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FilleMysterieuse
Posts: 1
Fullerton, California, US


Hey, take a look and let me know if you guys hav any advice:
www.modelmayhem.com/fillemysterieuse
Jul 12 12 10:32 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 7,711
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


7 photos with the same outfit is not a good thing, select the 1 or 2 best from set

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/15/4f8deeff4524b_m.jpg
This is my top pick from set
This makes you look super tall, and shows a nice body profile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/16/4f8df8754a2b6_m.jpg
Not selected, Reason:
Models left arm has negative bend at elbow
Missing models right hand


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/16/4f8df720bb799_m.jpg
Not selected, Reason:
Arch back
Missing models right hand
Models left arm too straight
[If it’s a joint bend it, elbows, knees, etc]

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/15/4f8dede839067_m.jpg
Not selected, Reason:
Models left arm has negative bend at elbow
Cropping issue

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/15/4f8defd218fe9_m.jpg
Not selected, Reason:
Models left arm too straight
Cropping issue

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/16/4f8df5fec4b85_m.jpg
Not selected, Reason:
Missing models hands
Details crease across skirt

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/15/4f8df4f688d79_m.jpg
Not a bad photo
Prefer camera not to be shooting up models nose

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/15/4f8df26df1a7d_m.jpg
Nice pose on your part

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/15/4f8df467b48bb_m.jpg
Fantastic shape, but face is dark

You are a strong looking model, wish you much success!
Jul 13 12 06:55 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
G U N N A R
Posts: 79
Northglenn, Colorado, US


I have to agree with just about everything Lee said. You have a great look and an amazing smile. Loose all the duplicate shots from the same shoot and keep working. Less is more when there are too many of the same setup.

Good luck with your future.
-G
Jul 13 12 07:28 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Brick Wilson
Posts: 316
Carol Stream, Illinois, US


Lee_Photography wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/15/4f8df467b48bb_m.jpg
Fantastic shape, but face is dark

There's a border of about 15 pixels on the top and the left edges, looks like a mistake with cropping or layers.

Jul 13 12 09:47 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Cross Photo
Posts: 1,502
Hamilton, Ontario, Canada


Oh, and I'm NOT interested in scams, so don't bother contacting me if you are trying to scam me because I'm not gullible!

I get it, honest I do but ... I'm not sure that a Nigerian prince is going to care that you put that in your profile. On the other hand, a legit photographer might just pass you up because it comes across as a little ... ????. (I don't know the word for it).

Your best photos (imho) ...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/15/4f8df44adc56e_m.jpg
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/15/4f8df0e758e6b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120417/15/4f8df53aa3ca8_m.jpg

The rest is good but the first seven are too repetitive.

Jul 13 12 11:59 am  Link  Quote 
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