Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Blatant Pixels Photo wrote:
Sounds like a good way to get an opinion. I'm in.

I would say maybe. I don't really like the grainy quality and the color of the image. The huge window is a cool idea and the model's legs in the stockings look great. Lower body posing is good; arms are a little awkward. Can't really see the model's face and the expression doesn't look natural.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130613/19/51ba8254947f9_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130709/17/51dcaa9e52dc0_m.jpg

Jul 22 13 12:10 pm Link

Model

paigehasrabies

Posts: 8

Oklahoma City, Oklahoma, US

I'll bite smile i'd like to hear it.

Jul 22 13 12:18 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Emily Carrol wrote:
me please? smile

Yes. You have a young, fresh look. Love the length and color of your hair and the way it is slightly blowing in the wind. Also like the flower in your hair. Nice blue eyes etc. Dress is cute, but not loving the belt. Jewelry works well though. Expression could have more connection. The other thing is the image itself looks like a snap shot.

Jul 22 13 01:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Risen Phoenix Photo wrote:
I am a fine art photographer but I would love to know your thoughts

I actually do nude work as well. I would say yes- Lovely lighting on the model's figure and I like the color of her hair as well as the way it frames her face. Nice overall capture but the expression is quite blank- would like to see more connection.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120630/14/4fef6e68543d6_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130210/09/5117d26dc769f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121223/19/50d7c95e9cdf2_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121223/19/50d7c956a59d2_m.jpg

Jul 22 13 01:48 pm Link

Photographer

ikonas Boston

Posts: 736

Boston, Massachusetts, US

winking_wonder wrote:
Yes, it's a lot of pages!

I would work with you. The image is a little bit dark but I like the window shot/effect and you can still see the model clearly. Love the dress she has on- though the big fan hides her lovely figure. The pose could be more interesting.. The model's hands are kind of awkward holding the fan. Expression is pretty good- I feel a sense of longing in her gaze.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121114/06/50a3ae21d69e8_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111127/21/4ed3186f7352d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120831/07/5040c4b5da3ed_m.jpg

Thankss for your feedback, Much appreciated. I totally agree about the awkward way she is holding of the fan. It sort of ruins the image. Thanks again.

Jul 22 13 07:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

zealotschoice wrote:
this might be interesting ..

No. This image is quite small and hard to make out in the regular view. The red bars are kind of cool but not sure what the brief is - don't know why the models are there. Furthermore, it doesn't seem like the models know either- Their expressions are both very different from each other and they are not interacting/posing with the other.

I like better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110426/14/4db7402c397e1_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110704/00/4e1167bb32d08_m.jpg

Jul 22 13 09:30 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

HEATHER 19 wrote:
new avatar, also nice to be 4,600 smile

Probably. I like your overall look- wavy brown hair and blue eyes and I love the way your hair is framing your face. I just don't like the crop at the top.. cutting off your head. And your expression is quite blank- Would be great with more connection.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130722/17/51edcf8cc6329_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120412/10/4f870a54eba24_m.jpg

Jul 23 13 11:25 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Kemikal Photographz wrote:
Oh, I'm interested in the answer! Would you work with me based on my avatar?

No. The image is too gritty for my tastes and I don't love the black/white color tones. Would've possibly liked it more in color. The model's pose is just okay though I do like her dress. The expression is looks bored/blank.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130717/08/51e6b312eb043_m.jpg

Jul 23 13 01:14 pm Link

Photographer

Kalef

Posts: 13

Lowell, Massachusetts, US

Me pls

Jul 23 13 04:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

CarinD wrote:
Hit me! I need all I can get

Yes. I like the soft/smooth image overall and you have a lovely look and way of carrying yourself. The hairdo is nicely done and your blue eyes are quite expressive. Nice makeup as well. I don't love the crop at both the top and bottom though that's not your fault. And the arm in the image is a little awkward.

Also:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130711/09/51dedbd1d8f36_m.jpg

Jul 23 13 06:25 pm Link

Photographer

AdamGray

Posts: 19

West Chester, Pennsylvania, US

Lol, this thread is still alive?

Jul 23 13 07:37 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

MissAbsinthe wrote:
I'm curious what you'd think of me!

Yes. A very unique image but I like the concept. I love the outfit you have on and having the skirt up to show your lace tights is a nice touch. Plus the outfit shows off your figure well. Your hair style is also cool and you have a decent expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130710/09/51dd863f3c671_m.jpg

Jul 23 13 09:40 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Rebus Imagery wrote:
Ok, hit me with the constructive criticism.

