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Photographer

NocoJoe

Posts: 894

Seattle, Washington, US

Sogi the Model wrote:
Doesn't look like it fits in with the rest of your photos. It's an awkward position that doesn't work. The awkwardness shows in the model's face.

Awww.  Too bad.  smile  Thanks though.

Sep 27 10 07:01 pm Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

Photos by T wrote:
damn zombies, i was ready to play.

Nothing particularly jumps out at me from your port. Sorry, not turned on!

Sep 27 10 07:03 pm Link

Model

j121

Posts: 297

Port Nelson, Rum Cay, Bahamas

cuuurious!

Sep 27 10 07:04 pm Link

Photographer

John David Studio

Posts: 1724

Fort Myers, Florida, US

Ok Sogi your evaluation please....

Sep 27 10 07:05 pm Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

Timothy Logan wrote:
Let me hear it

I can't say anything bad about any of your photos.

In a heartbeat, yes! smile

Sep 27 10 07:20 pm Link

Model

ZoeBelle

Posts: 176

Seattle, Washington, US

Well, I really need to update my portfolio.  Based on it now what do think?  Do I turn you on tongue

Sep 27 10 07:26 pm Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

David Birdsong  wrote:
Go for it

I'd be honored to work with you smile

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19050337 **18+
Submissive sexual shots like this are a turn off, but it looks like you have it in there for variety's sake. I'm not too concerned. Your work is quite impressive.

https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100821/10/4c700f3b594f5_m.jpg I really like this one.

https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090726/19/4a6d0d0341d3f_m.jpgThis one not so much. The background bothers me. I'd rather see you edit the rest of the skyline in there than those trees.

Sep 27 10 07:27 pm Link

Photographer

dgold

Posts: 10302

Pawtucket, Rhode Island, US

Sogi the Model wrote:

I already know yes. tongue

I remember you, and I remember listing one of your photos after your avatar caught my eye when I was going through friend requests. Finding a photographer I want to list is rare for me. I listed one of your saxamaphone pics.

Now... let's take a REAL look.

https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/070905/13/46deef7316134_m.jpg
You have a lot of pictures but don't NEED a lot. You have a lot of identical styles. For example, I'd pick out one of the saxophone pics that's your favorite and just use that. This one happens to be the one I like the most. I like how neither object in the picture dominates the other. They blend, and fit nicely together.

***18+***http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/4988877
My focus is more sensual than sexual. Images that scream "Sex" to me are one's that turn me off... like this one. Sexual energy is different than just a sexual pic. The line is very fine, but it's there.


There are just a couple more images that turn me off, but in total I like what I see. If you asked me, I'd say yes!

LOL...
Carly just exudes S E X !
Sexxy, sensual, beautiful and oh so desireable.
Yet, for me, CLASSIC and SCUPTURED.

I am aslo flattered.
I appreciate your insights.

Sep 27 10 07:28 pm Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

Sep 27 10 07:28 pm Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

Ryan-Bater wrote:
Am I hug worthy?
https://i633.photobucket.com/albums/uu57/Ryan-Bater/myself.jpg

Well Mister Bater (not to say Master...) I'd give you a hug!

There's an idea I've been wanting to shoot, and you seem to have a strong enough grip on retouching to pull it off.

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100724/19/4c4ba0fbedac2_m.jpg A turn-on image. Simple. Pretty. Elegant.

Nothing really turns me off, and I'd be happy to work with you if you were in the area and asked me to.

I bet you get this a lot, but... OMGLOLZLOLSLKJL YOU'RE 17???

Sep 27 10 07:35 pm Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

Chainmail Treasures wrote:
i hope i turn you on

I shoot nudes because my fashion sense sucks. Chains are cool! I'd definitely shoot in them if you'd allow me.

Sep 27 10 07:38 pm Link

Photographer

R Michael Walker

Posts: 11987

Costa Mesa, California, US

Come have a look!

Sep 27 10 07:41 pm Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

Natural_Designs wrote:
Me?  smile

Nothing really jumps out at me, but I'd be willing to listen to any ideas you had. Nothing particularly turns me on about your port.

Sep 27 10 07:44 pm Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

Craig Thomson wrote:
get some tissue

Na, I just don't think we have the same tastes. Nothing here turns me on.

Sep 27 10 07:50 pm Link

Photographer

retphoto

Posts: 876

Sunbury, Pennsylvania, US

check out my newest...under a full moon....I try to play with stuff outside of my normal routine...

