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Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Landy wrote:
If its still going..would very much love to hear your thoughts!

I feel you're trying to be too sexy in your photos, and it can really take away from your look. Work on that. Try to tone it down a bit.

Oct 05 12 08:48 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
MSL Retouch
Posts: 244
Miami, Florida, US


I know it could be stronger, but critique away =]
Oct 05 12 08:48 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Avarra LaRoux wrote:
I'm interested. Definitely want to be taken seriously and know where I need to improve!

Go in beauty. I think you'd make some good $$ off of that. smile

Oct 05 12 08:49 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Sarah Hermann wrote:
Still going? I'm so indecisive as to which shots to get rid of. Help please?

Most of your work is a bit too amateurish. If you want to be considered for more professional work, you have to be willing to get professional work done first. Try to avoid doing cheesy/corny themes. Those really make you look amateurish.

Oct 05 12 08:50 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Eva Mizer Photography wrote:
I have been putting this off for awhile, but it's time. I'm tired to being stuck in my rut and would appreciate a fresh set of eyes.

Thank you in advance.

Some of your work is phenomenal. And then other stuff made me think "Oh... the same photographer did this?" Take this one for example:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120821/13/5033eb24bc17e_m.jpg

It's stunning! I feel you need to continue building work like this. smile Keep going at it though. I want to see more of your work.

Oct 05 12 08:52 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Kittykt wrote:
Let's do this!be honest,I'm just gettin started,and have yet to post the Realy good ones

I'm not really sure where you can start... Probably try getting some headshots of yourself that don't involve you being almost naked. Then you can work your way up.

Oct 05 12 08:53 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Funck Photography wrote:
playtime!

I would stay away from vignettes. They're a bit overdone and overrated. Your pics are a bit too bland for me. I think it's the quality of the camera you shoot with though.

Oct 05 12 08:54 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Saedcantas wrote:
Had a big cull and new shots on my port, I'd love to hear your thoughts smile

Beautiful eyes, and love the hair. Keep working though. I want to see variety. smile

Oct 05 12 08:57 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


[url=http://florida.arrests.org/Arrests/Tyler_Waitt_2207044 wrote:
Tyler[/url] Brad] Me please

Good start. Just watch out with your expression. There seems to just be one throughout.

Oct 05 12 09:21 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,784
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Still going?
Oct 05 12 09:30 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
CNSPhotography
Posts: 1
London, England, United Kingdom


Oct 05 12 09:39 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Virginia Ann
Posts: 53
Eastland, Texas, US


I can always use help smile
Oct 05 12 09:52 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Cyn Michelle
Posts: 80
Vallejo, California, US


I'd like to hear what you'd have to say smile
Oct 05 12 09:58 am  Link  Quote 
Model
_____a_____
Posts: 9
ALIX, Arkansas, US


Me, please. I am definitely interested. Just curious as to which photo is my weakest and which is my strongest. I am learning more each day and love to model. Thank you so much in advance!
Oct 05 12 10:20 am  Link  Quote 
Model
PositveEnergy
Posts: 8
Miami Beach, Florida, US


Me me me!  Please smile 

Thank you
Oct 05 12 10:25 am  Link  Quote 
Model
StacieMaria
Posts: 372
Cleveland, Ohio, US


I'm in!!  smile
Oct 05 12 10:27 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,481
New York, New York, US


Sure!
Oct 06 12 11:07 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Nikita Rumyantseva
Posts: 343
Cardiff, Wales, United Kingdom


Please! smile
Oct 06 12 11:40 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Massi
Posts: 19
Los Angeles, California, US


I'm up for a critique if you're still at it.
Oct 07 12 01:37 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Alyson Pink wrote:
go ahead smile

Good stuff. Great poses, love the expressions. Just work with better photographers please. They make you seem amateurish.

Oct 07 12 09:25 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Felipe Jimenez
Posts: 407
Chicago, Illinois, US


Miss Bond wrote:
big_smile

Wow. Great stuff missy. Love your work. I'd say to get rid of your avatar. It doesn't do your beauty justice. smile

Oct 07 12 09:27 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Alivia Autumn
Posts: 606
Albuquerque, New Mexico, US


What say you?
Oct 07 12 10:14 am  Link  Quote 
Makeup Artist
Makeup Hair by Dani B
Posts: 709
Seattle, Washington, US


Yes, please.
Oct 08 12 01:42 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Michael Knight
Posts: 53
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US


I'm game.
Oct 08 12 05:38 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jean Pierre Corleone
Posts: 38
Los Angeles, California, US


Let me know what you think
Oct 08 12 05:43 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Amy-Dawn
Posts: 17
Bath, England, United Kingdom


Wouldn't consider myself very experienced yet, but critique me please smile
Oct 08 12 05:52 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Mea Culpa
Posts: 353
Brisbane, Queensland, Australia


I would really appreciate some feedback and do let me know if you think I'm lacking anywhere. smile
Oct 08 12 05:54 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Beth Chambers
Posts: 465
London, England, United Kingdom


Me please? smile
Oct 08 12 04:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Niece Waidhofer
Posts: 201
Houston, Texas, US


Me, please?
Oct 09 12 08:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Natalie Kay Stokes
Posts: 12
Adelaide, South Australia, Australia


I'm new to the modeling world and have my first shoot on friday but i would love to know what you think of my port so far
Oct 09 12 09:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Amelia Rouge
Posts: 114
Anaheim, California, US


How about me?
Oct 10 12 03:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kristie Mcleery
Posts: 1
Jacksonville, Florida, US


me? smile
Oct 10 12 03:35 pm  Link  Quote 
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