Parthiv, as you clearly stated, you are learning. Considering this, i think it is a pretty good attempt. If you continue to practise, you will develop your skills and you will also decide the type of results you are trying to achieve. We all have different opinions regarding any given image, and that is what makes our own work so very individual. Do we really wish to imitate others? I doubt it, some like really highly processed images with no skin flaws, and others prefer all the imperfections left in. Horses for courses!!!
My two bob's worth!!! By the way, a beautiful model.