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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Kyra Elle wrote:
Me?

Yes. I like your look. You have lovely hair- nicely styled as well, and beautiful eyes and other facial features. The red lingerie looks good on you and shows off your figure. Pose and expression is just okay though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130109/19/50ee310724d20_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130104/17/50e77b4c831f6_m.jpg

Feb 14 13 08:01 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


DP
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winking_wonder
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New York, New York, US


rich osullivan wrote:
im in , what do you think ?

thanks
rich

Yes. I like the outfit on the model and she's got a good pose going. Also nice hair- love the way it's styled though expression is a little blank- could be improved. Love the smooth quality of the image though and crisp clean colors.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110912/08/4e6e20fc6c991_m.jpg

Feb 14 13 08:42 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


IMAGINERIES wrote:

No. Interesting image though with the Chinese characters and the nude model behind it. I just don't think it's my style and not sure I like the black/white tones. Also would've liked to see the model better, as it looks like she has a nice figure etc.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120708/05/4ff981d4c4956_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/20/5109f5ae21b0a_m.jpg

Feb 14 13 09:41 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Scott Sullivan Photo wrote:

I'm guessing no. but hit me with your thoughts.

Scott

It's going to be a no. The image is not really my style- it's a little dark. Might look nice in color. And the model's pose is awkward and not flattering- looks like has no neck, face/expression very intense- It's too much.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110420/13/4daf492d64ad8_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30681798 18+

Feb 14 13 05:37 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Wander Lost Photo wrote:
Well? smile

No. I don't really like the crop and the coloring's a little off- especially on the eyes- so much so that it doesn't look natural. Otherwise, model has nice features and I like her shirt. Expression is blank though.

Feb 14 13 06:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Anastasiya Kopteva
Posts: 1
Houston, Texas, US


I am interested in your opinion :]
Feb 14 13 06:41 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Faceless Illusions
Posts: 45
Anoka, Minnesota, US


winking_wonder wrote:
I would say maybe. The only reason it isn't a yes is because the image is a bit blurry and I don't like the gritty texture. But the composition- placement of model in the photo is good and I like her look. She has lovely blue eyes, hair and beautiful facial features. Her expression can be improved upon though- to be more engaged/connected.

Thanks... I'll have to see later if you would or not

Feb 14 13 08:04 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


ArtsieFartsie Facepaint wrote:
hummmm... im curious… sure!

Yes. I like the face paint - you did a good job on that- Love cheetah theme too. But I dislike the model's snarly expression.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130208/10/5115455490216_m.jpg

Feb 15 13 08:03 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dwight Smalls
Posts: 82
Jacksonville, Florida, US


Me me me?
Feb 15 13 08:15 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Chris Angelo
Posts: 142
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US


Me?
Feb 15 13 08:27 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
CallmeMikeyB
Posts: 6
Brampton, Ontario, Canada


Your insight would be awesome!
Feb 15 13 09:57 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


VictoriaLynnFrisby wrote:
Oohoohooh me! smile

I would say yes. I like the black and white tones and you wear the lingerie very well. It's sexy but not overly so - done in a classy fashion. Also like the style of your curled hair and nice features. The pose is okay- though your hand/arm placement is a bit awkward. And expression could be more engaged.

Feb 16 13 08:10 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
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New York, New York, US


WJ Photography wrote:
Go for it smile

I would say yes. I like the color scheme and the flag in the background (as well s the chain link fence- creates a nice texture in the image) goes well with the model's outfit. The outfit also shows off the model's figure well. Pose is pretty good- looks fluid, natural though expression is a little blank- Should show more connection/emotion.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120702/20/4ff26d929917e_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121108/08/509bdaa5a17bf_m.jpg

Feb 16 13 08:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Le Raie
Posts: 12
Arlington, Texas, US


Ohhh mee!!
Feb 16 13 08:40 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Carrie Gail wrote:
Being a complete noobie, I'm always down for criticism smile

No as this seems like a snapshot. Though dress is cute and looks great on you- shows off your lovely figure, it doesn't go with the background and not sure the shoes go with it too.  And the posing could be improved- the right side looks great but other arm over your head- elbow to camera is not the best angle. Also the smile seems a little forced.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130214/02/511cba9299f00_m.jpg

Feb 16 13 09:22 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
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New York, New York, US


Lone Pine Photography wrote:
I'm interested.