Sep 27 10 07:52 pm Link

Photographer

Craig Thomson

Posts: 13462

Tacoma, Washington, US

Sogi the Model wrote:

Na, I just don't think we have the same tastes. Nothing here turns me on.

whew

Sep 27 10 07:56 pm Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

John Lafferty wrote:
Im game.I wont bite.

But I will!! >:} I'm really not digging the avatar. It shows nothing for your skills as a photographer.

https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100624/16/4c23ea546aa2b_m.jpgTurn off.
https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100628/08/4c28c32ab36d1_m.jpgTurn off. These two photos do nothing for you.

https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090112/05/496b494bb487b_m.jpgShows potential.

Overall,  pass.

Sep 27 10 08:02 pm Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

***Taking a break ****

I'll probably come back to this tomorrow night.

Sep 27 10 08:02 pm Link

Photographer

Pixyst

Posts: 356

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Well do I?

Sep 27 10 08:05 pm Link

Photographer

No One

Posts: 2086

Buckingham, Virginia, US

smile

Sep 27 10 08:10 pm Link

Photographer

Alluring Exposures

Posts: 11400

Casa Grande, Arizona, US

I'm open to comments and critiques smile

Sep 27 10 08:11 pm Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

michael cargo wrote:
OK

https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100731/00/4c53d3993c95a_m.jpg This photo just isn't appealing. When you're doing such a particular shot like this you've got to have a particular model. Or someone who can edit minor details like the shadows of cellulite out. You don't see a jewelry ad for a model with nubs and tentacles for fingers do you?

Your face looks the same in pretty much all photos.

At least you show connection to your subject in your couples shot. I'd say yes to shooting with you because I have no experience shooting with couples. I'd shoot with you for the experience of it, but probably wouldn't put any pics in my port.

Sep 28 10 07:48 am Link

Photographer

Neil Snape

Posts: 9474

Paris, Île-de-France, France

Yes I love models with Flare* that is what you have. IF you can read into pictures what people are, you have this.

Tell me , do I?

Sep 28 10 07:52 am Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

CarlosDavid wrote:
do it.

Your avatar is a turn on, and made me think 'yes' before even clicking.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18144187   **18+
The angle is weird for me here. I don't really like this photo.

https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090706/17/4a5297752e271_m.jpgNormally things like this would be a turn off, but you photographed this nicely.
Overall, yes!

Sep 28 10 08:02 am Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

Marianne Michaela wrote:
Okay I thought this was about something else big_smile. But now that you have my attention, I'd love to know

I'd have to stand on my tippie tippie toes, but YES!! Most definitely! You control your body and face well, and well garsh you're just gorgeous.

https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100315/04/4b9e1ded35944_m.jpgTurn on!

Sep 28 10 08:08 am Link

Photographer

Dr Thomas

Posts: 129

London, England, United Kingdom

Me?

Sep 28 10 08:13 am Link

Photographer

David Westlake

Posts: 1539

Mansfield Center, Connecticut, US

I'd love your opinion.

Sep 28 10 08:23 am Link

Model

Tara Kim

Posts: 94

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

I dont' know do I?

Sep 28 10 09:24 am Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

EJF Studios wrote:
Id love to know

Yes definitely!

On a side note, you have a shit ton of photos in your port. I'd pick out the best and cut the number by at least half, and provide a link to your website on your profile.

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100921/23/4c99a8aebe824_m.jpg Nice shot, but the object in the foreground bugs me.

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080606/12/484964b5d34cd_m.jpg Turn on
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100921/23/4c99a69d4bf27_m.jpg Turn on


https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090108/19/4966bfeacaa07_m.jpg Not really a fan of the hand bra. I take implied nudity as an art form within itself. I think there are more creative approaches to censoring the girly bits. To me implied is about finding non-obvious ways to conceal nudity. I'd like this photo if it were the subjects arms around the breasts rather than cupping hands. I'd feel more connection, as if they really were embracing.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/11281181 **18+  Very cool!

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/081219/09/494bd3c235adc_m.jpg Turn on

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19556884  **18+ Turn off. The expression, pose, and hair are all very eye candyish. Not really something I'd want in my port.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19556728 **18+ I'd almost want to draw something like this if it weren't for that blasted hand bra again!! wink


https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100621/20/4c202daa1a8fa_m.jpg I never liked photos where the horizon was at some odd angle... unless it was for a purpose like to magnify an extreme.

