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Photographer
Bilsen Galleries
Posts: 332
CORTLANDT MANOR, New York, US
I need to free up three spots in my port for new work.

Opinions please on what should go.
Aug 07 12 02:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Random Shutter Clicks
Posts: 4,113
PORTER CORNERS, New York, US
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120205/11/4f2ed5cab5dcd_m.jpg

This image looks like she's being peed on.
Aug 07 12 02:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Random Shutter Clicks
Posts: 4,113
PORTER CORNERS, New York, US
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110817/13/4e4c27c020461_m.jpg

This is cool - maybe to a 16 year old sex repressed boy.
Aug 07 12 02:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Bilsen Galleries
Posts: 332
CORTLANDT MANOR, New York, US
Thanks.  Appreciate it.
Aug 07 12 02:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Random Shutter Clicks
Posts: 4,113
PORTER CORNERS, New York, US
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120130/15/4f272566ace71_m.jpg

It's against the law to hunt deer with your high beams.
Aug 07 12 02:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Random Shutter Clicks
Posts: 4,113
PORTER CORNERS, New York, US
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120706/14/4ff7561263f54_m.jpg

Trying to coax a bull to charge into the fountain?
Aug 07 12 02:16 pm  Link  Quote 
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Orca Bay Images
Posts: 28,310
Lodi, California, US
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120205/11/4f2ed5cab5dcd_m.jpg
Just not all that good a shot.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120130/15/4f272566ace71_m.jpg
Not crazy about the lighting. It's dark and she needs some hairlight to provide some depth.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120205/11/4f2ed54da5968_m.jpg
She's almost lost in that noisy background and I hate that grinning cheesecake pose. Bad snapshot.
Aug 07 12 02:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Random Shutter Clicks
Posts: 4,113
PORTER CORNERS, New York, US
Instead of making room for three more - try picking your favorite 6 unique images and dump the rest.
Aug 07 12 02:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Bilsen Galleries
Posts: 332
CORTLANDT MANOR, New York, US
Thanks again.
Aug 07 12 02:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Matt Knowles
Posts: 3,517
Ferndale, California, US

Orca Bay Images wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120205/11/4f2ed5cab5dcd_m.jpg
Just not all that good a shot.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120130/15/4f272566ace71_m.jpg
Not crazy about the lighting. It's dark and she needs some hairlight to provide some depth.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120205/11/4f2ed54da5968_m.jpg


She's almost lost in that noisy background and I hate that grinning cheesecake pose. Bad snapshot.

Once again we're pretty much in agreement.

Aug 07 12 02:45 pm  Link  Quote 
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Jenny Jannetty
Posts: 399
Roanoke, Virginia, US

Random Shutter Clicks wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120205/11/4f2ed5cab5dcd_m.jpg

This image looks like she's being peed on.

+1

Aug 07 12 03:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jenny Jannetty
Posts: 399
Roanoke, Virginia, US
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101118/15/4ce5b81f43241_m.jpg

This is pretty!  Do more of this smile
Aug 07 12 03:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mark
Posts: 2,277
New York, New York, US
I would loose everything except

row)column:  2) 1,3  4)1  5)2  6)2  7)3,4

These pics look professional not the others
Aug 07 12 07:26 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Farenell Photography
Posts: 16,572
Albany, New York, US
I'd start w/ these:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120706/14/4ff7561263f54_m.jpg <-- there's no "life" in her eyes

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110813/20/4e473fd7608fe_m.jpg <-- eh

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100820/15/4c6f0215db8e6_m.jpg <-- such set potential & you come up w/ this cliched shot? Tis a pity.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110713/16/4e1e3162223cb_m.jpg <- simply an awkward looking pose that's not doing your port any favors
Aug 07 12 07:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Bold Sheep Photography
Posts: 179
Blacksburg, Virginia, US

Jenny Jannetty wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101118/15/4ce5b81f43241_m.jpg

This is pretty!  Do more of this smile

+1

Aug 07 12 07:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Annamarie Chase
Posts: 51
Dobbs Ferry, New York, US

Bilsen Galleries wrote:
I need to free up three spots in my port for new work.

Opinions please on what should go.

They are all great. Id go with the swimsuits bc you have a lot of them and then look at what has the least love to it. THose would be what I get rid of

Hope that helps

Aug 07 12 07:44 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Camerosity
Posts: 2,463
Saint Louis, Missouri, US

Mark wrote:
I would loose everything except

row)column:  2) 1,3  4)1  5)2  6)2  7)3,4

These pics look professional not the others

+1.

Sometimes less is more.

Aug 07 12 07:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Bilsen Galleries
Posts: 332
CORTLANDT MANOR, New York, US
Thank you everyone.  I'll take a look at every suggestion.
Aug 08 12 02:39 am  Link  Quote 
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