I've got a thick skin . . .  I think!

I would say yes. I really like the image of the model in the background and would love to have an image like that. The actual model looks good (love the red hair & the style of it) except that the skin on arm and upper part of the body is not as smooth as the rest. The bikini looks great on the model though and the pose is not bad but the model's right arm looks wrinkled/too tense/awkward. Also the model's expression is quite blank.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120122/01/4f1bd314b46ce_m.jpg

Jul 24 13 09:30 am Link

Model

Wulfilia

Posts: 17

Tulsa, Oklahoma, US

How about for me?

Jul 24 13 09:45 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

JazzieMarie wrote:
How about mine?

Yes. Even though the image is quite small and it's hard to make out the details, I like your look. You have beautiful hair and I love the way it frames your face and you have lovely skin as well as other nice facial features. The outfit and earring looks good on you and I'm really liking the color scheme. Just not so sure about the posing of your arms above your head like that and the crop at the top takes off part of your arm. Expression is okay- could be more engaged though.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120207/10/4f31732defd42_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120131/12/4f284a66cf879_m.jpg

Jul 24 13 09:06 pm Link

Model

Kylie Alexandra

Posts: 351

Geelong, Victoria, Australia

Can I play? Would like to know smile

Jul 25 13 02:49 am Link

Photographer

Wordmarque

Posts: 461

Alexandria, Virginia, US

I'll play smile

Jul 25 13 07:13 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Erika Kapele wrote:
Please take a look.

Maybe. The image doesn't show you in the most flattering light - your face is too shadowed, and the makeup is too dark for you. The balloons are kind of cool but distract from you a little bit. I do like your hair and eyes though. But your expression is quite blank.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120420/20/4f922be569390_m.jpg

Jul 25 13 12:07 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Gold Rush Studio wrote:
What do you think?

Yes very pretty head shot, though it does look like the model has no neck.. But I like the color scheme and the softness of the image. The model is beautiful- love her blond hair and blue eyes.. Also makeup looks nice. The green in front is a bit distracting but overall doesn't take away too much from the image. Expression is blank though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/060703/15/44a97bbecd3a7_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090418/01/49e989d72b9d7_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/060703/15/44a97c48af89c_m.jpg

Jul 25 13 01:00 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

- Gisselle Meneses -  wrote:
me too! thnx

Yes. You have a really sexy look-- nice body suit.. It shows off your figure well and the pose is pretty good except that it looks like you have no neck. Expression though ruins it- looks like you're bored.

Jul 25 13 01:07 pm Link

Photographer

mjartphotography

Posts: 174

Milton Keynes, England, United Kingdom

Although quite far from you.....I would like to think so!

Jul 25 13 06:01 pm Link

Model

Jamarius Clark

Posts: 1

Orlando, Florida, US

me?

Jul 25 13 06:33 pm Link

Model

Allie Nicoleeee

Posts: 1

Cincinnati, Ohio, US

I'm curious to know!

Jul 25 13 06:39 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Hai Thi wrote:
Try me if you dont mind smile

Maybe. I like the clarity and smoothness of the image. And normally I don't like dark/black backgrounds but in this case it works. Also, I don't like smoking shots, but here I like how you can see the smoke materialize in the air and that it's blue! I also like the outfit on the model, along with her curly hair style and pretty eyes. And the makeup is great. However, the way she has lifted up her head isn't the most flattering and her expression looks bored.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120218/05/4f3fa9ffc149b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130118/04/50f9403d71a1b_m.jpg

Jul 25 13 08:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Camerosity wrote:
I have a new avatar. smile

Yes. I like the color scheme and the model's outfit- the fact that the jacket is open and showing skin underneath is sexy in a classy way. The pose is quite good and I love the styling- makeup/nails are flawless and hair styling is decent. Only thing is expression- the model looks sad/a bit uncomfortable.

Love:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120613/22/4fd97b86e06dd_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120606/20/4fd02651a4daf_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121003/06/506c3de4d776d_m.jpg

Jul 25 13 09:45 pm Link

Photographer

Camerosity

Posts: 5805

Saint Louis, Missouri, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes. I like the color scheme and the model's outfit- the fact that the jacket is open and showing skin underneath is sexy in a classy way. The pose is quite good and I love the styling- makeup/nails are flawless and hair styling is decent. Only thing is expression- the model looks sad/a bit uncomfortable.

