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ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Alyson Pink wrote:
I would like to know

I am not keen on the composition here (there is a bothersome merger between you and the fountain) and your expression is marginal. Get rid of it.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110721/19/4e28e2e94f2d4_m.jpg

Gorgeous body, pose, and beautiful face here.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120703/09/4ff31eb8c61d6_m.jpg

Aug 14 12 06:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Rachael Bueckert
Posts: 1,121
Red Deer, Alberta, Canada


Id like to know smile
Aug 14 12 06:41 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Lyhanna Dihann wrote:
I would like to know.! Always game for some constructive criticism. smile

Welcome to MM Lyhanna. Your arm looks sort of awkward here, distracting the viewer:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120811/20/50271d7359add_m.jpg


Beautiful portrait from a great angle.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120811/20/50271dd9d59e6_m.jpg

Enjoy!

Aug 14 12 06:44 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Sylph Sia wrote:
I'm interested! big_smile

I find your expression stiff here. The image does not add value to your port so I suggest removing it.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120702/07/4ff1adfabdb73_m.jpg

My fave - beautiful expression, super sexy outfufit and styling, great pose....a superb overall image

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120704/00/4ff3ec7141be2_m.jpg

Aug 14 12 06:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Sarah Bretland wrote:
What do you think my worst is?

You ought to delete ALL your bird cage images asap as they drag down your port due to lack of engaging expression, and the subject is...well for the birds.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120804/05/501d11c413eb9_m.jpg

Get rid of most of your white dress images, as they do not do much to advance your port.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120326/05/4f705c63d7f71_m.jpg

Your AVI rocks (engaging expression, makeup, pose, etc) and was the right choice. Another superb one is this for your pose, interesting wardrobe and setting.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120726/04/50112cab612f2_m.jpg

Aug 14 12 07:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Alexander Image
Posts: 1,459
East Brunswick, New Jersey, US


Let me know. Thanks.
Aug 14 12 07:08 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


In Balance Photography wrote:
I'll play!

Hello neighbor! As the last comment says, this image is quirky. Nothing wrong with quirkiness, and it is great to experiement, its just your other images are more cativating, and beautiful, at least according to my taste.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120611/15/4fd66f480c2c5_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120113/11/4f108d3b2ef69_m.jpgMy fave is the image of Spooky Digital Girl. Her expression is inquisitive, her dress is perfect to show off her super sexy figure, and your composition is great.

Aug 14 12 07:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Uncommon Allure
Posts: 396
Kansas City, Missouri, US


Sure, as long as you pick on me and not the model.
Aug 14 12 07:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Jett Loren wrote:
*I can do this* (2x)

Can you critique me next?

smile

Keep them all !!!  smile
Love your vicious expression here:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120808/14/5022dec517079_m.jpg

Aug 14 12 07:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
M E S K E R
Posts: 29
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Go for it big_smile
Aug 14 12 07:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


MVK Photo wrote:
me please!  [:

I am not a fan of composites. If I cant clearly see the image from a thumbnail view, I ususally skip it. In the future, pick the best image in a series and post that one only.

Aug 14 12 07:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
LatiDee
Posts: 4
San Diego, California, US


I'm ready.
Aug 14 12 07:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
D photos
Posts: 1
Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US


Go for it!
Aug 14 12 07:32 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Alyssa Laganosky
Posts: 10
Chicago, Illinois, US


okay, go for it!
Aug 14 12 07:33 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Rachael Bueckert wrote:
Id like to know smile

If your goal here on MM is to express yourself artistically, this would be an interesting image to post. A photographer may post something like this, or a painter. But if you are here to sell your beauty, delete it.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120606/15/4fcfd3da33a34_m.jpg

Same goes for this and its related image. Artstic, yes, but does not paint you in the best light.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27603121

Your portrait is gorgeous. Love your makeup, expression, and display of your lovely cleavage smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120605/17/4fcea3afb6c65_m.jpg

Aug 14 12 07:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Uncommon Allure wrote:
Sure, as long as you pick on me and not the model.

A lovely tattoo, yes, but It's just a snapshot. There is nothing in this image that would make one stop and say "wow, this photographer is amazing". I am sure you know that.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120811/09/5026857660b79_m.jpg

This image is sort of pleasing due to its light and beauty of the model. I suspect you have hidden higher quality images in your port.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120811/09/502684e1f2f54_m.jpg

Aug 14 12 07:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


DUBOV wrote:
Go for it!

Sorry but this is NOT a very effective avatar as I need a flashlight to view it.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120628/18/4fecfe9e43b0c_m.jpg

I like the beauty here of the model, the use turtleneck is great, and the depth of field superb

Aug 14 12 07:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Alyssa Sky wrote:
okay, go for it!

I am not a fan of guitar images plus your expression is stiff

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120425/12/4f9856efc7c90_m.jpg

Your pose and wardrobe provide a lovely display of your beautiful legs. The light and setting help create great ambiance

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120720/16/5009ea527ca6f_m.jpg

Aug 14 12 07:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


LatiDee wrote:
I'm ready.

Delete three of the four images in this series, as they are all similar from the same shoot.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111230/10/4efe07a9da0fa_m.jpg

A word of advice to a novice. Dont just smile in every image. Try experimenting with interesting expressions to engage the viewer - offer surprise, anger,  relaxed mood, alluring sultriness, etc.

I love this image. Nice wardrobe and great pose appropriate for the setting, happy natural expression without a forced smile.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120701/20/4ff111747020b_m.jpg

Aug 14 12 07:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
PapaMidnight
Posts: 8
Orlando, Florida, US


I would love to have your critique.
Aug 15 12 11:22 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


MidnightSamedi wrote:
I would love to have your critique.

