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Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Ariel Yu wrote:
Mine?

Probably....depends

60/40

Aug 04 12 02:24 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

ezb-llc wrote:

Thank you for the input!  I still have so much to learn and try.  smile

-Christian

You are so welcome!

Aug 04 12 06:40 pm Link

Photographer

Beach Photo and Video

Posts: 2365

Virginia Beach, Virginia, US

Me?!

Aug 04 12 06:41 pm Link

Model

Jess Grinstead

Posts: 3

Apex, North Carolina, US

Just curious, mine?  Love feedback since I am just beginning, thanks!

Aug 04 12 06:57 pm Link

Photographer

Darrell Powell Photo

Posts: 3

Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US

I will bite. Mine?

Aug 04 12 07:09 pm Link

Model

Alexandra Arruda

Posts: 31

Manchester, England, United Kingdom

oky

Aug 04 12 07:16 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Beach Photo wrote:
Me?!

Probably yes. I like the creativity and intrigue

Aug 04 12 07:29 pm Link

Photographer

rdallasPhotography

Posts: 967

CHADDS FORD, Pennsylvania, US

I'd like to know!

Aug 04 12 07:42 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Alexandra Arruda wrote:
oky

Maybe. 60/40.........but you have quite a few in your port that make so much better avatars

Aug 04 12 07:45 pm Link

Photographer

EC Images

Posts: 139

San Francisco, California, US

Peach Jones wrote:

I doubt I would look. Why? because collages are more difficult for the eye to pick up and distinguish what the work entails. While the model is amazingly stunning, I thing an avatar using just the bottom shot in your present collage avatar would be much stronger and more "eye-catching"

Thanks!!

Aug 04 12 07:46 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

JMorgan86 wrote:
Just curious, mine?  Love feedback since I am just beginning, thanks!

Well, I will tell you what I think. That is pretty much all I can do, and you can choose what to do with what I tell you.

there are avatars that will catch my eye when I post on another person's photo, thread or even on the main page, some avatar's will catch my eye. What makes those Avatar's stand out? Here is a short list:

1. bigger is usually better. Far away photos don't work on a small avatar. They have to grab my attention in about 1/4 of a second at most, and if my eye/brain has to figure out the avatar photo because you are too small in it or it is too busy, then it will not catch my eye

2. Colors.....bright colors catch my eye better. White (not so much a color but you get the idea) and red do the job the best. If you do a B/W then make sure that it really pops me in the face and says "HEY!! Look at me!!"  That is why I use the avatar that I use. It stands out. If the photos was smaller, it would not stand out. Do you agree?

3. Photos with curves and lines work very well. I will quantify this up front by saying I am a huge heterosexual. Just the way I am. We all have things about the opposite sex that really catch our attention. Look at the previous comments I have made......especially the ones that say "100% yes". There is something in the photo that sets the female apart.......legs, curves, behind, eyes, ........those catch my eye alot. And if you can highlight them, then I will more likely look at your port.......and maybe even list  or want to work with you if even possible.

4. Males. As I said before, I am a heterosexual. So you are already at a disadvantage if you are a male llama. However, I will look more if you have a very creative avatar (because I like creativity no matter what your sex is), and I also enjoy beauty. Beauty can be male or female, but once again I inherently believe that females have more inherent beauty. Just the way I am.

OK, now to your avatar. I do like your avatar. But if I was quickly scanning a page, yours would not stand out a great deal. Once again, all this is my opinion, and someone else may give you a different opinion. So value this as much as you choose. It just doesn't hit me in the face and say "look at me". In order to do that you are going to need something with a lot more pop. Something that will take it from a good avatar to a WOW factor avatar. These are the ones I think would do good for you and why:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 4#29399404
Your legs are gorgeous, your smile is amazing, and the lighting is good. The only bad thing is that it needs to be cropped tighter. I don't want to have to strain to see good legs in an avatar

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 5#29404015
Once again the legs would sell this, but it doesn't have as much pop as the one I listed above.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 0#29399410
There are very few llamas that can sell themselves 100% with only their facial beauty and a smile. You are one of them. This obviously is not a professional photo, but you need to get one with your great smile. Seriously, if you are to be a professional llama, your smile may very well be your ticket.

Aug 04 12 07:52 pm Link

Model

Lakin S

Posts: 308

Ashland, Kentucky, US

What about me darlin'?

