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CrystalAshley
Posts: 1
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


I'm a new model who has done three shoots in the last two weeks.
I've done some modelling in the past as well, but the shoots were much more candid and lacked experienced photographers.
What do you think of my little portfolio so far? Would love some detailed critiques.
Jun 29 12 04:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Done and Gone
Posts: 7,650
Chiredzi, Masvingo, Zimbabwe


You are lovely and off to a good start. I don't care for the composition on the first photo in the first row, you seem off center in the wrong direction to me. The bright red wall in the first photo second row is too distracting, maybe it could be made less vibrant. I don't care for how the light hits your face on the third photo in the second row.

You should have no problem getting more shoots and switching things out.
Jun 29 12 05:19 pm  Link  Quote 
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Lil Cat
Posts: 243
Royal Oak, Michigan, US


Hun you dont need to work on anything youre so naturally hot I think its all up to the photographers you get.I love the first 2 pix.Meowwwwwww!   : O )
Jun 29 12 05:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 7,645
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120113/09/4f106419d3801_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120113/09/4f10638814b38_m.jpg

These two are your best images from a modeling standpoint, with the last one being the best
Jun 30 12 03:58 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Drew Smith Photography
Posts: 3,141
Nottingham, England, United Kingdom


You are a little pocket dynamo!

You're port is fine just as it is. Nice natural shots of your face and full length shots so a photographer can see what your shape is like.

Although I'd recommend that you stay with TF for sometime to come I do think that you can start to be selective in who you work with in the immediate future.

The better the photographer the better the port you'll develop which in turn attracts better photographers, and so on.
Jun 30 12 04:16 am  Link  Quote 
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