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Kim Kailani
Posts: 51
West Chester, Pennsylvania, US


Hey guys-
So I've only been modeling for 4 months now, and want to make sure I'm working on the right things instead of creating bad habits.

If you've got time, check my portfolio and give me some feedback- constructive criticism is welcome!

If not, thanks anyway smile
Jun 05 12 11:08 pm  Link  Quote 
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Eralar
Posts: 1,465
Sherbrooke, Quebec, Canada


Hi,

I think you have a nice start. I love your look, and your eyes smile

If there is anything I could say to help you improve your skills as a model, and your portfolio, it would be to work on emoting. I can only really see one set of emotion in your port.

Browse through models ports and lists with "emoting" as their titles, and try replicating those emotions in front of your mirror. Don't fake the emotions, for each emotion or set of emotion, try to find a thougt or an event you remember that brings you that emotion when you think about it, just like actors do.

Hope this helps

Eric
Jun 06 12 01:04 pm  Link  Quote 
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Veritas4Venus
Posts: 135
Baltimore, Maryland, US


You've got some great images in your port, but there is one that, in my opinion, needs to go:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120605/11/4fce52d3573f6_m.jpg

The angle and lighting do not flatter your face, and the composition doesn't work. You've got tons of other much better shots that show off your figure.
Jun 12 12 05:47 am  Link  Quote 
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dave phoenix
Posts: 1,197
Phoenix, Arizona, US


what're your goals?
Jun 16 12 01:31 am  Link  Quote 
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