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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Justen Phelps wrote:
Did I miss the show!?

I would work with you. Sexy book cover and sexy couples image. You look great! Love the outfit, the posing and the passion/intensity in you/the kiss. Nice color scheme as well.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130223/22/5129b1128ff96_m.jpg

Mar 03 13 06:34 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Leone P wrote:
Can i play please? xx

I would say maybe. I'm not completely sold- the pose is not great and your expression looks forced/not comfortable and does not connect with the camera. But the outfit looks good on you and I like your tights as well. Also like the necklace- you pull off the look well. Hair is nice though would use a different color bow, as the red doesn't go with anything.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130225/04/512b5acb3ce90_m.jpg

Mar 03 13 07:02 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Emily Smiles wrote:
Please let me know. My avatar was taken last night, so feedback is appreciated.

Yes. You have a really nice figure that is captured well in this image. The pose looks good as well and I also like the bikni top, with bottom. And the background is very pretty- nice colors and great location choice. Also love how your body is reflected in the water on the ground.

Mar 04 13 12:50 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


MandiePistol wrote:
Interested in your opinion smile

Yes. The outfit looks great on you (I like the tulle skirt part too) and shows off your figure really well. Also the pose is lovely- looks effortless and graceful. I also really like the style of your hair and how it's framed around your face. And you have gorgeous eyes and nice makeup- especially the red lips. Perhaps the expression could be a bit more engaging though.

Mar 04 13 08:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Leah YI
Posts: 6
Detroit, Michigan, US


What do you think? Should I change it?
Mar 05 13 09:08 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Keith Aleksoff
Posts: 46
Anchorage, Alaska, US


Hi. I'm curious. Thanks
Mar 05 13 11:56 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


NatesStream wrote:
would like to hear you thoughts?

Maybe, though the background and overall image is a bit too dark for my tastes. But I do like the scarf and the way it is draped over the model's body and covering most of the top part, while still showing a little bit. Pose is pretty good, but don't like that the model's face is covered by her hair -- Would like to see more of the face and expression.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130205/20/5111dac42c2e9_m.jpg

Mar 05 13 08:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Justen Altschul
Posts: 53
Townsend, Delaware, US


this sounds fun!
Mar 05 13 08:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kuisheid
Posts: 1,075
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US


Curious...
Mar 05 13 09:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Matt Forma wrote:
?

Yes. This is a strong and beautiful shot- Love the movement in the model's hair - Also like the styling and color of it. And the model herself is gorgeous -- high fashion face with great structure and lovely blue eyes. The scarf is nicely arranged on the model and pose is okay- not liking the arms though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130224/12/512a7cb0e0d9b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120801/13/501995efdc82b_m.jpg

Mar 05 13 09:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kristyn Emily
Posts: 28
Albany, New York, US


Do tell.  smile
Mar 06 13 01:13 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Xplicit Impressions wrote:
I would love to know your thoughts on my work by looking at my avatar.

Maybe. I actually want to pose with a motorcycle, but this image shows the model well but doesn't really engage the motorcycle- Makes me wonder if it has to be there at all. The bikini is nice though and definitely shows off the model's figure - Pose is decent but arms are covering/shadowing part of the model's face. The expression is okay. I just don't like the crop at the bottom- you've cropped out the shoes. Nice background and natural lighting though.

Mar 06 13 09:36 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Foxy Tokala wrote:
Me please! :3

Probably yes but the first thing I notice is that your expression is sleepy/dead- and one eye is almost closed- Not good! Try to have more connection with the camera. Beyond that, I like your dress- it looks great on you and shows off your figure well. The pose is also quite good. Your hair looks okay but could be more smooth/polished (like here: http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31782887), especially to match that lovely dress.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130223/13/51292e7d6fb46_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130223/12/51292d932da74_m.jpg

Mar 06 13 08:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
SophiaRed
Posts: 43
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US


if youre still going Im curious
Mar 06 13 08:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Smitty s Photography wrote:
Would you???   :-)

No. There's a strange gritty feel to the image and color tone is off. But the outfit looks great on the model -especially the shirt and heels. The shirt color is nice but the cut doesn't go with the skirt. Pose is okay, though can't see the left hand and the background is nice and smooth- Why  couldn't the model be smooth like that?

Mar 07 13 09:40 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Mae Martin wrote:
Yes No Maybe?

Maybe. I don't love that your arm is blocking your face, creating a shadow there. I would like to see the pretty flowers around your head better but love your smile - looks genuine. And the way you've made a curved shape of your stomach looks great- The image captures your nice figure. That being said, I can still tell from the image that you're just starting out -- Keep shooting!

Mar 07 13 01:35 pm  Link  Quote 
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Foxy Tokala
Posts: 257
Atlanta, Georgia, US


winking_wonder wrote:

Probably yes but the first thing I notice is that your expression is sleepy/dead- and one eye is almost closed- Not good! Try to have more connection with the camera. Beyond that, I like your dress- it looks great on you and shows off your figure well. The pose is also quite good. Your hair looks okay but could be more smooth/polished (like here: http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31782887), especially to match that lovely dress.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130223/13/51292e7d6fb46_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130223/12/51292d932da74_m.jpg

Ok thank you for the feedback, I will try really hard to work on that.  I am also trying to work with my hair to as you have noticed, some days I have harder times with my hair than others lol smile

Mar 07 13 07:05 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Foxy Tokala wrote:

Ok thank you for the feedback, I will try really hard to work on that.  I am also trying to work with my hair to as you have noticed, some days I have harder times with my hair than others lol smile

You're welcome for the feedback. I know it can be hard to give great expressions and can understand about the hair as well but keep up the good work!

