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picture lake fotografi
Posts: 29
Umeå, Västerbotten, Sweden


So, I have continued trying to learn my tablet. So I went to the challenges forum, and found this one to play with. Thread: http://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thread_id=494070

so this is the before:
http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/3818/modelmayhemfre.jpg

And this is what I did, thoughts?

http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/439/modelmayhemretusch.jpg
Jan 11 12 10:09 am  Link  Quote 
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jayjayokocha
Posts: 14
Cologne, North Rhine-Westphalia, Germany


In my opinion the skin looks pretty good, but i can´t really judge from this size. I think you could make the neck more symetric and the top of the swimming cap could be even. Furthermore the transitions, especially from the dark areas on her cheekbone to the lighter areas could me more like a gradient and not so harsh.
But iam not a professional retoucher, so you could wait and hear what the pros say.
Best regards.
Jan
Jan 12 12 01:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
picture lake fotografi
Posts: 29
Umeå, Västerbotten, Sweden


Good points.
I've -reworked it about from a previously saved PSD. This is how it looks now, also before reading your reply i decided to add in some more symmetry here and there(mainly mouth and nose).
Yeah, really hoping to hear something from the pro's like Natalia, or Krunoslav(right?).
So, anyway, I'm going to provide a link to full res file on imageschack. Hope it works.
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/81 … hemny.jpg/

P.S So you understand, I expect the pro's to tear me a new one - but also hoping for advice and pointers in the right direction.
Jan 12 12 03:27 pm  Link  Quote 
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