I cant say anything else.

We are thoroughly terrified by your port.

Shaun Tia wrote:
First off get rid of the folder. You have ten photos. I can handle looking at them all at once. Trust me. Im a big girl.

Your choice for avi is terrible.

Your photos can stand alone, I would advise straying away your safe zone. Pick the strongest photo.


This is a step up from a Myspace picture.


Please, Ive told you before. Get rid of this.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … =76518&ua=
You should know to direct your models to point their toes. This series doesnt work. At all.



Maybe you should shoot men more....

Interesting advice.  Deleted a couple of the ones you don't like.  About the folder, I only use it to separate the older work from new.  Hopefully will have enough to completely delete and forget about it in a couple months, and hopefully will have some new stuff for an avatar in a couple days.  Unfortunately there aren't many male fashion type models here   Thanks for the critique

Crystal Quintero wrote:
I do take things to heart and wear my heart on my sleeve from time to time (damned whoremones!) but for y'all...I shall put on the coat of armour...

....whoremones? Are you serious?

Are you calling yourself a whore? You know its spelled "hormones" right?

Anyway...to your port....

Ooooohhhhweeewwww. Is our first impression.


This is aweful for you. Fat and midget.


What the hell is this doing in your port?


This is probably the best look for you.


Mad Whoremones


wtf.

DystopianStudios wrote:
Rip away.

18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua=
Fix your fade.
This wouldve been awesome with some non-fucked makeup.

All I see is a bunch of cliche stuff thats been done a million times over. Youve just done it more crappy.

Try something more original.

Some of your stuff is almost impressive.

Shaun Tia wrote:
....whoremones? Are you serious?

Are you calling yourself a whore? You know its spelled "hormones" right?

Anyway...to your port....

Ooooohhhhweeewwww. Is our first impression.


This is aweful for you. Fat and midget.


What the hell is this doing in your port?


This is probably the best look for you.


Mad Whoremones


wtf.

I do know how to spell it. It's kind of a running joke...that we become mean due to hormones as we get older. NM, I know the majority on here are super young compared to me. So ... I will correct that spelling!   Speaking of which, it's spelled "Awful" not aweful.

I will also update accordingly - per your advice!

Thanks!

RMT Photography wrote:
Go for it. Critique away!

Orange. Blurry. Cropped to shit.

When I look into a port, I expect to see only the best of what you can do. If this is in your best, I would never work with you.

I dont like the majority of your pictures.

Anzalone Photography wrote:
OK - I'm in ...

99 photos...and not one of them is properly exposed.

Grade: D-


What demographic are you trying to attract with this photo?

Creepy.

SunsetBlack Photography wrote:
alright.. next months marks my 1 year of shooting...

let me have it.

Youre goddamn grounded.

Selective color.
n00b.

Not a good picture, regardless.


Nice plastic skin. (Note the sarcasm.)


This shows how bad you are. If you want to book people, I would delete it.


Good lighting, but I am afraid to enjoy this photo...what the hell is the concept?


We dont need to know what you look like, especially with a shitty photo.

Ronnie_Smith wrote:
I hide behind the camera...no one knows who I am. Fire away!

Shoot something other than Asians?

Learn to crop.
Learn to light.
And get rid of the snapshot like photos. They dont belong in a professional's port.

TrackBelle wrote:
I'm in

I love you but I hate this photo

Overblown to hell and it doesnt work.


Okay...Youre holding an Xbox controller...cool??
Bad quality photo. It sucks. A lot.

You have too many headshots. Okay we get it, youre cute. Pick your best.


This is scary. Looks like you want to come kill me.

Shaun Tia wrote:

Shoot something other than Asians?

Learn to crop.
Learn to light.
And get rid of the snapshot like photos. They dont belong in a professional's port.

There are actually three Latinas in there   Thanks for your time and hope you feel better!

Michael Magers wrote:
I will throw in my hat in this.

I dont like your black and whites.


The shadows in this photo suck.

Youre good.

Jalanis Fishe wrote:
lets do it

Foot fetish shot?
This does absolutely nothing for your port. Delete.


Ditzy face, cropped foot, and short legs.


Meh..take that as a compliment


This is horrible.
Do you think you look good here?


Short legs, distracting bg.

Etc. Etc.

Shaun Tia wrote:


Foot fetish shot?
This does absolutely nothing for your port. Delete.


Ditzy face, cropped foot, and short legs.


Meh..take that as a compliment


This is horrible.
Do you think you look good here?


Short legs, distracting bg.

Etc. Etc.

thank you. i was expection more brutality but whatev

Maren Hardy wrote:
Wow! Some real honesty, I'm a bit shocked. Your 2 cents please?

This makes your thigh look so huge.


Stupidly creepy.


Myspace.


No place in your port for this.


This is good.


I want to like this one. But I dont.


This is cute