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White Noise retouching
Posts: 45
Canberra, Australian Capital Territory, Australia


Id really love some feedback on these 2 images smile  i still cant get the hang of posting the large images on here for some reason but if you click, it will go to it.  the photos after them are the full retouch by themselves too.
Thanks in adance

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120619/04/4fe0633b037d7_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120625/03/4fe83e8753497_m.jpg
Jun 25 12 03:45 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
-Ira
Posts: 2,187
New York, New York, US


Nice work.

#1 - I might pulled up the right side of the subjects mouth to match the left a bit more. 

#2 - I like the original background.  Especially considering this is more portraiture than head shot since the subject isn't looking at the camera.  Perhaps just remove the lower dark line.
Jun 25 12 12:19 pm  Link  Quote 
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Brick Wilson
Posts: 370
Carol Stream, Illinois, US


Top image came out really well. Her eyes are different - it's hard to tell if they're really that way or there was a flash accident, so I'd consider adding a little saturation to the left eye to define it more.

Bottom image has some very unflattering bags under her eyes. I agree that the original background image was more interesting than the flat gray.
Jun 26 12 08:26 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
White Noise retouching
Posts: 45
Canberra, Australian Capital Territory, Australia


Her eyes are actually different colours which is why i love the photos of this model!  but yes i agree i could make it stand out a little more smile
I chose the plain background for the 2nd because I thought the other looked a tad dirty even without the scratches and lines etc, but no doubt more interesting.
Thanks!
Jun 26 12 11:24 pm  Link  Quote 
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