NicoleNudes wrote: Got these back from a shoot I did 2 months ago. I was thinking of adding the 1st picture or the 5th one. Possibly the 3rd. Just wanted to get more opinions on them. All are 18+ for boobies.
If you have the time, please let me know what you think of my overall port and if there's anything you think I should add/change/delete.
I really like your port, as I discovered it when you answered my thread last week.
My favorites are the first and third. they are all good, those struck me the most
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NicoleNudes wrote: Got these back from a shoot I did 2 months ago. I was thinking of adding the 1st picture or the 5th one. Possibly the 3rd. Just wanted to get more opinions on them. All are 18+ for boobies.
NicoleNudes wrote: Got these back from a shoot I did 2 months ago. I was thinking of adding the 1st picture or the 5th one. Possibly the 3rd. Just wanted to get more opinions on them. All are 18+ for boobies.
If you have the time, please let me know what you think of my overall port and if there's anything you think I should add/change/delete.
I like #4 the best. I'm a sucker for DoF shots and that one is lovely. I tend not to be wild about shots that talk a model with long, lovely lines and then chop off a foot (like in #5) and break up the flow.
#4 has something in it, the DoF plus your involved facial expression make something happen, the rest looks like posing for a GWC (a good one!) in the rec room. The erotic one is hot, though.
Carlos Occidental wrote: As it stands, your portfolio is quite good.
None of these are acceptable.
I'm going to agree with this one except I'm going to add that in the first few shots, your poses are fine... it's just the 'crop' in these images that make these shots just "OK".
I like #5 but I want to magically trim your bangs so that I can see your eyes better.
None of these jump out enough to add to your already solid portfolio.
Although some (like #3 are sexier/edgier than the rest), so it's up to you what you want to reflect.
#1 shows your body well, but I hate that your foot got cropped off. I also don't like the lighting, especially that super bright light behind you. I'm not feelin' the pose either.
#2 is sexy and shows your figure well, but again that bright light just dominates the image.
#3 is just a little to staged and cheesy looking. You're much better than that, so I'd say lose it (since more than likely it will only bring you more requests for the same theme).
#4 is a little too close and kind of dull. I'd lose that one too.
#5 shows off your body best, but none of them are all that great in my opinion. I don't like the way parts of you were cropped by either the furniture or the framing of the shot. I also don't like the super bright light being in the shot. If you're going to keep any of them, then I'd say use this one.