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Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


It's time to get serious. Comment on here and I'll let you know what I truly think of your portfolio. I will let you know your weaknesses, as well as your strengths, and what you can do to improve (at least in my opinion).

Disclaimer: I will provide more feedback on some portfolios if I feel they can be improved. If I feel yours can't really improve, then I won't leave you as much feedback.

As far as nudes come, I can critique your work, but if that's all you have in your portfolio (not even classy nudes), then I will most likely not critique it at all.

Who's ready to play?
Aug 21 12 09:18 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
unexpected captures
Posts: 263
San Francisco, California, US


me?
Aug 21 12 09:26 am  Link  Quote 
Model
KCLynne
Posts: 466
Harlan, Iowa, US


I'm down.
Aug 21 12 09:37 am  Link  Quote 
Model
AnissaM
Posts: 62
San Diego, California, US


smile
Aug 21 12 09:38 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Kit DeLite
Posts: 69
Westminster, California, US


I've still got work to do on mine, but I'd like to hear your opinion.
Aug 21 12 09:44 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Tarsohn
Posts: 406
Albuquerque, New Mexico, US


I'm in.
Aug 21 12 09:45 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ZeeZedZee
Posts: 38
Kansas City, Missouri, US


Go ahead. I think I'm at a point where my port can start holding it's own.
Aug 21 12 09:46 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dan K Photography
Posts: 5,409
STATEN ISLAND, New York, US


shoot!
Aug 21 12 09:50 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,228
Los Angeles, California, US


Adelante!
Aug 21 12 09:51 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AMPhotgraphy
Posts: 443
Great Falls, Virginia, US


I'm down.
Aug 21 12 09:51 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Ms Cupcake Couture
Posts: 123
Los Angeles, California, US


I'd greatly appreciate it
Aug 21 12 09:53 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dave Kai Piper
Posts: 82
Birmingham, England, United Kingdom


Sounds like something interesting !!  If you do find the time though.. or if anyone one does. Feed back is always interesting to have.

www.davekaipiper.co.uk
Aug 21 12 10:07 am  Link  Quote 
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Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


unexpected captures wrote:
me?

Some of your images aren't really good, but then you have others that make up for it. I'd say to cut your port down. Maybe just have 10-15 photos.

Aug 21 12 10:18 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


KCLynne wrote:
I'm down.

Most of the photos you have up aren't very flattering. If you're wanting to be taken seriously, then you're going to have to work with more professional photographers. smile

Aug 21 12 10:20 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Randy Potvin
Posts: 167
Rochester, New York, US


I'll play
Aug 21 12 10:22 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


AnissaM wrote:
smile

I do like some of your images to be honest. You defy the image of what society portrays women to be, and I like that. You should get rid of some of your images though because they don't do your beauty justice, but overall, keep working on your port. This one by far is my favorite!!!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120611/16/4fd680498faa5_m.jpg

Aug 21 12 10:23 am  Link  Quote 
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AnissaM
Posts: 62
San Diego, California, US


Felipe Jimenez wrote:

I do like some of your images to be honest. You defy the image of what society portrays women to be, and I like that. You should get rid of some of your images though because they don't do your beauty justice, but overall, keep working on your port. This one by far is my favorite!!!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120611/16/4fd680498faa5_m.jpg

Thank you! I was nervous to hear your answer! haha. When you get around to it, which photos do you think I should get rid of?

Aug 21 12 10:25 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Kit DeLite wrote:
I've still got work to do on mine, but I'd like to hear your opinion.

Like I mentioned before, if you want to be taken seriously, you're going to have to work with professional photographers. I would also recommend to watch out with the hair colors, it can take away from your overall look. Work with a team of professionals (hair/MU/styling), and that way you can get a nice port started.

Aug 21 12 10:27 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Tarsohn wrote:
I'm in.

It's good that you're trying to be different, but your portfolio is not necessarily what MM is all about. I would recommend trying different tutorials online to sharpen your editing techniques. Some of the photos are a bit too edited for my taste.

