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Steven Due Photography
Posts: 28
Durham, North Carolina, US


How do I measure up?
Oct 07 12 07:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Haynes Karuzas wrote:
Take a look.

Actually yes, even though it's tough to make out the details of the image in the regular view. But I really like the vibrant colors, lighting-- that sunspot in the background and on the gravel is just the type I like -- and the llama has a great pose- one of movement which can be hard to capture. Plus the location is awesome. I like her outfit as well- the makeup and expression could be improved upon though.

Well done:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110113/13/4d2f67e890ea8_m.jpg

Oct 07 12 08:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Jade Honey wrote:
Would you?

Not based on this picture. I don't like the styling and I think our looks would clash. I'm not a fan of the dark makeup and the dark environment. And the pose is awkward. That being said, the dress is nice and looks good on you- especially the top half. And I like the color of your hair.

Oct 07 12 09:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Layla Strickland
Posts: 5
Tempe, Arizona, US


DO tell smile
Oct 07 12 09:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Isabella55
Posts: 152
West Hollywood, California, US


Ok!
Oct 07 12 09:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Neaktarose
Posts: 3
Central City, Colorado, US


I am learning and growing in this industry and I would love your opinion!  Thankyou smile
Oct 07 12 09:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
steph amberlyn stewart
Posts: 34
Brantford, Ontario, Canada


id like to know:0
Oct 07 12 10:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Irving Images
Posts: 24
Palm Beach, Florida, US


Fuck it, I'm curious!
Oct 07 12 11:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Michael Knight
Posts: 53
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US


I'm game.
Oct 08 12 05:35 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Bengali wrote:
???

No. The image is a bit dark, I don't like the crop and the expression is not very engaged.

Oct 08 12 07:11 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Oscar Partida wrote:
not into guys  torsos

I would say probably. I like the color scheme- especially the blue of the model's dress (and it looks great on her!) and the lighting is lovely. Also nice pink flowers in the model's hair. I just don't really like the model's pose- she looks awkward and the expression is not good.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121003/21/506d13de0153b_m.jpg

I like the picture on the left side:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120716/14/500484b537b55_m.jpg

Oct 08 12 07:29 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Kimmi Fox wrote:
interesting

Yes. You have a really unique and beautiful look. I love your ice blue eyes with your milky skin and the orange hair looks good on you. I also like the way you've styled your hair and how the bangs look. And you have an interesting pose going on- as well as quite a few tattoos (they're lovely!) Nice makeup. Just think your expression could be more expressive.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120927/06/50645b7257c01_m.jpg

Oct 08 12 07:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
NickiXoXoLee
Posts: 2
SOUTHINGTON, Connecticut, US


Ill play
Oct 08 12 08:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Misa Ka wrote:
Lets hear it.

Probably. Though I think your face is a bit too made up -- too much blush but the eye makeup and lips look good. The dress is cute and the background is nice and neutral. Pose could be more in interesting though and your expression is okay- but could be more engaged.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120901/16/504295009c73e_m.jpg

Oct 09 12 11:41 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Karl Baxter wrote:
Shoot smile

Maybe. The black and white tones are lovely, as is the model's makeup, hair and general styling. I love how the model's face looks- it's flawless. But I'm not a huge fan of the pose.

Cool:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121005/09/506f10a69c233_m.jpg

Oct 09 12 12:26 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Jean Pierre Betancur wrote:
Let me know smile

Yes. Though your pose is a little flat/uninteresting (as well as your expression), you have a lovely face- and great hair. You also have a nice muscled upper body and I like the black and white tones of the image.

This:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121001/20/506a5e8569240_m.jpg

Oct 09 12 09:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
MichAMORE
Posts: 36
Detroit, Michigan, US


i'll play!
Oct 09 12 09:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


MichAMORE wrote:
Go! smile

Yes. Though this image kind of looks like a snap shot, I like your look. Nice black curled hair, lovely makeup and features, interesting and cool dress. Pose could be better though to show off the dress more and also expression could be more engaged. Also, I like the color scheme.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121004/11/506dd1bee93f9_m.jpg

This is the better newspaper dress image:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121003/12/506c9104598c2_m.jpg

Oct 09 12 10:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
A M I T
Posts: 69
Los Angeles, California, US


Me? smile
Oct 09 12 10:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Lanika Thomas wrote:
I would love your feedback.