Love:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120613/22/4fd97b86e06dd_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120606/20/4fd02651a4daf_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121003/06/506c3de4d776d_m.jpg

Thanks!

Jul 25 13 09:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

RobertOPhoto wrote:
If you are still going I'll play.

Yes. Overall I like the smooth image but the placement of arms are awkward. I do love the model's outfit.. and it shows off the model's figure. The makeup looks good and hair is nicely styled. But expression could be better.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130210/09/5117d9592bcbb_m.jpg

Jul 26 13 08:35 am Link

Model

Samantha Hauxwell

Posts: 5

Bishop Auckland, England, United Kingdom

I love games big_smile xxx

Jul 26 13 08:38 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

M59 Photography wrote:
Late to the party, but I'd like to know your answer!

Yes, overall nice capture! The pose is well done, and I love love love the makeup and the model's hair - pretty color, styling and the way it's framed around her face. Just not sure why the big white wig is on top of the model's head? And expression looks a little bored/sleepy.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130216/15/51201b51c6361_m.jpg

Jul 26 13 09:25 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Kalef wrote:
Me?

I would say probably not. I like the color scheme and the background- location is great. Just not sure about the angle at which you have shot the model - her legs and arms look disproportionately larger than the rest of her body. The bikini is cute though but would like to see more of her face- Also looks like the expression is squinty.

Much better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130710/20/51de286837971_m.jpg

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130712/20/51e0cf2fe6c18_m.jpg

Jul 26 13 06:01 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

ArtisticallySexy wrote:
ok, sounds fun. I love an honest opinion

I'm not sure. While I like the bright colors and the smoothness of the model in the image, the pose is not great and I dislike how the model's arm is covering half her face.. The expression is also awkward/blank. I think the orange-y leaves placed on the model's body is cool (though not the leaf on her face).

Much Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130212/16/511ad90ddab28_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33294139 18+

Jul 26 13 09:45 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Jeremy Rill Photography wrote:
I'd love to hear your thoughts...

Probably. I like the color scheme and the profile of the model though not really sure why her head is held up and posed like that. The dress and pearls as well as hair style look nice though and the expression is decent. I also like the smooth quality of the image and pretty background.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130122/16/50ff2a238e97a_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120911/09/504f6cfaa8a87_m.jpg

Jul 27 13 07:37 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Greg DAE wrote:
I'm curious...

I would say yes. Nice black and white tones and I like the background color. You've got a great physique that the image showcases well and the lighting is very good. Your expression looks like a bit of a stare and is a little blank/intense.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130719/11/51e98b4b536af_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130718/06/51e7f06f7395f_m.jpg

Jul 27 13 08:47 pm Link

Photographer

Trill Imagery

Posts: 126

Los Angeles, California, US

Ok Im game,lol

Jul 27 13 09:06 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Vivendi Studio wrote:
go ahead.

Yes. And the model is the beautiful Kelli! That's a great outfit and it looks slammin' on her. You've really captured her lovely figure. And I like the heels, though it's cut off a little bit- Not a big issue though. Great, effortless pose and decent expression. Also nice black/white tones and good lighting.

Cool:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130517/15/5196aa2443dff_m.jpg

Jul 29 13 11:38 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Tremmy wrote:
interested smile

Probably not. The black/white tones are nice but the way the jacket is on you looks quite weird- The shoulders are not where the shoulders are so I'm wondering how it got that shape. Face looks nice though- and has a nice, serene expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130314/12/51422043b29d9_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130523/02/519de04e4e69d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130712/06/51e00083e856d_m.jpg

Jul 30 13 01:06 pm Link

Model

Razeal

Posts: 36

Fontana, California, US

Tell me what you think

Jul 30 13 02:08 pm Link

Photographer

Jason Van-Stry

Posts: 22

Springfield, Missouri, US

So... would you?

Jul 30 13 11:02 pm Link

Photographer

Lloyd Eye

Posts: 25

Bremen, Bremen, Germany

I am curious, too :-)

BTW: why is it, that so many photographers have an avatar NOT showing themselfes? Isn't that the purpose of an avatar...?

Jul 31 13 05:13 am Link

Model

Deco Dame

Posts: 3

Oshawa, Ontario, Canada

Ouuu, I'm interested!

Jul 31 13 08:32 am Link