Mar 07 13 07:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,302
Champaign, Illinois, US


would you?
Mar 08 13 07:05 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Sameer Nawaz wrote:

Sounds Fun! smile Let me know what you think :p

Maybe. It's a decent black and white image but it's a bit dark for my tastes. Also your expression could be improved upon.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130301/18/51316948f41ab_m.jpg

Mar 08 13 09:14 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Kuisheid
Posts: 1,075
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US


Curious...
Mar 08 13 09:57 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Envied Images wrote:
OK! I'd like to know.

Yes. I really like the red dress with the belt and shoes, plus it all looks great on the model- shows off her figure. The pose is interesting but expression doesn't look comfortable and there's no connection with the camera.

Mar 08 13 10:27 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Leah YI wrote:
What do you think? Should I change it?

I would say I might.. I think the expression could be improved- there's no connection/emotion there but I like the makeup on you and love how your hair is flowing behind you. And I like the white top on you. Though placement of hand right in front of you isn't the best pose.

Mar 09 13 05:00 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Keith Aleksoff  wrote:
Hi. I'm curious. Thanks

Yes. I would love to have that type of shot in my portfolio- I'm looking to add couples style shoots. I like the color scheme and love the sexy feel to it. Both models are good looking and have decent expressions. I think the female model's left arm (the one on the male model's shoulder) is a bit distracting- it looks big.. Would've liked it better if it wasn't in the shot. Otherwise, I love it!

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130305/01/5135bbf90a030_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120316/23/4f642b1588e5b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130305/01/5135b4c2b6df4_m.jpg

Mar 09 13 06:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Andy Welch
Posts: 271
Richmond, Virginia, US


I'll jump in!
Mar 09 13 06:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Horacio Hamlet
Posts: 4
South Orange, New Jersey, US


HEY CHECK OUT MY PAGE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU ALL THINK https://www.facebook.com/HoratioPhotos
Mar 09 13 08:42 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Danielle Reid
Posts: 4,338
Little Rock, Arkansas, US


Give it to me straight! smile
Mar 10 13 01:08 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Lui Mi
Posts: 17
Houston, Texas, US


I'm very interested in your opinion.
Mar 10 13 01:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Dereck G
Posts: 12
Los Angeles, California, US


Mar 11 13 04:22 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Michael Scorr
Posts: 309
London, England, United Kingdom


I'll play wink
Mar 11 13 10:00 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Justen Altschul wrote:
this sounds fun!

Yes. I think you look good and I like your bone structure and eyes- would like to know what color they are! Though the expression is kind of blank. But jacket is nice, your pose is all right. The arrow/lines with light blue on them are interesting and kind of cool.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130305/19/5136bd7a1ba0b_m.jpg

Mar 11 13 12:07 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Kuisheid wrote:
Curious...

Yes. Though the background is a little busy, I like colorful and I like your look- You've got lovely hair - love the curl in it and love the part and you also have pretty eyes. Nice earrings too The expression is a little tense but getting there. Also not sure about the pose. Also like that your face/hair is very smooth.

Pretty:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090706/13/4a526166ce00d_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090901/00/4a9cce7b6163c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090901/00/4a9ccdd0b013b_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13084423

Mar 11 13 08:16 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Kristyn Emily wrote:
Do tell.  smile

No. The expression is not good, I don't like the coloring and non-smooth feel. Nice hair though and sexy cleavage achieved with the sweater.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110425/15/4db5f28e69084_m.jpg

Mar 12 13 12:54 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


SophiaRed wrote:
if youre still going Im curious

Maybe. I like your red hair and green eyes. Expression is quite blank though. And though I like the shirt as a whole, placement of arm across your front is maybe not the best pose.

Mar 13 13 11:30 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joe Harary
Posts: 5
Holliston, Massachusetts, US


Your opinion please
Thank You
Mar 13 13 04:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Black Tux Photography
Posts: 26
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


I'd like to know
Mar 14 13 08:52 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Peach Jones wrote:
would you?

Maybe. It's quite a sexy close up and you've captured the model's stomach area well. I just don't know about the color scheme. But I think the bit of jeans in the shot adds to the sexiness.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130228/11/512fa9c959a41_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130228/11/512faa0105760_m.jpg

Mar 14 13 11:19 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Kuisheid wrote:
Curious...

Already done: http://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?threa … st18101216

Mar 14 13 06:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Risen Phoenix Photo
Posts: 1,393
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


Sure I would love to know what you think
Mar 14 13 06:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,622
New York, New York, US


Viral Photo wrote:
I'll jump in!

I would say maybe. It's a little over processed and the model's expression is not very good but the outfit she has on is really creative, sexy and she looks good in it. The belly button ring is a nice added touch. But her pose is just there, with the right arm being awkward.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120910/20/504eafb6dbeb1_m.jpg

Mar 14 13 08:25 pm  Link  Quote 
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