Aug 21 12 10:29 am  Link  Quote 
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Farenell Photography
Posts: 17,863
Albany, New York, US


Sure, go for it.
Aug 21 12 10:32 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


ZeeZedZee wrote:
Go ahead. I think I'm at a point where my port can start holding it's own.

There are some photographers that have too many photos and it gets overwhelming... but this time around I think you don't have enough. I do like some of your photos, so you're going the right path. Start networking a bit more through here and get to work with professional models who have been in the business quite a bit. The swing photo is phenomenal. smile

Aug 21 12 10:32 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Dan K Photography wrote:
shoot!

Digging your port. Not so much your "about me" section. I would change the rhyme if I were you to something more substantial. I almost didn't want to see your photos after reading that. Also, your avatar isn't as strong as your other images. I would recommend changing it.

Aug 21 12 10:35 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Rachel Hayslette
Posts: 205
Weaver, Alabama, US


Me too please.
Aug 21 12 10:38 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Jorge Kreimer wrote:
Adelante!

Your port is a little too strange for my taste, but I know that there are people out there that admire that. You definitely have a style going on, very Vogue. I would recommend just watching over-editing on some images.

Aug 21 12 10:39 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


AMPhotgraphy wrote:
I'm down.

You have some great llamas, that's for sure. Most of your images are edited just enough, but I would recommend cutting out a lot of your images. As I was scrolling down, I just started to feel they were the same photo. You want to just give people a little taste of your work so they either 1) want to see more of your work or 2) immediately just want to work with you. I think you have number 2 locked in, but giving them too much of your work at once can also be a bad thing.

Aug 21 12 10:41 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,228
Los Angeles, California, US


Felipe Jimenez wrote:

Your port is a little too strange for my taste, but I know that there are people out there that admire that. You definitely have a style going on, very Vogue. I would recommend just watching over-editing on some images.

Interesting you say that because I don't use Photoshop.

Thanks for your input.

Jorge

Aug 21 12 10:45 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Urban Exp photography
Posts: 117
Tacoma, Washington, US


im still learning and growing but i would certainly like to hear from someone with more experience than myself so thank you in advance...smile
Aug 21 12 11:04 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Axioma
Posts: 6,762
Gent, East Flanders, Belgium


smile I need to move forward, more & better quality collaborations, and finding the right direction to focus on
Aug 21 12 11:05 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jenny Jannetty
Posts: 449
Roanoke, Virginia, US


I'm in smile
Aug 21 12 12:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Merry
Posts: 1,637
London, England, United Kingdom


Please do if you have the time! smile
Aug 21 12 12:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Yin L
Posts: 264
London, England, United Kingdom


Would really love to know. Thanks!
Aug 21 12 01:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Egle Aida Damulyte
Posts: 374
Vilnius, Vilniaus, Lithuania


me too ! smile
Aug 21 12 01:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Tee ShotMe
Posts: 12
New York, New York, US


I'm down
Aug 21 12 02:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Maria J Campos
Posts: 250
Tilburg, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands


i'm game
Aug 21 12 02:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Paige Morgan
Posts: 4,058
New York, New York, US


Sure.
Aug 21 12 02:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ashley Riot
Posts: 120
Chicago, Illinois, US


I'd love some feedback, thanks!
Aug 21 12 02:41 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Fotografica Gregor
Posts: 4,067
Alexandria, Virginia, US


I would be interested -
Aug 21 12 02:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Studio Gregor
Posts: 46
Alexandria, Virginia, US


This port contains only fashion and art nudes-  please feel free to critique if you like else if you skip I will understand.
Aug 21 12 02:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
HEATHER 19
Posts: 1,125
Boston, Massachusetts, US


ok then
Aug 21 12 03:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Angelcliff Photography
Posts: 46
Baltimore, Maryland, US


Interested. Thank you
Aug 21 12 03:38 pm  Link  Quote 
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