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Model
Mary Thomson
Posts: 1,291
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Hey friends, do you like any of these?

1st
http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/179501_10151922312574041_2123913233_n.jpg


2nd
http://a2.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/s720x720/484268_10151922312704041_2131896291_n.jpg

3rd
http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/s720x720/600658_10151922312774041_1549868157_n.jpg

4th
http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/s720x720/421486_10151922332359041_103749056_n.jpg
Jun 19 12 01:55 am  Link  Quote 
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Lacey Riot
Posts: 7
Cupertino, California, US


You are absolutely beautiful, and these all seem candid, but they all have a sort of... Facebook-y feel to them, if you know what I mean?
Jun 19 12 02:17 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Mary Thomson
Posts: 1,291
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Lacey Riot  wrote:
You are absolutely beautiful, and these all seem candid, but they all have a sort of... Facebook-y feel to them, if you know what I mean?

I agree, They are not really up to modelling par, but I needed a new portrait that shows how I look currently. Next I'll need a new full body shot. I haven't modeled in far to long and my images are beginning to feel outdated!

Jun 19 12 02:34 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 7,717
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


Sorry, but not for your portfolio

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100821/01/4c6f8e0f99091_m.jpg
More like this please
Jun 19 12 06:39 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Cherrystone
Posts: 32,929
Columbus, Ohio, US


Seriously....I wouldn't use those on a bet. What you already have is 100x better. smile
Jun 19 12 08:09 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Edward Shaw Photography
Posts: 309
Birmingham, England, United Kingdom


Sticking some random effects on the top of snapshots doesn't stop them being (and looking like) snapshots. You need to try harder, with a competent photographer.
Jun 19 12 10:27 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Mary Thomson
Posts: 1,291
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Thanks everyone, and I do agree. I was just desperately looking for an update smile
Jun 19 12 02:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
KendraDee
Posts: 94
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


You look very pretty in all of these, but as an avatar the one you are using looks a bit...silly.
Jun 19 12 02:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Art Silva Photography
Posts: 6,771
Santa Barbara, California, US


I'll put it this way, You're an absolutely lovely model but if you approached me with these pictures (I say pictures because they are point-and-shoot snapshot-ish), I would pass.
Your port is fine without them. I did notice you posted the second one and in my honest opinion it is bringing your "modeling" port down, it has amateur-instagram-Facebook-model written all over it.
Hope that wasn't harsh but you are better than that smile
Jun 19 12 09:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Luccia
Posts: 5,745
Boulder, Colorado, US


No. Not very professional and like everyone else has stated you have much better in your portfolio.  BTW, I really love the shape of your eyebrows ^_^
Jun 19 12 09:26 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Mary Thomson
Posts: 1,291
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Thank you everyone for your input. I'll take your advice and remove the one I added. Hopefully I'll have better luck next time!!

(And thank you so much for the eyebrow comment!!!)
Jun 20 12 01:02 am  Link  Quote 
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