So, I guess the first thing from a model's perspective is that you need some variety in your port. So, you've got some variety, but there's a little too much similarity in the fact that you're showing your stomach (which, I get it, you're ripped, ok. cool) in almost every single photo in your port. Just a couple of shots, in my opinion, unless you're an underwear and swimsuit model, (which it doesn't seem to me to be the case) should be fine.
My first suggestion for you is to work on adding some more variety to your facial expressions. From looking at your port, many of your facial expressions are the same, you are just doing doing a different gesture. You can easily practice that in the mirror.
The lighting here also isn't very good. You're also looking slightly down at the camera, if you had pointed your chin down just a tad you wouldn't have the shadow under your chin
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 0#27754340
I want to like this, but he's blurry, there's that coat rack that just in the side of the photo that's distracting, and he's sideways, and so is his chair. oh, and he looks like a vampire, but I think it goes with the setting
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 9#25777229
Nice crop. But I'm not sure if it's the really thin striped lines that's doing it or if you actually cut her out and put her in front of a background, but something's amiss.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 3#29019013
Nice crop. But I'm not sure if it's the really thin striped lines that's doing it or if you actually cut her out and put her in front of a background, but something's amiss.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 3#29019013
Thanks. The second one was hard.. I was too tall for the backdrop sadly.
As far as not slouching, I don't see where you pic that up in my picture. I was standing straight up, my shoulders actually are just that broad. Thanks for your input though.
Be gentle, please 
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