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Model
Rachel Hayslette
Posts: 205
Weaver, Alabama, US


Wanting some opinions on my photos. New to modeling.
Aug 19 12 08:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
CandiceCampbellPhotog
Posts: 1,302
Newcastle, New South Wales, Australia


at the moment i'm seeing a lot of the same facial expression. try looking at yourslef in the mirror and trying different emotions.
Aug 19 12 09:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mark
Posts: 2,889
New York, New York, US


Row 3 Column 3- the stream shot is kinda nice, except you should have been wearing a flowing dress, or something artistic rather than shorts and a T ugh

The last 2 shots are not bad

but other than that you should remove all other photos and work with a stylist MUA and good photographer and get better shots- you're not fashion but more commercial so start smiling in those pics.

best

M
Aug 19 12 10:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Charlie-CNP
Posts: 2,556
New York, New York, US


Work with full teams that include MUA/Hair, work on your posing, facial expressions, and also include a basic head shot, half, 3/4, and full length. What you have right now seems very senior portrait looking. good luck
Aug 19 12 10:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ELiffmann
Posts: 1,393
Baton Rouge, Louisiana, US


Check out this thread from the other day.  Particularly the stuff he says about hands and towards the very end about movement in everything but high fashion.  G'luck http://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thread_id=852673
Aug 19 12 10:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Orca Bay Images
Posts: 32,233
Lodi, California, US


CandiceCampbellPhotog  wrote:
at the moment i'm seeing a lot of the same facial expression. try looking at yourslef in the mirror and trying different emotions.

+1

Aug 20 12 01:00 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Oscar Partida
Posts: 729
San Diego, California, US


i see potential..keep only the last images like the other guys said and best of luck !!
Aug 20 12 01:13 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Porcelinna
Posts: 447
Santiago, Metropolitana, Chile


Just keep shooting.
But it is true, you need to work on your expressions because I see the same one in every shot. Good luckk
Aug 20 12 01:26 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,408
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


As far as a model you have a great look but the photos are not working for you

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120812/20/50287ae55c4e5_m.jpg
This is the best photo from portfolio

Things that degrade a photo are, having a big logo across your body, over processing the whites of your eyes, poor composition, cutting off body parts

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120804/03/501cf55e07bcf_m.jpg
Too much head tilt, but photo has nice eyes

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120804/03/501cf58d6424e_m.jpg
Too much head tilt
Keep knees lower then hips will give the legs a longer look
Toes pointed in creates a negative impression
Missing models left foot
Due to pose model has no apparent neck

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120726/19/5011f8f9b902c_m.jpg
Move elbows off to sides do not point at camera

Fill in your stats, if some one is looking for a model to shoot a designers clothing line, with out the numbers they would have no idea if the sample clothes will fit you

Look for some photographers that can show case you

Wish you the best
Aug 20 12 04:51 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Rachel Hayslette
Posts: 205
Weaver, Alabama, US


Thanks everyone!! I didn't realize how much I needed to work on!!!
Aug 20 12 05:34 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Perceptive Portraits
Posts: 227
North Salt Lake, Utah, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120824/11/5037caaee2852_m.jpg

^shoot more with this photographer, you boom confidence in this image
Oct 31 12 11:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
E Delsigne Photography
Posts: 30
Los Angeles, California, US


Hi there!

I have found there are three things that work best to getting more traffic to your model mayhem page.

1. Visit the main page and exchange comments and list with fellow mmers. You will receive comments and traffic from doing this... sometimes immediately.

2. Participate in as many forums as possible. Make sure you have your best photo as your avatar.. this will draw people in as well.

3. Post casting calls and availability notices and work through MM as often as possible.

Hope this helps!

Erin Delsigne Photography

https://www.facebook.com/EDPhotos
Jan 18 13 11:01 am  Link  Quote 
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