Here's a shot from my iPhone:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 4#28506534  18+
Does anyone like this one...

Not very effective

boring, actually

Maybe if they were holding/eating icecream

that's fighting? hm.

At least give them a pillow or something!

No. Sorry, not a big fan as it lacks 'punch' [pun intended].

I think I'd like the model on the left, alone, cropped from the waist up and filling the frame.  She's got a great profile and I like her expression. EDIT: ...and I like the silhouette of her hair.

I wouldn't know it's a fight. The image shows some contempt from girl on the left toward girl on the right. We need to figure out what that contempt could be.

"Backstage at a fashion show" might be a more interesting caption.

Looks like a snapshot of a conversation.  I can hear it now "What do you think with the jerk taking a picture with his iPhone?  Who knows, I hope we break for lunch soon."

DP

You have a knack at doing brilliant stuff...not this time.