v  a  r  i  a  n  t wrote:
me?

amazing....this is stunning! amazing capture, great outdoor shot with excellent use of darkness and vibrant hues.  well done


adequate....i love the emotion and field of view in this image.  i marked it as adequate because it falls a little behind the one i marked as amazing


awful...this is just uninteresting and doesn;t hold itself up to the quality of your other work
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#19360738

amazing....i love the strength in your expression here, well done


adequate...you look lovely here, but the expression lacks energy


awful....this needs to go, it looks very amateur, adds nothing of quality to your port

amazing...this is great, pulls the viewer in, nice lighting, good concept


adequate....i love this capture, great energy to it and great lighting,however the shadows are a bit overpowering and go from dramatic to cumbersome


awful....the backdrop is ugly, the lighting is scattered and not in the proper places on the models and the effects are annoying

Über Dami wrote:

amazing....i love the strength in your expression here, well done


adequate...you look lovely here, but the expression lacks energy


awful....this needs to go, it looks very amateur, adds nothing of quality to your port

Thank you!

amazing....the natural light here is fantastic, the scene is so relaxed and natural, great capture


adequate....i love the richness of this shot, great tones, great styling, well done...my only problem with it is the crop, i think it's a bit too tight around the scene


awful...the models gaze, and the tight crop on this kill it for me

Isserley wrote:
Sure

amazing...a fantastic collaboration, and despite all the models in the shot, you stand out and hold your own with a serene gaze and great pose.  well done
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 9#25911749

adequate...you look great here, it's well posed and well done, i only ranked it as adequate because the above shot i listed just knocks this out


awful....i don't like this angle on you, and your expression is lack luster.

AJ Jenkins wrote:
Yes please!

amazing....simplistic, elegant and with perfect lighting
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 7#26849487

adequate....i love the dramatic lighting here, though it falls a bit flat near the models' legs, and i feel that takes away from image


awful....boring image, the model is over posed and the lighting does nothing to add a dramatic effect

amazing....great lighting, good mood to the image


adequate...i like the feel of this one, i just wish the shadow on her neck wasn't so overbearing


awful....this is just dull, the model isn't helping with her expression which seems lifeless

Newrisa wrote:
Not much for you to work with I know ... but if you don't mind

amazing....this shows a good emotion from you, a little bit of attitude, comes off naturally here


adequate....i like the smile and the playful feel here, but your body looks a bit tense, taking away from the ease of your smile


awful...you look confused, the pose looks too staged

Rob Latimer wrote:
Building my portfolio and looking to pare it down as well, so go for it!

amazing....messy, unique, great colors and good lighting


adequate...this is good, but the crop is right on her shoulder, making this image seem very tight


awful...the way her face is in focus,but not the hair, the weird angle and the boring floor all make this  image fall flat

Über Dami wrote:

amazing....great lighting, good mood to the image


adequate...i like the feel of this one, i just wish the shadow on her neck wasn't so overbearing


awful....this is just dull, the model isn't helping with her expression which seems lifeless

thanks for the feedback!

Über Dami wrote:

amazing....there's a great emotion and connection with the viewer here


adequate....this is a nice different approach to a headshot, but the image is blurred and grainy


awful....cheesy, cliche and boring.  too many shadows, not a hint of light on your face, extremely amateur

Thanks, I completely agree.

Keko wrote:
I don't remember asking... so I'll ask..

amazing...great connection with the viewer here, nice expression


adequate...i like the attitude in your expression here, but it slightly comes off as just bored


awful....this just looks like your hanging out in someones bedroom...it's too amateur

amazing....love the spotlighting here
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 4#28093224

adequate....the lighting is nice and the colors pop well, the model however looks a bit too messy with her hair and it's distracting


awful....flat lighting, too much going on in the background to distract

amazing.....good expression, this image showcases your look well


adequate....again, showcases you well, however it's blurred and a bit out of focus


awful....grainy facebook style image shouldn't be in your port

amazing...this is fantastic, light and shadow all falling in just the right places, good crop, great energy from the model


adequate....i love the tones in this one, i think if the crop was slightly different though it'd give it a more dramatic effect


awful....while the setting and lighting is nice, the models stiff unnatural seeming pose really wreck this one. the other images from this series are far better

Kitty Oblivious wrote:
I'd love some input

amazing....i like the somewhat ethereal feel to this one, your expression is great, the pose is nice
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#28125325

adequate...the pose is classic and fitting to the wardrobe but the expression falls flat


awful...glitter disco zombie is fun, but it looks like a picture your friend took while you were at the club.  it doesn't suit your port
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 1#27969711

Rhiana Gray wrote:
me please

amazing....you look great here, nice expression, and you pull off the look very well


adequate...great smile here, shows off your versatility with looks, just doesn't stand out as well as the other one i picked


awful....random hand in the corner of the picture, the crop makes it look like your head is floating. 

RachelKahn wrote:
Would love to know your thoughts!

amazing....elegant body shape to this pose, relaxed expression, well done


adequate...this is a good headshot, but the styling is a bit messy


awful....the pose looks too awkward, the only light on you is on the top of your head, and the expression falls flat

HarryL wrote:

amazing....i love this capture, it's raw, it's story telling


adequate....the depth to this is fantastic, and i love the setting....but her finger shadows on her face are very distracting and take away from the flow of this image


awful....out takes can be fun to post, but the yellow hue and the wrinkles in the fabric here just make it fall apart, even for what it is