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OTTO poste1
Posts: 187
Barcelona, Catalonia, Spain


ok gimme your .2cents or your 100 dollar critique, I am all ears.. eyes.

http://payload18.cargocollective.com/1/0/20851/2660128/joliefille_950.jpg
Jul 02 12 06:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Digital Artist
Koray
Posts: 6,672
Ankara, Ankara, Turkey


its good
Jul 03 12 12:06 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
OTTO poste1
Posts: 187
Barcelona, Catalonia, Spain


Koray wrote:
its good

Thanks, I'll consider you the voice of God from now on.

Jul 03 12 03:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
bobbydolan
Posts: 167
Boston, Massachusetts, US


truly looks solid...better than I could do to be honest, I love how deliberate it looks and obviously intentional to leave wild hairs and such even how specific you were to leave the shadow from the bow on her shoulder... but speaking of shadows and black point, where is it... it looks fine but tons of light was thrown at her there is very minimal light ratio here... Im not sure what it is but her right side eye (furthest away) looks odd or something maybe its how its catching the light
Jul 04 12 07:28 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
OTTO poste1
Posts: 187
Barcelona, Catalonia, Spain


bobbydolan wrote:
truly looks solid...better than I could do to be honest, I love how deliberate it looks and obviously intentional to leave wild hairs and such even how specific you were to leave the shadow from the bow on her shoulder... but speaking of shadows and black point, where is it... it looks fine but tons of light was thrown at her there is very minimal light ratio here... Im not sure what it is but her right side eye (furthest away) looks odd or something maybe its how its catching the light

yup, I looked at what you said, I reckon it's too cyan compared to the other side that is more red. Let's see if it get better nudging it a tad.

Jul 04 12 08:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
CLICK retouch
Posts: 177
Denver, Colorado, US


A bit comic-book styled for my taste, but overall it's very good. I like the way you kept all the detail, including freckles on her shoulders. smile

Thumbs up!
Jul 26 12 04:01 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Nikki Cole Photography
Posts: 34
New York, New York, US


I love it. Great work with the lights and shadows on the face. I think the rest of the body seems a little bit flat compare to the face.
Jul 26 12 08:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
PhotoVision
Posts: 100
New York, New York, US


Really nice work. I think the redness in the forhead is a bit too extreme though. did it end up looking that way after a curve adjustment or was it always like that? Looks a bit unnatural. I'd just do a quick selective color mask on the cheek and forhead and remove some magenta, but not too much so as to keep the nice contrast it presents next to the highlights.
Jul 27 12 12:22 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
dweekley
Posts: 36
White Plains, New York, US


I love this photo and your work on it. The photo looks familiar but I can not place it, where did you get the original if I may ask? Thanks.
Jul 27 12 03:47 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Brick Wilson
Posts: 366
Carol Stream, Illinois, US


I like everything about it except the skin which has a little too much detail repetition, especially around the left eye.
Jul 27 12 09:24 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Mike Needham Retouching
Posts: 349
Cheltenham, England, United Kingdom


I like it all apart from the wrinkles just along the arm in the shadow area. Otherwise looks great to me.
Jul 30 12 02:37 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
ChelleyCredible Retouch
Posts: 436
Boston, Massachusetts, US


The neck area...towards the ear....seems discolored. Not evenly colored and the texture isn't consistent in that area. The highlight spot on the shoulder looks awkward and also the uneven shadow on the left side of the arm going down. Other than that, it's a pretty decent image!
Sep 04 12 10:46 am  Link  Quote 
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