Well executed and well edited. This is the one image in your port that makes you look like a professional.
Unflattering lighting and angle. Badly fitting lingerie and the most god awful nail varnish. Plus you caught her with a weird expression.
Stop standing over your models to take a photo:
It ALWAYS makes them look short, fat and cramped into an uncomfortable position, as if they are trying to crawl into a corner to get away from you.