Maybe. Nice color tones in the image and lovely soft makeup. Also pretty hair style and like the way it frames the model's face, however the expression is sorely lacking-- She looks blank and lost. Should have more connection/emotion.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/13/5112ccbddcf18_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/13/5112ca5297026_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/13/5112c93c59754_m.jpg

Feb 16 13 11:20 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
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New York, New York, US


CallmeMikeyB wrote:
I'm interested in your opinion smile

No. This is not really my style- I wouldn't do an image like that. Also expression is a bit intense and not sure I like the crop.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130204/07/510fd2b8a38ad_m.jpg

Feb 16 13 11:29 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Court Room Media wrote:
i'll try it

No. It's not a compelling enough image for me. The high heel shoe looks nice and the legs are all right but the leg still in the car doesn't look sexy to me.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121128/04/50b604a46c88c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110712/07/4e1c561b12620_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121110/08/509e83a8aefa2_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130211/03/5118d6c5383bf_m.jpg

Feb 17 13 03:45 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
-fpc-
Posts: 593
Port Chester, New York, US


possibly ?
Feb 17 13 03:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
sensual light studios
Posts: 45
Hollywood, Florida, US


?
Feb 17 13 04:08 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Vance Photo wrote:
a little out of my league but i still want to play!!!

Have to admit -- a bit tough to make out the details but it's a yes. I really like the lighting- always a sucker for that bright lighting (don't know what it's called?) and the model looks great. I think the pose is pretty good -- shows off nice skin, nice legs etc but doesn't elongate the body or showcase her figure, which is definitely lovely. Love the high heels and hair style- Expression is okay, a little blank in the eyes but not too bad. And I like the setting, way you've used the space.

Feb 17 13 04:53 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
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New York, New York, US


JET Photo Works wrote:
Mine's not much, but I never really bought into using the picture of a subject unless it was myself…. Since I'm not much to look at I opted for something rather simple yet related….

? I'm confused about your comment... How can you not buy into using the picture of a subject unless it's yourself... You're a photographer, you have pictures of other people in your port. Anyway, it's an no. I can't make out the details too well and though the lighting is interesting, it's not really showing how you are at shooting others.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130123/20/5100b67811af3_m.jpg

Feb 17 13 05:03 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
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New York, New York, US


Velvet Paper Photo wrote:
Wow! 97 pages! Well... Why not?! Would you work with me?

Yes. I would love to do a snow shoot! And I think almost all the images are strong and well put together. I really like the first shot- beautiful styling and the model is truly love- gorgeous eyes! The next shot is also pretty good - nice outfit and scarf paired with it. I also like the red bridge but her expression isn't the best. The third shot is okay, but could do without. The bottom 2 are well done - love the bridge and background, plus the posing especially on right side is good. Though the expressions seem to be like a steely glare so could use some more connection/emotion. Overall great work!

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100707/22/4c355e7241ed9_m.jpg

Feb 17 13 07:52 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
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New York, New York, US


Lesia Joukova wrote:
I'm curious smile

I would say yes. Overall I like the warm colors and love the way hair frames the model's face-- which has a great shape and the pose is good as well. The gold foil on forehead is cool but don't like the light goldish makeup around the model's eyes- maybe if more sparkly or pronounced. Also, expression doesn't show much connection to the camera, which is important to have.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130211/13/511963864711c_m.jpg

Feb 19 13 09:27 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Philip from Scotland
Posts: 195
Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom


