Sarah Bretland wrote: What do you think my worst is?
You ought to delete ALL your bird cage images asap as they drag down your port due to lack of engaging expression, and the subject is...well for the birds.
Get rid of most of your white dress images, as they do not do much to advance your port.
Your AVI rocks (engaging expression, makeup, pose, etc) and was the right choice. Another superb one is this for your pose, interesting wardrobe and setting.
Hello neighbor! As the last comment says, this image is quirky. Nothing wrong with quirkiness, and it is great to experiement, its just your other images are more cativating, and beautiful, at least according to my taste.
My fave is the image of Spooky Digital Girl. Her expression is inquisitive, her dress is perfect to show off her super sexy figure, and your composition is great.
I am not a fan of composites. If I cant clearly see the image from a thumbnail view, I ususally skip it. In the future, pick the best image in a series and post that one only.
If your goal here on MM is to express yourself artistically, this would be an interesting image to post. A photographer may post something like this, or a painter. But if you are here to sell your beauty, delete it.
Uncommon Allure wrote: Sure, as long as you pick on me and not the model.
A lovely tattoo, yes, but It's just a snapshot. There is nothing in this image that would make one stop and say "wow, this photographer is amazing". I am sure you know that.
This image is sort of pleasing due to its light and beauty of the model. I suspect you have hidden higher quality images in your port.
Delete three of the four images in this series, as they are all similar from the same shoot.
A word of advice to a novice. Dont just smile in every image. Try experimenting with interesting expressions to engage the viewer - offer surprise, anger, relaxed mood, alluring sultriness, etc.
I love this image. Nice wardrobe and great pose appropriate for the setting, happy natural expression without a forced smile.
MidnightSamedi wrote: I would love to have your critique.
As mentioned in my other posts, I am not a fan of posting multiple photos from identical scene/identical concept. Most viewers, like myself, get bored quickly browsing through similar images. So I would delete several from this series:
There are rare exceptions to this rule as is this set of images: one in color the other B&W implementation as each image offers a uniquely captivating experience. Great job!
I find this cinematic quality image uniquely disturbing. If your goal is to provoke the viewer, you have succeeded. The concept is an implied graphic violence of the first degree. Because imagination can be more powerful than reality, I rate this image more violent than one that would be showing guts and blood. While some people will applaud this on artistic merit, it may turn off many more.
Superb composition and projection of space evident also in other images in your captivating port.
You last image in should be the first to go as it projects you much older and somewhat heavier that you really are. Even worse, your expression is a quirky one.
Contrasting to the above image, here you provide a true 'model' look both in your pose, expression and facial beauty. Nice wardrobe and setting so it all gels together. Great job!
I dont believe this image advances your port in any way. It does not display your face or body well, I dont perceive great art in the photography (it looks like a snapshot of a crime scene) and on top of that the concept idea is marginal.
As my preference is beauty images over gory stuff, I would choose this one as my favorite
You posted four images in this series. While they offer great composition, light and ambiance, choose only, and delete the variations. Remember, less is more.
This one is just one of several enchanting images in your port for their composition, contrast, and cinematic "feel"
Two images should go right away. Man's underwear is not appealing and definitely should not be an AVI.
Your image of Aguillen does not do justice to her exquisite beauty (I visited her port). Furthermore, her expression lacks and there is no concept here.
And speaking of concepts, I do find several unique ones in your port with some great photography. My fave is this one:
Two images should go right away. Man's underwear is not appealing and definitely should not be an AVI.
Your image of Aguillen does not do justice to her exquisite beauty (I visited her port). Furthermore, her expression lacks and there is no concept here.
And speaking of concepts, I do find several unique ones in your port with some great photography. My fave is this one:
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