Please critique this photo

Not many people seem to like it. Please do not critique model. Any help is greatly appreciated. If it helps I used a rectangular soft box in front a qflash as a hair light behind bike towards rear tire. 2nd qflash to camera left and I believe behind tire pointed towards model's back this one with a mini soft box. What works and why, what doesn't and why, what could I do next time.
Thanks,
-Mark

I'd get rid of the yellow noise in the background using an image editing software.

In general is a good shot, an accurate composition with no strange details, a not very innovative idea, but nothing else

Okay, it was just a joke, but the floor indeed looks pee-stained, which ruins your pic. Just get rid of that and lessen the brightness of the red of her skirt.

Otherwise, the lighting is nice, and the composition is right, with the bike - hot girl combo, less is always more! ^^
I don't particularly like your framing, though, but I see, you use it as soe kind of a mark. On this shot, it looks like there was something /a hole or a door/ on the cieling.

Thanks everyone so far for your tips. I appreciate your help.