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Photographer
photobysamzy
Posts: 29
Sarajevo, Federacija Bosna i Hercegovina, Bosnia and Herzegovina


Constructive critisism wanted,thnx!

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Feb 01 12 02:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Click Hamilton
Posts: 30,864
San Diego, California, US


It looks great to me.

What was composited? Just the wall? or the floor too?


Nice color match/white balance match.

The perspective of the wall looks a little weird, like it's leaning backwards. It looks kind of like you are shootng down at a carpet, at a non-perpendicular angle. (maybe because I'm leaning back in my chair) wink

A subdued baseboard to straighten the line between the floor to the wall might be nice and add some more detail.
Feb 01 12 03:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Michael_Wesala
Posts: 22
Phoenix, Arizona, US


I'm in agreement, everything looks good but that back wall definitely has some perspective on it that's not quiet right.  I also agree that a baseboard would be a nice addition to that back wall. Would certainly marry the two a bit better.  smile
Feb 23 12 02:46 pm  Link  Quote 
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Andreea Cernestean
Posts: 495
Baia Mare, Maramureş, Romania


There's some blurring on the edge where wall meets floor, while reallistically it should be a firm straight line.
And the wood floor pattern looks a bit "wavy" to me, but that could be just the texture used. I would go for solid wood planks and you have many to choose from free on http://www.cgtextures.com/
Feb 27 12 09:59 am  Link  Quote 
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Daniel Meadows
Posts: 664
Manchester, England, United Kingdom


Andreea Cernestean wrote:
There's some blurring on the edge where wall meets floor, while reallistically it should be a firm straight line.

This immediately stands out but other than that I look at 'first composite ever' threads expecting pure horror and was disappointed to find none. Brilliant first effort, keep it up smile

Mar 12 12 04:57 am  Link  Quote 
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