Hey, welcome to the Mayhem
We are not allowed to post critiques in this section. If you really want some, post in the Genera Feedback section... but be aware that the "truth" delivered there can sometimes be quite harsh, so make sure you have a thick skin before asking.
Other than that, I hope you will have fun here. This site is great, if you can go over and ignore all the negativism (see it as the glass being half full)