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Photographer
NYC DALLAS photography
Posts: 1,096
Williamstown, Massachusetts, US


i am trying to learn so please be a lil gentle to me but Be harsh on my work though:) Any creative ideas/suggestions and feedback are welcome..
since i dont have a wacom, i couldnt really do a good D n B ... my humble attempt ...

before
https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-p_ih4DFiSJw/T6xpgEqjMgI/AAAAAAAARMM/jpbLsjBDLMU/s576/IMG_9584%2520copy.jpg

after
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120514/18/4fb1af9f6acf4.jpg

what else needs to be fixed?
incase anyone wants to play with it here is the RAW file.. DO NOT post the results anywhere but this forum (i am the copyright owner)
RAW : http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?9qc2mg5sdz9spz4
May 14 12 06:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Digital Artist
Joe Diamond
Posts: 296
Bucharest, Bucharest, Romania


I think her skin needs a little retouching,  light, contrast  need to be fixed and i would choose a nice color scheme to make her more eye catching
May 15 12 04:09 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Robert LC
Posts: 944
Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands


I liked the skintones of the original better, warmer and deeper.
Wouldn't do much on the model. You changed the background but left the wrinkles (or I see you overlayed some image on the background..maybe better to replace it altogether).
I would probably go for an outdoor setting or at least clean up the background and give the image some warmer tones.
May 15 12 05:21 am  Link  Quote 
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PANZERWOLF
Posts: 67
Vienna, Wien, Austria


in the lower left corner:
why did you put the background effect over her arm and dress? (the remaining black stripe also overlaps the gold rim of her scarf or something)

what you could do:
- remove the hair from her neck and leave the skin tones more like the original
- try to even out the skin lightness (especially under/over her collarbones)
May 15 12 06:43 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
NYC DALLAS photography
Posts: 1,096
Williamstown, Massachusetts, US


PANZERWOLF wrote:
in the lower left corner:
why did you put the background effect over her arm and dress? (the remaining black stripe also overlaps the gold rim of her scarf or something)

what you could do:
- remove the hair from her neck and leave the skin tones more like the original
- try to even out the skin lightness (especially under/over her collarbones)

skin tones- is there more magenta in the skin tone? or is just my monitor ?

May 16 12 07:03 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DareImagesArt
Posts: 48
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Parthiv, as you clearly stated, you are learning. Considering this, i think it is a pretty good attempt. If you continue to practise, you will develop your skills and you will also decide the type of results you are trying to achieve. We all have different opinions regarding any given image, and that is what makes our own work so very individual. Do we really wish to imitate others? I doubt it, some like really highly processed images with no skin flaws, and others prefer all the imperfections left in. Horses for courses!!!
My two bob's worth!!! By the way, a beautiful model...
www.dareimages.com.au
May 20 12 02:13 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Rebecca Christine
Posts: 7,068
Chester, England, United Kingdom


The hair on her neck draws my eye, get rid of that and do some of the above suggested with skin smile
May 20 12 04:25 pm  Link  Quote 
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