Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US
Pick two of my best and worst, I will return the favor.
Let's do this.
May 20 12 07:56 pm
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Catchlight Portraits
Posts: 212
Salt Lake City, Utah, US
Hi, Sage!
I think these are two of your best:
and these are two of your worst:
I'd be happy to describe why I chose those ones, but just in case that isn't what you want, I won't risk giving an unsolicited critique. (If you
do want comments, just ask.) You're more than welcome to criticise any of mine you choose.
Have a good one!
May 20 12 08:28 pm
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Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US
Thanks! I don't mind knowing the reasons behind your choices. It's all for fun anyway.
Best imo
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/11 … 11dda1.jpg
Worst imo
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/11 … c23783.jpg
May 20 12 08:40 pm
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Catchlight Portraits
Posts: 212
Salt Lake City, Utah, US
Thanks! I didn't expect you would mind critique, but technically it would be against the rules so I thought I'd check first.
http://modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28308109
is very pleasant... the texture of the background nicely complements that of the hair and clothes, and all the elements work well in B&W.
http://modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28307907
shows marvelous expression and pose, I think... the look over the shoulder is a winner!
http://modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28303766
doesn't work as well as it could. The contrast isn't right, and the shadows in particular are muddy and lack detail.
http://modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28307998
just doesn't quite suit my taste. I think that most of the reason is that the shapes and colours are added to the environment rather than the subject, and have distracted from it rather than enhancing it.
May 20 12 09:27 pm
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Cole Morrison
Posts: 3,641
Portland, Oregon, US
Best:
Worst:
I'd love the favor returned
Thanks
May 20 12 09:31 pm
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Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US
May 21 12 11:25 am
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Cynthia Serrano
Posts: 11,103
Newark, New Jersey, US
May 21 12 11:49 am
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Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US
May 21 12 01:14 pm
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Joseph William
Posts: 1,574
Chicago, Illinois, US
May 21 12 02:17 pm
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Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US
^-^ Thanks! Here we go..
Greatest
Least
May 21 12 02:33 pm
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SpaceKitty
Posts: 27
Knoxville, Tennessee, US
Im down
May 21 12 03:41 pm
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Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US
May 21 12 04:17 pm
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SpaceKitty
Posts: 27
Knoxville, Tennessee, US
Ok I cant get it to post the photos so I will tell you. My favorites are the one you have as your avi with the blue and then the green and blue colored one where your looking away..
My least favorite are the two less professional/ more natural ones on the top. One is infront of a wall and the other is looking back at the camera on a porch
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May 21 12 04:49 pm
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Hacklight
Posts: 448
Macon, Georgia, US
Your best:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 9#28308109
Good both technically and artistically.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 4#28308024
Didn't like it until I blew it up. Very intriguing and sensuous.
Two that need to go:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#28307918
Too much space and not enough you, wrong focal length.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 1#28395921
same problem here.
May 22 12 09:31 am
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Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US
Thank you!
So..
I came down to three that I really found were the best, and I couldn't choose between them so I will post all three
They are all taken from great angles and give immense emotion from the models.
These next two I found weren't so great because they aren't taken from the best angle and it really affects how you view the photo.
May 22 12 10:36 am
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Annabella Kathryn
Posts: 848
Seattle, Washington, US
Best
the first in your port
Worst
May 26 12 03:52 pm
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Meghan Devlin
Posts: 583
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada
May 27 12 09:13 am
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Model
Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US
May 31 12 10:35 pm
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Profile Inactive Sorry
Posts: 76
Brooklyn, New York, US
May 31 12 10:38 pm
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Chris Luppe
Posts: 10
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
I'm down!
May 31 12 10:41 pm
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Loona Wynd
Posts: 1,270
South Portland, Maine, US
Best three:
You look natural and like you had fun. Plus there is a bit of wild and chaotic sexyness to that pic.
Its a serious photo that also has a bit of a dreamy aspect to it.
This is a decent head shot
Worst three:
There is something about the shading here I don't quite like. Plus you can't see your eyes in this shot.
The sunglasses to me take away from the surprise in your eyes.
To me this looks more like a snapshot than a professional shot.
Jun 04 12 12:57 pm
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Nam Vuong
Posts: 56
Calgary, Alberta, Canada
I am down!
Jun 04 12 01:40 pm
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