As mentioned in my other posts, I am not a fan of posting multiple photos from identical scene/identical concept. Most viewers, like myself, get bored quickly browsing through similar images.  So I would delete several from this series:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110720/02/4e269e7576ac2_m.jpg


There are rare exceptions to this rule as is this set of images:  one in color the other B&W implementation as each image offers a uniquely captivating experience. Great job!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111120/18/4ec9bc6979ff9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110720/02/4e26a04f5ac1a_m.jpg

Aug 15 12 02:20 pm  Link  Quote 
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ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


le smick wrote:
Go for it big_smile

I find this cinematic quality image uniquely disturbing. If your goal is to provoke the viewer, you have succeeded. The concept is an implied graphic violence of the first degree. Because imagination can be more powerful than reality, I rate this image more violent than one that would be showing guts and blood. While some people will applaud this on artistic merit, it may turn off many more.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120412/20/4f8798b836bf0_m.jpg

Superb composition and projection of space evident also in other images in your captivating port.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101004/20/4caa9e17a605b_m.jpg

Aug 15 12 02:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
SummersPlace
Posts: 20
Austin, Texas, US


Aug 15 12 02:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jillian Monica
Posts: 275
Kingston, Pennsylvania, US


Please tell me what you think!  : )
Aug 15 12 03:26 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Jillian Monica wrote:
Please tell me what you think!  : )

Jilian,
Your expresion is not at its best, so I proposing you get rid of this image

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120815/21/502c7bdd72952_m.jpg

Great pose and connection with the viewere here:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120705/00/4ff53e35d7979_m.jpg

Aug 16 12 09:22 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Paige Morgan
Posts: 4,058
New York, New York, US


You tell me.
Aug 16 12 09:51 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Paige Morgan wrote:
You tell me.

Paige, a good promotional image, but you already displayed a similar image, so jettison this one.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110203/16/4d4b44d811c2d_m.jpg

You certainly have a strong, unique features, well highlighted in this portait. Love the makeup

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091214/21/4b271ac028dfe_m.jpg

Aug 16 12 10:12 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Rachel Hayslette
Posts: 205
Weaver, Alabama, US


What's mine?
Aug 16 12 11:18 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Rachel Hayslette wrote:
What's mine?

You last image in should be the first to go as it projects you much older and somewhat heavier that you really are. Even worse, your expression is a quirky one.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120813/13/50295f94606c8_m.jpg

Contrasting to the above image, here you provide  a true 'model' look both in your pose, expression and facial beauty. Nice wardrobe and setting so it all gels together. Great job!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120804/03/501cf58d6424e_m.jpg

Aug 16 12 12:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Cherrie Nova
Posts: 549
Fairfield, California, US


Go for it.
Aug 16 12 12:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Ok!
Aug 16 12 12:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Raina Noel wrote:
Go for it.

I dont believe this image advances your port in any way. It does not display your face or body well,  I dont perceive great art in the photography (it looks like a snapshot of a crime scene) and on top of that the concept idea is marginal.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120815/12/502bf62a33978_m.jpg

As my preference is beauty images over gory stuff, I would choose this one as my favorite

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120804/18/501dd2c5f3709_m.jpg

Aug 16 12 01:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


DAN CRUIKSHANK wrote:
Ok!

You posted four images in this series. While they offer great composition, light and ambiance, choose only, and delete the variations. Remember, less is more.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120624/20/4fe7dedb23cdf_m.jpg

This one is just one of several  enchanting images in your port for their composition, contrast, and cinematic "feel"

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120712/23/4fffc4d508846_m.jpg

Aug 16 12 01:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Alexander Image
Posts: 1,459
East Brunswick, New Jersey, US


How about mine?
Aug 16 12 02:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Elizabeth Michellle
Posts: 47
Garden Grove, California, US


I would really like to know your opinioN smile
Aug 16 12 02:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 661
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Alexander Image wrote:
How about mine?

Two images should go right away. Man's underwear is not appealing and definitely should not be an AVI.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120813/17/50299d5137ce8_m.jpg

Your image of Aguillen does not do justice to her exquisite beauty (I visited her port). Furthermore, her expression lacks and there is no concept here.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110627/07/4e0897650e987_m.jpg

And speaking of concepts, I do find several unique ones in your port with some great photography. My fave is this one:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080827/09/48b5507a0b9d6_m.jpg

Aug 16 12 02:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Alexander Image
Posts: 1,459
East Brunswick, New Jersey, US


ikonas wrote:

Two images should go right away. Man's underwear is not appealing and definitely should not be an AVI.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120813/17/50299d5137ce8_m.jpg

Your image of Aguillen does not do justice to her exquisite beauty (I visited her port). Furthermore, her expression lacks and there is no concept here.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110627/07/4e0897650e987_m.jpg

And speaking of concepts, I do find several unique ones in your port with some great photography. My fave is this one:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080827/09/48b5507a0b9d6_m.jpg

Thanks!

Aug 16 12 03:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Arwendur
Posts: 35
Worcester, England, United Kingdom


Tell me my worst smile
Aug 16 12 03:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Makeup Artist
Kristen Mussari
Posts: 8
Berwyn, Illinois, US


You skipped me hmm
Aug 16 12 04:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Michaela-Ann
Posts: 161
Bendigo, Victoria, Australia


I would love to hear your opinion smile
Aug 16 12 04:54 pm  Link  Quote 
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