It has a different feel to it that your other work. Here eyebrows are distracting to me but I don't believe this was an attempt at a beauty shot so I am not calling it out as bad, just distracting to me.
I wouldn't add it to you port because I don't feel it is at the same level as your other work.
It's not on par with the rest of your work... but there is something about it. I've taken a few hard looks at it. The model has a very angular face... almost alien in this capture in a way... I'm on the fence.
The composition and expression is really interesting, but I find the skin treatment off-putting.
Having said that, I notice that you have two similar skin treatments in your portfolio, so I guess it may be part of your style, albeit a part that has no great appeal for me.
I find it unsettling in a good way, but there's something distracting to me down around the shirt collar, either the way your focus fell off or possibly some post-blurring? The rest of it I'm really into-the way the shadows are below her eyebrows makes me keep looking at it.
well it is very different but what doesnt work is all the white chest area- kinda looks like Rooney Mara what ever the Girl Dragon Tattoo actress name is
...heh, it actually sort of startled me when I first clicked on this thread. There's something almost alien about it, that being said I think that it elicits enough of an emotional response to be interesting, and a little unsettling in a good way.
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