What do you think?
Feb 19 13 09:37 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Sky Donohue
Posts: 265
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Me? I just updated it and I'm not sure if I like it or not.
Feb 19 13 01:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Michael Keene
Posts: 8
Asheville, North Carolina, US


Oh gosh... this is going to be painful, but how about me?
Feb 19 13 02:24 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Michael McGraw wrote:
All right, I'll take a swing

Yes. I like the color scheme and lighting here. The pose is good and the lingerie looks great on you- sexy without being overly so. Shows off the model's great figure and the way her hair is styled around her face. Expression is a bit angry though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110314/15/4d7e966fea0fd_m.jpg

Feb 19 13 06:11 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


RachelReilly wrote:
Yeah, why not

I would say maybe. I like the black and white tones though think would like to see the image in color- and the bikini is cute but the way the model's posed doesn't show off her figure well- the left arm is covering much of the bikini and her stomach even though it looks like she has a fine figure. Love the curly hair style. But the expression is kind of blank.

Feb 20 13 08:15 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Ultralicious
Posts: 15
Round Rock, Texas, US


I'll play!
Feb 20 13 08:44 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Ginger Rothestein
Posts: 191
Wilmington, North Carolina, US


Do Me Please smile
Feb 20 13 08:51 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Nicki Micki wrote:
Okay big_smile

No. The blue background is pretty but the clashes with the red. The dress is okay but not sure it's the best to suit you- it isn't that flattering.. That and the pose makes you appear kind of short and a bit thick. Placement of hands is good though. But expression looks a bit surprised/glaring- should be more relaxed and connected.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120720/11/50099eae68c6a_m.jpg

Feb 20 13 10:42 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


SH PhotographyAndDesign wrote:
Sure, I'll chime in too!

Yes. I like the way you've put the overall image together. I think the first and last image are the strongest- in the middle one, the pose is not flattering and the expression is lacking. But the model looks great in the first image (in the same dress!), has a decent pose and expression. And I like the model's dress, tights, shoes in the last image - good posing to... looks natural. Also, makeup and hair is nice in that image. Cool colors overall too!

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120813/17/50299e4e03de4_m.jpg

Feb 20 13 01:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Steve Lim
Posts: 63
Falls Church, Virginia, US


fun thread..
how bout me? smile
Feb 20 13 01:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
SH PhotographyAndDesign
Posts: 170
Chester, Virginia, US


winking_wonder wrote:

Yes. I like the way you've put the overall image together. I think the first and last image are the strongest- in the middle one, the pose is not flattering and the expression is lacking. But the model looks great in the first image (in the same dress!), has a decent pose and expression. And I like the model's dress, tights, shoes in the last image - good posing to... looks natural. Also, makeup and hair is nice in that image. Cool colors overall too!

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120813/17/50299e4e03de4_m.jpg

Thanks for the critique!

Feb 20 13 01:45 pm  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
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New York, New York, US


Jackson frontier photos wrote:
I won't give up until you tell me yes.  New avatar.  :-)

I would say yes. The model is lovely especially her eyes and her expression is decent as well. I like the fur looks great on her and the pose seems natural. You've really captured the model's beauty.

Also like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/22/51134e4d62520_m.jpg

Feb 20 13 06:32 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Will Topham
Posts: 24
Baton Rouge, Louisiana, US


let me know about mine please!! smile
Feb 20 13 06:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Whatelse
Posts: 8
Purmerend, Noord-Holland, Netherlands


I?
Feb 21 13 06:59 am  Link  Quote 
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winking_wonder
Posts: 5,583
New York, New York, US


Anastasiya Kopteva wrote:
I am interested in your opinion :]

Maybe. That's quite a pose you have going on and up in the air like that- takes skill but the expression is very blank and the background is too blurry/in your face. Makes it hard for me to focus on just you.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121224/13/50d8c868c8e69_m.jpg

Feb 21 13 07:54 am  Link  Quote 
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