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Photographer
J D L Photography
Posts: 6
Jacksonville, Florida, US


It's been a year since my first shoot outside of my family. How am I doing? Please give the best and/or worst photo. A reason would be great.

Thanks!
Jun 25 12 06:01 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Brick Wilson
Posts: 316
Carol Stream, Illinois, US


Definitely making improvements.  I say the best is #3 or 7. The girl pointing directly at the camera is kind of silly and redundant in your port.
Jun 26 12 10:29 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Mea Culpa
Posts: 332
Brisbane, Queensland, Australia


Best image:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120611/16/4fd67ac2b708b_m.jpg
Well executed and well edited. This is the one image in your port that makes you look like a professional.

Worst image:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120627/20/4febd22307d64_m.jpg
Unflattering lighting and angle. Badly fitting lingerie and the most god awful nail varnish. Plus you caught her with a weird expression.

Stop standing over your models to take a photo:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111212/09/4ee63465bdd35_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120312/18/4f5ea8aeca810_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120312/18/4f5ea199f3bcf_m.jpg
It ALWAYS makes them look short, fat and cramped into an uncomfortable position, as if they are trying to crawl into a corner to get away from you.
Jun 28 12 07:27 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 7,711
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


Mea Culpa wrote:
Best image:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120611/16/4fd67ac2b708b_m.jpg
Well executed and well edited. This is the one image in your port that makes you look like a professional.

Worst image:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120627/20/4febd22307d64_m.jpg
Unflattering lighting and angle. Badly fitting lingerie and the most god awful nail varnish. Plus you caught her with a weird expression.

Stop standing over your models to take a photo:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111212/09/4ee63465bdd35_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120312/18/4f5ea8aeca810_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120312/18/4f5ea199f3bcf_m.jpg
It ALWAYS makes them look short, fat and cramped into an uncomfortable position, as if they are trying to crawl into a corner to get away from you.

+1

Jun 28 12 01:04 pm  Link  Quote 
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