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Photographer
Dorian05
Posts: 34
Milan, Lombardy, Italy


Hello everybody, this is my first retouch after seeing dvds from Natalia & Vitaly (amazing resources!). I'm open to constructive critics, the shoot is made by me, and is meant to be a practicing image. i tried to make a rollover image, tell if it works or not!

https://sites.google.com/site/rollovertest01/
May 26 12 03:12 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Nico Simon Princely
Posts: 1,647
Las Vegas, Nevada, US


Dorian05 wrote:
Hello everybody, this is my first retouch after seeing dvds from Natalia & Vitaly (amazing resources!). I'm open to constructive critics, the shoot is made by me, and is meant to be a practicing image. i tried to make a rollover image, tell if it works or not!

https://sites.google.com/site/rollovertest01/

Your link is not working.

May 26 12 03:23 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dorian05
Posts: 34
Milan, Lombardy, Italy


are you sure? because i've tried from different computers and it works! anyway i'll post here the before/after.

before: http://www.flickr.com/photos/idorian/72 … hotostream
after:   http://www.flickr.com/photos/idorian/72 … otostream/
May 26 12 05:41 am  Link  Quote 
Digital Artist
Joe Diamond
Posts: 267
Bucharest, Bucharest, Romania


Dorian05 wrote:
are you sure? because i've tried from different computers and it works! anyway i'll post here the before/after.

before: http://www.flickr.com/photos/idorian/72 … hotostream
after:   http://www.flickr.com/photos/idorian/72 … otostream/

There are many people who dont know how to use web links big_smile, probably he didnt know he has to add cursor over the image smile Its working fine


Regarding your retouching for the first one i think the skin is amazing, but i am not a retoucher...In my opinion you should play a little more with light and color.

May 26 12 06:21 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dorian05
Posts: 34
Milan, Lombardy, Italy


my purpose was to  train on skin retouch mainly, i noticed a lack of colors, but it was not my goal to achieve a colorful portrait. i'm much worried about sharpness and composition, i think there's something missing. anyway, on the same page i've added another pic from the same shooting, but with different light. check it out and tell me what you think about it.
May 28 12 06:25 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Darren Brade
Posts: 2,746
London, England, United Kingdom


Dorian05 wrote:
are you sure? because i've tried from different computers and it works! anyway i'll post here the before/after.

before: http://www.flickr.com/photos/idorian/72 … hotostream
after:   http://www.flickr.com/photos/idorian/72 … otostream/

Do you still have these up, I don't have permission to view them

Jun 30 12 04:48 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
REVIVE retouch
Posts: 63
Margate, England, United Kingdom


error page on your original link and wont let me view your other two links sad
Jun 30 12 05:04 am  Link  Quote 
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