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Photographer

Erotique Noir

Posts: 8

San Jose, California, US

Andrea Rosu wrote:
Hmmm...there's potential...I like the angle and the placement and tension in her hand. But the lighting isn't good...which detracts from the image entirely

Jul 01 12 11:00 am Link

Photographer

Erotique Noir

Posts: 8

San Jose, California, US

Thanks for the response.  And I appreciate the constructive criticism.  I agree completely.

Jul 01 12 11:02 am Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Images By Ed wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27699211

It's a nice shot, technically solid, beautiful model. But there isn't much more to it. I would categorize this more as glamour nude.

Jul 01 12 05:43 pm Link

Photographer

Images By Ed

Posts: 51

Columbus, Georgia, US

Andrea Rosu wrote:
It's a nice shot, technically solid, beautiful model. But there isn't much more to it. I would categorize this more as glamour nude.

Fair enough.
Now come to Georgia! :-)

Jul 01 12 05:50 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Dizon Photography

Posts: 3

San Diego, California, US

Jul 01 12 05:51 pm Link

Photographer

BareLight

Posts: 512

Kansas City, Kansas, US

Andrea Rosu wrote:
Thank you for being a good sport of my less than glowing response. smile I appreciate it!

And I appreciate your honesty! The pose was certainly run of the mill, but I still like the photo in large part because I carved the big head in the background. smile

As I originally stated, I don't have a lot of erotic material posted here on MM.  If you'd like to take a look at another piece of mine, click on the little link below.  I don't do a lot of straight-up bondage stuff, but I do like to create artistic erotica.

18+
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/ … 53vxvn.jpg

Jul 01 12 10:16 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Images By Ed wrote:

Fair enough.
Now come to Georgia! :-)

Will do!! big_smile
I'll let you know when that happens.

Jul 02 12 03:12 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Mark Dizon Photography wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 0#28697570

my recent shot

I think it's lovely.  I love the soft and intimate lighting.  It looks like a beautiful and sensual moment.

Jul 02 12 03:17 pm Link

Photographer

DR Boisvert Photography

Posts: 558

San Antonio, Texas, US

If you're still down for it, this is probably my best erotica posted at the moment.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 2ac3aa.jpg  18+

Jul 02 12 03:58 pm Link

Model

PALOMA

Posts: 19

Sunnyvale, California, US

Jul 02 12 04:17 pm Link

Photographer

tenrocK photo

Posts: 5486

New York, New York, US

Jul 02 12 04:40 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

BareLight Photography wrote:

And I appreciate your honesty! The pose was certainly run of the mill, but I still like the photo in large part because I carved the big head in the background. smile

As I originally stated, I don't have a lot of erotic material posted here on MM.  If you'd like to take a look at another piece of mine, click on the little link below.  I don't do a lot of straight-up bondage stuff, but I do like to create artistic erotica.

18+
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/ … 53vxvn.jpg

It's a beautiful image...and the rope work is stunning!!

For me...I'm not sure I would categorize it as erotica...but I think this is truly subjective/a personal opinion.  I'm entranced by the beauty of it and the technical skill that I fail to feel anything from it.

Jul 03 12 11:17 am Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

DR Boisvert Photography wrote:
If you're still down for it, this is probably my best erotica posted at the moment.

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 2ac3aa.jpg  18+

It's a nice image...but I definitely wouldn't categorize it as erotic art.  It falls more within a fine art nude image.

Jul 03 12 11:18 am Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Paloma E wrote:
Check mine out!


https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/2684929/viewall

It would be a pleasure to check you out...but you didn't link me to an image to critique.

Jul 03 12 11:18 am Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

tenrocK photo wrote:
Let's see... 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 9#24211896

It's an interesting image...and I very much like it...especially due to its texture.  I don't feel much from it, but I like it nonetheless.

Jul 03 12 11:19 am Link

Photographer

Rick Edwards

Posts: 6185

Wilmington, Delaware, US

https://www.modelmayhem.com/7495#57207

what say you?

but I find the one below interesting

https://www.modelmayhem.com/7495#57144

Jul 03 12 11:40 am Link

Photographer

Rick Edwards

Posts: 6185

Wilmington, Delaware, US

fun thread

Jul 03 12 11:41 am Link

Photographer

MN Photography

Posts: 1432

Chicago, Illinois, US

I seldom look at this forum, but this thread is kind of interesting. 

Here is one of my 18+ images:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 1#20846541

Jul 03 12 12:19 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Rick Edwards wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/7495#57207

what say you?

but I find the one below interesting

https://www.modelmayhem.com/7495#57144

Sorry for the delay!

The first one is lovely. I like the sculptural quality to it. The lighting does a great job of accentuating lines, curves, and the connection between the two.

And I'm totally missing the second one. Apart from the belief that technically it's not very good...I don't understand what is going on and why she has that facial expression. I don't see the erotic in this at all.

Jul 06 12 11:54 am Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

MN Photography wrote:
I seldom look at this forum, but this thread is kind of interesting. 