Yes. Nice black and white image and a sexy outfit- shows off your figure well. You also have lovely features I think your pose is ok but the left arm sticking out like that is quite awkward and your expression is blank- Should be more engaged.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120918/03/50584702d8d3b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120929/07/50670860438e7_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120826/19/503ae1dcda715_m.jpg

Oct 10 12 01:51 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Lauren Arcadia wrote:
I'll play!

Yes. Although setting looks unprofessional- as if it's in a living room, your pose and styling is great. The dress looks really good on you and shows of your figure well. Those high heels are hot as well. Decent makeup but your expression could be more engaged though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120815/02/502b6a291b847_m.jpg

Oct 10 12 09:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
ChaiNoir
Posts: 345
Adelaide, South Australia, Australia


i'll like to know big_smile
Oct 10 12 09:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Steven Due Photography wrote:
How do I measure up?

Probably not. I don't love the crop of this- usually like to see the model's face.

Oct 10 12 10:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
SherelleS
Posts: 7
Birmingham, England, United Kingdom


Do I fit the bill? smile
Oct 10 12 10:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Layla Strickland wrote:
DO tell smile

Probably not. The image looks like a snapshot and the pose is a bit awkward, and the expression is not that good- Needs more engagement. I do like the shirt you have on though and it seems like you have a decent figure.

Maybe this as your avatar:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120507/21/4fa89d2f4a50e_m.jpg

Oct 11 12 08:48 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Steven Due Photography
Posts: 28
Durham, North Carolina, US


Any comment on a better avatar?
Oct 11 12 06:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jaguar Photography
Posts: 519
Antioch, California, US


I'll play...
Oct 11 12 06:12 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Tyler A Photography
Posts: 9
Pottstown, Pennsylvania, US


sure why not
Oct 11 12 06:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Steven Due Photography wrote:
Any comment on a better avatar?

I like the one you've chosen now. Or possibly:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/071112/00/4737e9e88ede0_m.jpg

Oct 11 12 09:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Amadea T
Posts: 3,300
Columbus, Ohio, US


My turn?
Oct 11 12 09:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Hillary K Frazier
Posts: 31
Savannah, Georgia, US


ok! big_smile
Oct 11 12 09:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Brandy Alexandrea
Posts: 8
Barrie, Ontario, Canada


let me know wink
Oct 11 12 09:41 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Isabella55 wrote:
Ok!

Maybe. This image looks a little snap shotty but I like the way your hair is curled and the makeup. Though it's nice that you have long neck, it seems like the way your head is tilted is not the most flattering. Overall, nice colors and choice of black outfit. However the expression can be much improved - more engaging.

Oct 12 12 08:26 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Donna DeFrance
Posts: 24
Hope, Alaska, US


I'd love some feedback! :-)
Oct 12 12 08:30 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Neaktarose wrote:
I am learning and growing in this industry and I would love your opinion!  Thankyou smile

No. I don't really like the pose, expression (looks like you're just staring with a blank expression). Though the outfit is interesting and you do have lovely blue eyes.

Oct 12 12 09:35 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


steph amberlyn stewart wrote:
id like to know:0

I would say maybe. While I like the lighting, your hair and lovely features.. I don't like the pose and that you're all scrunched up- It makes you look short and I can't see how well your body photographs (since it's so close up). It looks like you have a cute dress on but since can only see a little bit, can't tell for sure. Also can't tell how it looks on you. I also don't like the crop -top and bottom. But you do seem to have a nice look. Your makeup and expression are decent.

Oct 12 12 09:54 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jeff Lohne Photography
Posts: 1
Babylon, New York, US


Why not lets see what you have to say!  Always good to get info from models to see what we as photographers can do better..  thanks
Oct 12 12 10:01 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
TampaFoto
Posts: 668
Tampa, Florida, US


Do tell ?
Oct 12 12 10:05 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
isfotografia
Posts: 40
Mexico City, Distrito Federal, Mexico


ok
Oct 12 12 10:08 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,480
New York, New York, US


Irving Images wrote:
Fuck it, I'm curious!

I would say maybe. I do like the color scheme and the lighting. The eyeshadow looks good on the model - and I like her hair so you've done a good job capturing that. I also like the scarf on the model. Her expression is a little blank though and I do not like the circles under eyes- something to watch for especially when doing a closeup face shot.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120829/17/503eaf0db553a_m.jpg

Oct 13 12 10:40 pm  Link  Quote 
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