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JRani Retouching
Posts: 85
Birmingham, England, United Kingdom


Hi all, I know I have a lot to learn yet so could you please help me and tell me what you think I could have improved on and what I did well?
Thank you

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Feb 16 12 08:20 am  Link  Quote 
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Koray
Posts: 6,686
Ankara, Ankara, Turkey


check your screen brightness, its probably darker than the normal. I'm seeing a mess in the background where you think is black but it isnt. Overall the image certainly doesnt look like what you see on your screen at all. To see what I mean add a brightness contrast adjustment layer on top of everything, increase the brightness and reduce the contrast.
Feb 16 12 11:16 am  Link  Quote 
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JRani Retouching
Posts: 85
Birmingham, England, United Kingdom


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Feb 16 12 11:40 am  Link  Quote 
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JRani Retouching
Posts: 85
Birmingham, England, United Kingdom


Koray wrote:
check your screen brightness, its probably darker than the normal. I'm seeing a mess in the background where you think is black but it isnt. Overall the image certainly doesnt look like what you see on your screen at all. To see what I mean add a brightness contrast adjustment layer on top of everything, increase the brightness and reduce the contrast.

Hi I will check that out, I just started using Imac's like few weeks ago the screen settings is aslo something I have not touched yet, I will take a look at that and fix the background, thank you so much for your feedback smile

Feb 16 12 11:45 am  Link  Quote 
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Ovidiu Oltean
Posts: 179
Sibiu, Sibiu, Romania


The apple looks so fresh now.
Feb 17 12 07:31 am  Link  Quote 
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