Here is one of my 18  images:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 1#20846541

There's a sweetness to this image that is nice. But I can't help but feel like the connection between the two models isn't there. It almost feels like they're posing without consideration of the other model.

Jul 06 12 11:56 am Link

Photographer

Looknsee Photography

Posts: 26342

Portland, Oregon, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/060204/11/43e4e6a99b259_m.jpg

Jul 06 12 12:08 pm Link

Photographer

Darin B

Posts: 998

San Diego, California, US

Jul 06 12 02:12 pm Link

Photographer

R Michael Walker

Posts: 11987

Costa Mesa, California, US

Jul 06 12 02:18 pm Link

Photographer

PR Zone

Posts: 897

London, England, United Kingdom

Jul 06 12 03:44 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Looknsee Photography wrote:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/060204/11/43e4e6a99b259_m.jpg

This is a lovely kissing image.  It feels intimate and genuine.  My criticism: the background is dated and not only doesn't add anything, but I find it distracting.  Also, the woman's top (the one on the right) doesn't work in this image.  It feels like an afterthought, and I feel like the styling of an image is just as important as the emotion created.

Jul 06 12 05:05 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Darin B wrote:
Sorta 18+. Thanks!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28677260

It makes me want to lick her lips...which is a very good thing! smile

Basically, it creates an erotic response within me (kinda like a boner!! wink ), and that's what I yearn for from erotic art.

This sir, is fucking hot! Congrats!!

Jul 06 12 05:07 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

R Michael Walker wrote:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 46#5248046 .

I love this!  I love how there's a great connection between the two models...but also how this was also very well thought out.  It looks posed, but it works really well here.  The lines, shapes, and colors all work together to make a whole greater than the sum of its parts.  Thank you for sharing.

Jul 06 12 05:10 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

PR Zone wrote:
If the thread's still active... 

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 0bca54.jpg

I've resurrected it! smile

I like it...and find it interesting.  It's curious and sexy...and the curiosity of it makes me smile and like it that much more.

Jul 06 12 05:11 pm Link

Photographer

PR Zone

Posts: 897

London, England, United Kingdom

Thanks or taking the time to do this :-)

Can a shot be erotic, for a woman, with no flesh on display?...

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 5#26203955

Jul 06 12 05:20 pm Link

Artist/Painter

J Hale

Posts: 7

Los Angeles, California, US

She wants you to take a bite...and she glows in the dark!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 7#29000257

Jul 06 12 05:21 pm Link

Photographer

KB Photo

Posts: 67

Paonia, Colorado, US

Is the thread still happening? Here's one of mine:
18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/2950010

Jul 06 12 05:24 pm Link

Photographer

fallingwater

Posts: 138

Tampa, Florida, US



i hope i did this right.......

Jul 06 12 05:28 pm Link

Photographer

fallingwater

Posts: 138

Tampa, Florida, US

Jul 06 12 05:30 pm Link

Photographer

INKEDividuals

Posts: 4023

Seattle, Washington, US

Jul 06 12 05:32 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

PR Zone wrote:
Thanks or taking the time to do this :-)

Can a shot be erotic, for a woman, with no flesh on display?...

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 5#26203955

I very much believe that an image can be wonderfully erotic without any flesh shown.  However...I wouldn't categorize yours as erotic.  I understand what you were trying to do, but I think it misses the mark.

Jul 06 12 06:35 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

J Hale wrote:
She wants you to take a bite...and she glows in the dark!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 7#29000257

This is very sexy!  I like the intensity of the colors used and her facial expression...and of course the position...'cause what is there NOT to like about this position!! wink

Jul 06 12 06:36 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

KB Photo wrote:
Is the thread still happening? Here's one of mine:
18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/2950010

This is a beautiful image...that I would mostly place under "fine art nude".  But there's a gorgeous sensuality to it as well, so I can see how it may seep into the erotic.

Jul 06 12 06:37 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

fallingwater wrote:
try again.....fingers crossed

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29010861

Personally, I find it "meh".  It feels a bit cliche due to its setting and their facial expressions.

Jul 06 12 06:38 pm Link

Model

Andrea Rosu

Posts: 1670

San Francisco, California, US

Professor Oni wrote:
if you're still at it:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 2#28411902  (M)

I like the simplicity of the image...and the stark colors.  But I feel like there's something missing.  Perhaps energy...I feel like the image is kind of stagnant overall (and not because she's bound and unable to move!).

Jul 06 12 06:40 pm Link

Photographer

BkkDan

Posts: 157

Bangkok, Bangkok, Thailand

Andrea Rosu wrote:
I have some down time, and I'm always looking to be inspired.  With that being said, what feeds my belly and heart (amongst other part of me!) is erotic art.

I will give you my thoughts on one image you consider to be erotic.  Please link it if it shows boobies or other delicious parts.

I will focus mostly on: if I consider it to be erotic, why yes or no.

And last but not least...this is solely my opinion.  I realize that it's quite subjective, and please take it with the grain of salt my thoughts may hold!! wink

Here are mine 18+ so not showing directly:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 8#29000821
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 8#29000428
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 8#28972529

Jul 06 12 08:08 pm Link