Aug 04 12 07:53 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

D Powell Photography wrote:
I will bite. Mine?

probably not

Aug 04 12 07:54 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Lakin S wrote:
What about me darlin'?

yes. Your fabulous beauty comes out wonderfully in a bold and confident way. And love your eyes too!

Aug 04 12 07:55 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

rdallasPhotography wrote:
I'd like to know!

no

Aug 04 12 07:55 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

sorry, DP

Aug 04 12 07:56 pm Link

Model

Mrs Foxy

Posts: 4520

Waterford, Wisconsin, US

mine?

Aug 04 12 07:56 pm Link

Photographer

Mike Mango

Posts: 399

Toms River, New Jersey, US

How about me?

Aug 04 12 07:56 pm Link

Photographer

Stephen K Photography

Posts: 148

San Francisco, California, US

Worth a try..?

Aug 04 12 07:57 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Mrs Foxy wrote:
mine?

Probably yes. Even though it is darker, the red hair and red clothing could sell me

Aug 04 12 07:57 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Mike Mango wrote:
How about me?

hmmmm
50/50

Aug 04 12 07:58 pm Link

Photographer

Mike Mango

Posts: 399

Toms River, New Jersey, US

Peach Jones wrote:

hmmmm
50/50

Awesome.  1/2 a "yes" is better than a "no" smile

Aug 04 12 07:59 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Stephen K Photography wrote:
Worth a try..?

probably yes. You have done a great job in lighting such a beautiful face. That coupled with the contrast of her hair and they mystery will most likely make me want to see more

Aug 04 12 07:59 pm Link

Model

Jess Grinstead

Posts: 3

Apex, North Carolina, US

Thanks Peach!  I respect your input and it was very helpful smile

Aug 04 12 08:00 pm Link

Model

Lakin S

Posts: 308

Ashland, Kentucky, US

Peach Jones wrote:

yes. Your fabulous beauty comes out wonderfully in a bold and confident way. And love your eyes too!

Your too kind, Thank you wink

Aug 04 12 08:01 pm Link

Model

Alexandra Arruda

Posts: 31

Manchester, England, United Kingdom

Peach Jones wrote:

Maybe. 60/40.........but you have quite a few in your port that make so much better avatars

thank you

Aug 04 12 08:16 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Alexandra Arruda wrote:

thank you

You are welcome

Aug 04 12 10:51 pm Link

Photographer

rdallasPhotography

Posts: 967

CHADDS FORD, Pennsylvania, US

Peach Jones wrote:
no

I was debating whether to change it since the photo was too broad to see the model. You convinced me to go with something more interesting. This is it.

Thanks.

Aug 05 12 06:26 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

rdallasPhotography wrote:
I was debating whether to change it since the photo was too broad to see the model. You convinced me to go with something more interesting. This is it.

Thanks.

You are so welcome.....glad I could help a little bit!!  :-)

Aug 05 12 07:11 am Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Alexandra Arruda wrote:

thank you

so welcome

Aug 07 12 08:33 pm Link

Photographer

Bob J Photography

Posts: 44

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

so, ...

whaddyathiink?

Aug 07 12 08:40 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Bob J Photography wrote:
so, ...

whaddyathiink?

no

Aug 07 12 08:43 pm Link

Model

Lady Pelvic

Posts: 1414

Orlando, Florida, US

How about now? (avatar change) : B

Aug 07 12 08:46 pm Link

Photographer

R.EYE.R

Posts: 3436

Tokyo, Tokyo, Japan

It's a mystery...

Aug 07 12 08:49 pm Link

Model

Love Annie

Posts: 60

Arcadia, California, US

I'm wondering..

Aug 07 12 08:58 pm Link

Photographer

R.EYE.R

Posts: 3436

Tokyo, Tokyo, Japan

Lady Pelvic wrote:
How about now? (avatar change) : B

Made me look wink

Aug 07 12 09:09 pm Link

Model

Lady Pelvic

Posts: 1414

Orlando, Florida, US

R.EYE.R wrote:

Made me look wink

Right back at ya! wink

Aug 07 12 09:10 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Lady Pelvic wrote:
How about now? (avatar change) : B

no
IMO this is much better:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 4#29365964

Aug 07 12 09:13 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

R.EYE.R wrote:
It's a mystery...

maybe, I like the mystery. 70%

Aug 07 12 09:14 pm Link

Photographer

Peach Jones

Posts: 6906

Champaign, Illinois, US

Love Annie S2 wrote:
I'm wondering..

no

Aug 07 12 09:15 pm Link