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Model
NicoleNudes
Posts: 2,887
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Thanks guys smile

Already made my choices!
Thread was bumped from June 19th.
Jun 18 12 10:27 am  Link  Quote 
Artist/Painter
Vincent Wolff
Posts: 2,819
Chicago, Illinois, US


NicoleNudes wrote:
Got these back from a shoot I did 2 months ago. I was thinking of adding the 1st picture or the 5th one. Possibly the 3rd. Just wanted to get more opinions on them. All are 18+ for boobies.

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-bdY4WBh7VQ8/T … G_9753.jpg

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-vhBQiZghM_k/T … G_9760.jpg

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-IDBMRQKYJUY/T … G_9817.jpg

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-AfyGVob3rhM/T … G_9843.jpg

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-zHr-vltStWc/T … G_9871.jpg

If you have the time, please let me know what you think of my overall port and if there's anything you think I should add/change/delete.

I really like your port, as I discovered it when you answered my thread last week.
My favorites are the first and third.  they are all good, those struck me the most

Jun 18 12 11:20 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Exposed Beauty Imaging
Posts: 134
Glendale, Arizona, US


As your profile says "My boobies are awesome", they are  smile

I'd go with #1 if you're only picking one.  #4 if you want a second, non-18+ shot.

Fred
Jun 18 12 12:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Nelia
Posts: 2,112
San Francisco, California, US


I personally like #3 & #5 the best out of the group.
Jun 18 12 12:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dan K Photography
Posts: 5,380
STATEN ISLAND, New York, US


5, 3, 1 in that order for me. Great Work.
Jun 18 12 12:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Shutterbug5269
Posts: 16,070
West Winfield, New York, US


NicoleNudes wrote:
Got these back from a shoot I did 2 months ago. I was thinking of adding the 1st picture or the 5th one. Possibly the 3rd. Just wanted to get more opinions on them. All are 18+ for boobies.

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-bdY4WBh7VQ8/T … G_9753.jpg

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-vhBQiZghM_k/T … G_9760.jpg

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-IDBMRQKYJUY/T … G_9817.jpg

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-AfyGVob3rhM/T … G_9843.jpg

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-zHr-vltStWc/T … G_9871.jpg

If you have the time, please let me know what you think of my overall port and if there's anything you think I should add/change/delete.

I really like the first three and the last one.  You should definitely post those.

You overall portfolio looks solid.  Though I would love to shoot some outdoor work with you if you ever get into NY State.

Mark

Jun 18 12 12:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
dgold
Posts: 9,784
North Smithfield, Rhode Island, US


For me #1 and #3 are SENSATIONAL !!
Jun 18 12 12:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
William Kious
Posts: 8,822
Delphos, Ohio, US


1: There's entirely too much color noise on your face. It's distracting as hell. I don't really care for the cropping of the top of your head, either.

2: Not really crazy about the shot, but it would add an okay "butt shot" to your port.

3: Nice "eroticism" with this one, but the blue catch light doesn't really work.

4: Not bad... would add something different to your portfolio.

5: A nice art nude, but not stronger than what you've already got.
Jun 18 12 12:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Orlandon Powers
Posts: 14
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


Ranked from highest to lowest Excitement!:3,5,1,2,4
Jun 18 12 04:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Cross Photo
Posts: 1,502
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada


The third, definitely.
Jun 18 12 04:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Carlos Occidental
Posts: 10,419
Pasadena, California, US


As it stands, your portfolio is quite good. 
None of these are acceptable.
Jun 18 12 05:08 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
VA Photographer
Posts: 199
Richmond, Virginia, US


I like #1 and #5 the best
Jun 18 12 05:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
afplcc
Posts: 5,734
Fairfax, Virginia, US


NicoleNudes wrote:
Got these back from a shoot I did 2 months ago. I was thinking of adding the 1st picture or the 5th one. Possibly the 3rd. Just wanted to get more opinions on them. All are 18+ for boobies.

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-bdY4WBh7VQ8/T … G_9753.jpg

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-vhBQiZghM_k/T … G_9760.jpg

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-IDBMRQKYJUY/T … G_9817.jpg

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-AfyGVob3rhM/T … G_9843.jpg

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-zHr-vltStWc/T … G_9871.jpg

If you have the time, please let me know what you think of my overall port and if there's anything you think I should add/change/delete.

I like #4 the best.  I'm a sucker for DoF shots and that one is lovely.  I tend not to be wild about shots that talk a model with long, lovely lines and then chop off a foot (like in #5) and break up the flow.

Ed

Jun 18 12 05:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
J O H N A L L A N
Posts: 7,277
Santa Ana, California, US


The only one I'm really feeling is the 4th one. The others are just a bit glamory for my taste.
Jun 18 12 05:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
NicoleNudes
Posts: 2,887
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Thanks for the feedback everyone! smile

I don't think this will be easy just picking one or two to add lol.
Jun 18 12 07:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MKPhoto
Posts: 5,642
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada


#4 has something in it, the DoF plus your involved facial expression make something happen, the rest looks like posing for a GWC (a good one!)  in the rec room. The erotic one is hot, though.
Jun 18 12 07:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Wysiwyg Photography
Posts: 6,282
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Carlos Occidental wrote:
As it stands, your portfolio is quite good. 
None of these are acceptable.

I'm going to agree with this one except I'm going to add that in the first few shots, your poses are fine... it's just the 'crop' in these images that make these shots just "OK".

Jun 18 12 10:42 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Stacey S
Posts: 3,131
Long Beach, California, US


I like #5 but I want to magically trim your bangs so that I can see your eyes better.
None of these jump out enough to add to your already solid portfolio.
Although some (like #3 are sexier/edgier than the rest), so it's up to you what you want to reflect.
Jun 18 12 10:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Eros Fine Art Photo
Posts: 1,859
Torrance, California, US


#1 shows your body well, but I hate that your foot got cropped off.  I also don't like the lighting, especially that super bright light behind you.  I'm not feelin' the pose either. 

#2 is sexy and shows your figure well, but again that bright light just dominates the image. 

#3 is just a little to staged and cheesy looking.  You're much better than that, so I'd say lose it (since more than likely it will only bring you more requests for the same theme).

#4 is a little too close and kind of dull.  I'd lose that one too. 

#5 shows off your body best, but none of them are all that great in my opinion.  I don't like the way parts of you were cropped by either the furniture or the framing of the shot.  I also don't like the super bright light being in the shot.  If you're going to keep any of them, then I'd say use this one. 

(Or just come shoot with me one of these days wink )
Jun 19 12 12:52 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
F Manning Photography
Posts: 4
Austin, Texas, US


Nice port I like 3 and 4 with 4 being a nice change of pace to your port.
Jun 19 12 01:07 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
curious D
Posts: 7
Owensboro, Kentucky, US


I thought all of the photos are well taken and showed you in a very favorable light.
Jun 30 12 08:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
JDF Photography
Posts: 1,733
Marengo, Ohio, US


#3!
Jul 01 12 01:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
TampaFoto
Posts: 662
Tampa, Florida, US


#3
Jul 01 12 01:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Darrel Camden-Smith
Posts: 24
Boksburg, Gauteng, South Africa


#1 for sure .... the other seem to be lacking something.
Jul 02 12 06:11 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Merry Jane
Posts: 986
Thief River Falls, Minnesota, US


3rd or 4th.
Jul 02 12 08:00 am  Link  Quote 
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