Miz Tina Marie wrote: come on by and let me have it. thanks the only way we ever know what we are doing wrong and how to make things better is by someone on the outside to look in. thank you for being mean and honest.
Make sure you punctuate correctly.
"I am a modeling for a little while, also been acting for a long time."
This doesnt make sense. 'I have been modeling for a little while...' would be better.
Capitalize your "I's"
Your choice for avatar is horrible. Just because you have your ass to the camera does not make it a good picture.
This doesnt make sense, its too small and low quality.
I wish you would do more like this. This is gorgeous.
I cant put into words how much I hate this.
Horrible lighting. Blech pose. The presents are wrapped like shit and arent lit well. And youre on a sheet next to a blue wall. Woot.
Why the hell would you put this in your port? There are red lines from you sitting on something, stretch marks and hair. Youll get tons of comments because its a close up of an ass. Not because its a good photo.
Youre just a guy who wants to take pictures of sexy women, thats the vibe Im sure everyone gets. Your pictures are not creative, nor are they that great. Its a port full of pictures that have already been done.
Stop shooting women in the same bed with the same rose petals. Its old.
Rio de Janeiro, Rio de Janeiro, Brazil
I'm new at this and need a good tearing into... Everyone keeps giving complements, which is nice, but I actually want to get better! And to improve it helps to know what I am doing wrong. So please, help.
ganeshphotography wrote: hit me with your best shot!!
I do not enjoy the overwhelming amount of the awkward sized headshots that you have in your port.
Your photography in itself is okay. But you should get rid of this
It is not good. Just overblown, alien-head, weird sized not goodness.
h a n n a h MARiE wrote: IM GAME. LETS PLAY. i love critiques.
Your first four photos are all same face. If you choose to keep these photos separate them so it is not as apparent.
You have too many headshots anyway.
If you want to be professional keep your Facebook photos on Facebook.
You have strong bone structure so you need to be careful about looking to masculine