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Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


I've been enjoying my time on the MM forums of late and exploring other peoples portfolios. I see an abundance of good work and some stuff that GOT to GO.
I'll go through your port and tell you what needs to go.

Both models and photographers are welcome.

I am biased towards certain styles but I am not critiquing just telling
you what needs to go.

Have at it.

You don't have to remove the pictures but my rule of thumb is quality over quantity. Even my own port has to much right now!
Sep 26 12 06:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,255
Los Angeles, California, US


Sure, I have a lot to take out.
Sep 26 12 07:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Eleanor Rose
Posts: 2,241
Santa Rosa, California, US


Me please!
Sep 26 12 07:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


Sep 26 12 07:41 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


Eleanor R wrote:
Me please!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29057513

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28762284

These two  Got To GO!

! Some of your nudes are pure inspiration

Sep 26 12 07:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
TDSImages
Posts: 813
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Me next?
Sep 27 12 06:55 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jenny Jannetty
Posts: 449
Roanoke, Virginia, US


I'm game!
Sep 27 12 07:11 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


Sep 27 12 08:31 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


Sep 27 12 08:37 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Tell me! smile
Sep 27 12 08:39 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


DAN CRUIKSHANK wrote:
Tell me! smile

First let me say some of your dark landscapes are pure inspiration.

These...GOT to GOOO:)

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28971489

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29068077

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29406881 (get rid of bottom one the top is waay stronger)

Sep 27 12 09:14 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


AWHill Photography wrote:

First let me say some of your dark landscapes are pure inspiration.

These...GOT to GOOO:)

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28971489

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29068077

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29406881 (get rid of bottom one the top is waay stronger)

Mucho gracias!

Sep 27 12 09:22 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Cameron Mark Lewis
Posts: 337
San Francisco, California, US


What do you think has to go?
Sep 27 12 10:03 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


Cameron Mark Lewis wrote:
What do you think has to go?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038863

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038799

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27974014

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29519724

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29702063

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038929

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27973949

These..GOT to GO.

You sell yourself very well as a model - many strong shots but you can stand to cut down on some of your images to make it more concise. You have a lot of strong head shots so making some selections were hard but you're a pro and it shows.

Sep 27 12 10:22 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
L Raye
Posts: 5,000
Petaluma, California, US


WHich ones should go away?
Sep 27 12 10:29 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


L Raye wrote:
WHich ones should go away?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27135168

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17372927

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24888979

I think I can safely say these three GOT to GO!

This was truly hard as your port has an abundance of great nudes.
You have an eye for sure.

Sep 27 12 11:14 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Cynthia Serrano
Posts: 12,466
Newark, New Jersey, US


??
Sep 27 12 11:15 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Macphotography
Posts: 47
London, England, United Kingdom


Try me :-)
Sep 27 12 11:18 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


Cynthia Serrano  wrote:
??

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29762129

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14564710

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13769365

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29825693

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29902502

These..Got TO GO!

I'm basing my pics on what showcases you best as a model and the styling involved. As a former model I wanna say you have some great expressions and strong poses. Branch out and work with some more people and you'll have some gold.

Sep 27 12 11:38 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


Sep 27 12 11:41 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Cameron Mark Lewis
Posts: 337
San Francisco, California, US


AWHill Photography wrote:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038863

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038799

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27974014

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29519724

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29702063

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038929

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27973949

These..GOT to GO.

You sell yourself very well as a model - many strong shots but you can stand to cut down on some of your images to make it more concise. You have a lot of strong head shots so making some selections were hard but you're a pro and it shows.

Much appreciated, thank you! smile

Sep 27 12 11:51 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Beauty Retouched
Posts: 130
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US


How bout me smile
Sep 27 12 11:52 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Maria J Campos
Posts: 252
Tilburg, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands


sure, do it!
Sep 27 12 12:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Cynthia Serrano
Posts: 12,466
Newark, New Jersey, US


AWHill Photography wrote:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29762129

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14564710

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13769365

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29825693

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29902502

These..Got TO GO!

I'm basing my pics on what showcases you best as a model and the styling involved. As a former model I wanna say you have some great expressions and strong poses. Branch out and work with some more people and you'll have some gold.

Thanks it's funny you picked pretty much all of my newest shots smile

Sep 27 12 12:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


Beauty Retouched wrote:
How bout me smile

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8558456

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8553108

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8553114

These..Got..TOOooo..go! A bit hard to do a beauty retoucher - I understand you are trying to showcase your work in before/after - I don't think these three highlight your port like the rest of the images.

Sep 27 12 12:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


Maria J Campos wrote:
sure, do it!

Can I say nothing? Your port is elegant, concise and is my soft spot.

Though..the name of the game is got to go..and..if I was on a desert island and something gots to go it would be..

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26270291

Sep 27 12 01:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Rainbow misi
Posts: 6
Bratislava, Bratislavsk√Ĺ, Slovakia


interested in your opinion..smile
Sep 27 12 01:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Axioma
Posts: 6,773
Gent, East Flanders, Belgium


smile
Sep 27 12 01:12 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


Rainbow misi wrote:
interested in your opinion..smile

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30022214

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29772930

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29772904

Those three...GOT...TO ..GO. You have great dynamic poses but those do nothing for your port.

Sep 27 12 01:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


Sep 27 12 01:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
I Ference Photography
Posts: 1,152
Rochester, New York, US


And I?
Sep 27 12 04:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
steph amberlyn stewart
Posts: 34
Brantford, Ontario, Canada


id lke to know your input
Sep 28 12 07:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Serendipitous Studios
Posts: 32
Beaverton, Oregon, US


I am always looking for some honest feedback.
Sep 29 12 09:55 am  Link  Quote 
Model
LauraPaige
Posts: 204
Greenville, North Carolina, US


Sure. Let me know. smile
Sep 29 12 10:05 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Monday Morning
Posts: 338
Norman, Oklahoma, US


I'm sure there are lots that need to go... smile
Sep 29 12 10:15 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Cashe Monet
Posts: 378
Los Angeles, California, US


Have at it!
Sep 29 12 10:24 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Camera Obscura Photogra
Posts: 12
Cincinnati, Ohio, US


I'm interested in what you think... Do mine!  Thank you!
Sep 29 12 10:28 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Chad Sterling
Posts: 38
College Station, Texas, US


Me please, and an explanation please!
Sep 29 12 10:32 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Egle Aida Damulyte
Posts: 374
Vilnius, Vilniaus, Lithuania


me please smile
Sep 29 12 10:36 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWHill Photography
Posts: 147
New York, New York, US


Out and about NYC today. I'll be able to go through people's ports in a few hours.
Sep 29 12 01:16 pm  Link  Quote 
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