You've got quite a few more turn-ons but I'm not going to list them all. I know I'd say yes to you.

Sep 28 10 09:50 am Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

Amandine Camporro wrote:
Miaow sad

Yes, you know yer awesome tongue

I don't really see a lot of 'connecting' photos that would show me you'd do well interacting with another subject, but I'd say you turn me on!

Sep 28 10 10:09 am Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

Kitty LaRose wrote:
I'll play smile

https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100726/02/4c4d58679726f_m.jpg Turn off. The cropping is bad, but that's not your fault. Your mouth looks tense, and you look uncomfortable.

https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100313/22/4b9c7c551aa8f_m.jpg Turn on!

The height difference would be noticeable, but I would work with you because I don't have experience working with another subject.

Sep 28 10 10:34 am Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

James Ogilvie wrote:
Me! I think?  smile

There isn't really anything I don't like about your port!

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100815/20/4c68b6a3e6dcd_m.jpg Okay well I don't like the model's expressions and poses here. It feels tense.

I like your nudes.
Overall, totally turned on!

Sep 28 10 10:46 am Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

Victoria Marina wrote:
Ill play!

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091023/17/4ae24970eb2f0_m.jpg Turn off. The bad angle gives your body a weird shape.

at 5'1 I'd give you a box to stand on and say yes, let's collaborate!

Sep 28 10 10:52 am Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

Savannah- wrote:
cuuurious!

You know yourself well. 5'5 is close enough to my height to have us go well together.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19607421 **18+ Total turn on! I really really like this photo.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15338925 **18+ Turn off. I don't like the expression, or position of the shoulder.

You have A TON of "look at my rear" shots. Unless you're an ass model, you don't need that many of an identical pose.

Overall I'd say yes, because I could use the experience of shooting with another model.

Sep 28 10 11:02 am Link

Model

Axioma

Posts: 6822

Antwerp, Antwerp, Belgium

probably too small for ya huh smile?

Sep 28 10 11:09 am Link

Photographer

L Raye

Posts: 5045

Petaluma, California, US

Your opinion?

Sep 28 10 11:11 am Link

Photographer

Blaine Dixon

Posts: 1993

San Francisco, California, US

Go for it!

Sep 28 10 11:11 am Link

Photographer

H B P

Posts: 3592

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

Well do I.

How about this portfolio? HBP II

Sep 28 10 11:13 am Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

John David Studio  wrote:
Ok Sogi your evaluation please....

You've got A LOT of photos in your port. Do you really need that many? I'd cut it in half, and pick the best ones to put on MM, and save the rest for a website that you'd leave the link to on your profile.

I see a lot of good shots, a few great ones, and a few okay ones.

https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090320/14/49c40c6b9a71e_m.jpgIf I found this pic put inside a magazine, I wouldn't notice anything out of place. In other words, it belongs there. Turn on.

https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090818/15/4a8b31e67f7db_m.jpg Now... Here's where a non-level angle of the ground works. Turn on.

https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100905/15/4c84186f4970a_m.jpg Yu-Gi-Oh's wife? The expression in her face doesn't match the movement in her hair, and it just looks like a bad hair day.

https://modelmayhm1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100926/09/4c9f6facb99ca_m.jpg The most attention is drawn to her nostrils. Rarely is that ever flattering. I would not have this as an avatar. You have much much better in your port. Just because it's newer, doesn't mean you have to make it your avi.

https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091121/18/4b089c4963318_m.jpg
https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090912/19/4aac5fbdbdcd1_m.jpg
https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100727/19/4c4f9b17f0e19_m.jpg
https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090629/03/4a4896bb6e895_m.jpg
https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090725/15/4a6b86d0e9f20_m.jpg
https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090412/14/49e25a4b07796_m.jpg Any one of these could make a better avatar.

Sep 28 10 01:25 pm Link

Model

Crazy_Bear

Posts: 1310

San Diego, California, US

Sogi the Model wrote:

You look like a fantastic model with a wide range and variety in expressions and poses. I would say yes definitely.

I don't know how well we'd complement eachother... I'd hafta make you stand on a box or something. You'd definitely outshine me though big_smile

Haha wow, thank you, and you're gorgeous, I'd say you'd outshine smile

Sep 28 10 01:51 pm Link