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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Tuesday Hanson wrote:
Does mine?

It is close. But probably not. Why? colors are not really bright and the highlight of the shot is your jawline. Those are things that most likely will make me pass over

May 31 13 08:21 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Vinny
Posts: 93
Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US


Does my avatar make you wanna look? Why , or why not please!
May 31 13 08:21 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Vinny  wrote:
Does my avatar make you wanna look? Why , or why not please!

the lack of color and washed out affect hurts you for an avatar shot. If you can, color shots generally work better.

May 31 13 08:39 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Vinny
Posts: 93
Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US


Dully noted...just made the change, in fact! smile
May 31 13 09:39 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Vinny  wrote:
Dully noted...just made the change, in fact! smile

Great, thanks for stopping by!

Aug 30 13 10:13 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Shirin McBennett-Sheen
Posts: 285
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Sure
Aug 30 13 10:16 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Shirin McBennett-Sheen wrote:
Sure

I do indeed like the B/W, but the lack of contrast will not make the shot stand out so readily on a page with brighter shots. IMO you have some great photos in your port that will much likely serve you better as an avatar.

Thanks for stopping by!

Aug 30 13 10:21 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
arootphotography
Posts: 92
Thornton, Colorado, US


How about mine?
Aug 30 13 10:27 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Shirin McBennett-Sheen
Posts: 285
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Peach Jones wrote:

I do indeed like the B/W, but the lack of contrast will not make the shot stand out so readily on a page with brighter shots. IMO you have some great photos in your port that will much likely serve you better as an avatar.

Thanks for stopping by!

Thanks for your opinion!
I´m curious to know which shots would be better as my avatar?

Aug 30 13 10:31 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Model Starr Photography
Posts: 522
Madison, Alabama, US


What about me?
Aug 30 13 10:41 am  Link  Quote 
Artist/Painter
philip painter
Posts: 202
Ann Arbor, Michigan, US


?
Aug 30 13 10:42 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Skyler Bleu
Posts: 389
Albany, Oregon, US


mine?
Aug 30 13 10:43 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


arootphotography wrote:
How about mine?

Your photo shows good curves and the sun hitting her hair along with the white bikini top helps the shot stand out.

probably yes

Aug 30 13 11:38 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Model Starr Photography wrote:
What about me?

I like the creative angle along with a fair amount of skin in the foreground stand out.

Yes

Aug 30 13 11:39 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Shirin McBennett-Sheen wrote:

Thanks for your opinion!
I´m curious to know which shots would be better as my avatar?

IMO these are your top 2........in order

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33608299
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33718004

Aug 30 13 11:47 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


philip painter wrote:
?

sorry, probably not

Aug 30 13 11:51 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Skyler Bleu wrote:
mine?

You are very pretty in the shot, but not really enough there to draw me in

Aug 30 13 11:53 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
d o u g l a s
Posts: 238
San Diego, California, US


I'll play.  smile

Thank you.
Aug 30 13 11:57 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Birkey wrote:
I'll play.  smile

Thank you.

The fence in front adds a fair amount of interference. If I was skimming, I am not sure it would catch my eye. However, if it did catch my eye, the fabulous content would make me say yes. Great work!

Aug 30 13 01:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
d o u g l a s
Posts: 238
San Diego, California, US


Peach Jones wrote:

The fence in front adds a fair amount of interference. If I was skimming, I am not sure it would catch my eye. However, if it did catch my eye, the fabulous content would make me say yes. Great work!

Cool, thanks for the constructive feedback.  BTW, that's not a fence, she's locked in a cage.  yikes

Aug 30 13 01:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Birkey wrote:

Cool, thanks for the constructive feedback.  BTW, that's not a fence, she's locked in a cage.  yikes

A caged woman??!!
Oh I like you so much more all the time!!!!!!

;-)

Aug 30 13 01:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Erin Dawson Photography
Posts: 334
Buffalo, New York, US


I'll play! :-)
Aug 30 13 01:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
name removed3
Posts: 264
Boston, Massachusetts, US


how about mine?
Aug 30 13 01:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Erin Dawson Photography wrote:
I'll play! :-)

generally collages tell me "next" when it comes to being an avatar. Still, there are exceptions. I believe yours may well be an exception. Still, I wonder how much stronger your avi would be if you just used one of those photos in that collage. I think it would be immeasurable!

Aug 30 13 02:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Northern Lights Images wrote:
how about mine?

sorry but probably not. IMO you have some others that would work perfectly!

Aug 30 13 02:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
TDSImages
Posts: 807
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Would mine?
Aug 30 13 03:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Avatar Shots
Posts: 67
Los Angeles, California, US


Come see
Aug 30 13 03:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Erin Dawson Photography
Posts: 334
Buffalo, New York, US


Peach Jones wrote:

generally collages tell me "next" when it comes to being an avatar. Still, there are exceptions. I believe yours may well be an exception. Still, I wonder how much stronger your avi would be if you just used one of those photos in that collage. I think it would be immeasurable!

Thank you!

Aug 30 13 03:08 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Rik Williams
Posts: 3,293
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Man this is a long thread!
Tried checking to see if I'd posted already.

Anyhoo.
Aug 30 13 03:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Elle Fortune
Posts: 8
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Would you mind? Thanks!
Aug 30 13 03:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
anna gabriel
Posts: 119
Lexington, Kentucky, US


does it?
Aug 30 13 03:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
SoftLights
Posts: 318
New Orleans, Louisiana, US


I'd like to know.
Aug 30 13 03:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Steve Reganato
Posts: 1,680
New York, New York, US


Hopefully!
Aug 30 13 03:45 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mike Meadows
Posts: 55
Tempe, Arizona, US


Only you can decide that.
Aug 30 13 03:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


TDSImages wrote:
Would mine?

I do like the intrigue and mystery.....50/50

Aug 30 13 06:32 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Avatar Shots wrote:
Come see

I so much wanted that shot for the Breast Cancer Charity Calendar......  :-(

I would say certainly yes

Aug 30 13 06:33 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Rik Williams wrote:
Man this is a long thread!
Tried checking to see if I'd posted already.

Anyhoo.

Excellent body with drama and a gorgeous tummy.

Yes

Aug 30 13 06:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Elle Fortune wrote:
Would you mind? Thanks!

sorry but nothing to really draw me in........no

Aug 30 13 06:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


anna gabriel wrote:
does it?

While the cleavage might make me notice initially, there isn't any real pop in the photo to make me want to see more

Aug 30 13 06:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Peach Jones
Posts: 6,224
Champaign, Illinois, US


Soft Lights wrote:
I'd like to know.

While I do like the angle and the photo of a very pretty lady, there really isn't anything else to make me want to see more

Aug 30 13 06:38 pm  Link  Quote 
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