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Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US


Pick two of my best and worst, I will return the favor.
Let's do this.
May 20 12 07:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Catchlight Portraits
Posts: 212
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Hi, Sage!

I think these are two of your best:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/17/4fab0d9ae6dbb_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/17/4fab0aa95b1fe_m.jpg

and these are two of your worst:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/11/4faab8da59c3b_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/17/4fab0bf599637_m.jpg

I'd be happy to describe why I chose those ones, but just in case that isn't what you want, I won't risk giving an unsolicited critique.  (If you do want comments, just ask.)  You're more than welcome to criticise any of mine you choose.

Have a good one!
May 20 12 08:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US


Thanks! I don't mind knowing the reasons behind your choices. It's all for fun anyway. 

Best imo

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110519/14/4dd584fe2eef1_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/11 … 11dda1.jpg


Worst imo

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/11 … c23783.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110817/14/4e4c31b79490a_m.jpg
May 20 12 08:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Catchlight Portraits
Posts: 212
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Thanks!  I didn't expect you would mind critique, but technically it would be against the rules so I thought I'd check first.

http://modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28308109

is very pleasant... the texture of the background nicely complements that of the hair and clothes, and all the elements work well in B&W.

http://modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28307907

shows marvelous expression and pose, I think... the look over the shoulder is a winner!

http://modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28303766

doesn't work as well as it could.  The contrast isn't right, and the shadows in particular are muddy and lack detail.

http://modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28307998

just doesn't quite suit my taste.  I think that most of the reason is that the shapes and colours are added to the environment rather than the subject, and have distracted from it rather than enhancing it.
May 20 12 09:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Cole Morrison
Posts: 3,641
Portland, Oregon, US


Best:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/17/4fab0a9e4e474_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/12/4faacc5336fc1_m.jpg

Worst:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120516/16/4fb431802e03e_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120520/19/4fb9a44495613_m.jpg

I'd love the favor returned smile
Thanks
May 20 12 09:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US


May 21 12 11:25 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Cynthia Serrano
Posts: 11,103
Newark, New Jersey, US


Best

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/12/4faacc5336fc1_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/17/4fab0d9ae6dbb_m.jpg

Worst

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/17/4fab0a9e4e474_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120516/16/4fb431802e03e_m.jpg
May 21 12 11:49 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US


Thanks! smile

Bests
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091223/12/4b327f20dd0a0_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101121/17/4ce9c40500c6c_m.jpg


Worst in my opinion
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120321/19/4f6a883e35f1c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090817/20/4a8a2488c0fc7_m.jpg
May 21 12 01:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph William
Posts: 1,574
Chicago, Illinois, US


Best
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/17/4fab0d9ae6dbb_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/11/4faab8da59c3b_m.jpg

Least best
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/12/4faacc5336fc1_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/17/4fab0a9e4e474_m.jpg
May 21 12 02:17 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US


^-^ Thanks! Here we go..

Greatest
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110720/14/4e274da4f1440_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100605/20/4c0b13e668493_m.jpg

Least
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090212/12/499480ead8127_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110205/05/4d4d56c2a7995_m.jpg
May 21 12 02:33 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
SpaceKitty
Posts: 27
Knoxville, Tennessee, US


Im down smile
May 21 12 03:41 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US


SpaceKitty wrote:
Im down smile

Alrighty.. smile

Greatest
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120520/20/4fb9bbad6e18f_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120506/09/4fa6a6146e0ce_m.jpg


Least 
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120520/20/4fb9bcacc95aa_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120521/15/4fbabb4d7549f_m.jpg

Your turn!

May 21 12 04:17 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
SpaceKitty
Posts: 27
Knoxville, Tennessee, US


Ok I cant get it to post the photos so I will tell you. My favorites are the one you have as your avi with the blue and then the green and blue colored one where your looking away..

My least favorite are the two less professional/ more natural ones on the top. One is infront of a wall and the other is looking back at the camera on a porch smile)
May 21 12 04:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Hacklight
Posts: 448
Macon, Georgia, US


Your best:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 9#28308109

Good both technically and artistically.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 4#28308024

Didn't like it until I blew it up. Very intriguing and sensuous.

Two that need to go:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#28307918

Too much space and not enough you, wrong focal length.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 1#28395921

same problem here.
May 22 12 09:31 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US


Thank you! smile So..

I came down to three that I really found were the best, and I couldn't choose between them so I will post all three

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101029/19/4ccb7d5b85550_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110122/19/4d3b9b6f4ef14_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100925/07/4c9e0db9c8759_m.jpg

They are all taken from great angles and give immense emotion from the models.


These next two I found weren't so great because they aren't taken from the best angle and it really affects how you view the photo.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101115/17/4ce1e13be3a05_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110417/21/4dabc402dd2b7_m.jpg
May 22 12 10:36 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Annabella Kathryn
Posts: 848
Seattle, Washington, US


Best
the first in your port

Worst
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120521/13/4fbaa26db9389_m.jpg
May 26 12 03:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Devlin
Posts: 583
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Best:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/17/4fab0d9ae6dbb_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/11/4faab8da59c3b_m.jpg

Worst:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/17/4fab0aa95b1fe_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120521/13/4fbaa26db9389_m.jpg

smile Looking good.
May 27 12 09:13 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US


annabella wrote:

Best
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111225/23/4ef81f65efe4c_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111227/03/4ef9b045df068_m.jpg
Worst
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110213/12/4d58425522fdb_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120426/17/4f99ef7d6aa5f_m.jpg

May 31 12 10:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US


Meghan Devlin wrote:

smile

Best

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120531/19/4fc8281ae7ee1_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120524/19/4fbef546b3408_m.jpg

Worst

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110320/14/4d86727978861_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120531/22/4fc8529110af9_m.jpg

May 31 12 10:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Chris Luppe
Posts: 10
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


I'm down!
May 31 12 10:41 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Loona Wynd
Posts: 1,270
South Portland, Maine, US


Best three:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/17/4fab0d9ae6dbb_m.jpg  You look natural and like you had fun.  Plus there is a bit of wild and chaotic sexyness to that pic.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120601/00/4fc87674dd2a3_m.jpg
Its a serious photo that also has a bit of a dreamy aspect to it.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120509/12/4faacc5336fc1_m.jpg  This is a decent head shot

Worst three:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120601/02/4fc888971c13e_m.jpg  There is something about the shading here I don't quite like.  Plus you can't see your eyes in this shot.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120601/02/4fc891dfdff05_m.jpg The sunglasses to me take away from the surprise in your eyes.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120529/08/4fc4efed420ed_m.jpg  To me this looks more like a snapshot than a professional shot.
Jun 04 12 12:57 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Nam Vuong
Posts: 56
Calgary, Alberta, Canada


I am down!
Jun 04 12 01:40 pm  Link  Quote 
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