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Joseph Reed Photography
Posts: 2,243
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


Ladies,

I will tell you the following.

1.  Best image and why
2.  Worst image and why
3.  Best physical Feature and why
4.  Worst physical feature and why
5.  Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10
6.  Sex appeal on scale of 1-10
7.  What I would do to your port to make it better
8.  Are you list worthy?
9.  Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to imprive
10.  What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at.
11.  Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all?

As always, I'll be honest, but not intentionally mean.  No need to check back as I wll send you a message when I am done.
Sep 28 12 01:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Nataly G
Posts: 117
Reading, England, United Kingdom


Let me know smile
Sep 28 12 01:49 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph Reed Photography
Posts: 2,243
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


Evalia wrote:
Let me know smile

1.  Best image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120629/18/4fee5095117fb_m.jpg
I like this one because it seems to capture a free spirit...kinda has a throw back look to the 70s feel about it.
2.  Worst image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110606/15/4ded58c8e1530_m.jpg
a lot of your images are about the same level from a quality perspective...I chose this one because of what I think is an overly soft look about it.
3.  Best physical Feature and why lips...nice and full
4.  Worst physical feature and why really hard to tell....all of your images have you dressed from head to toe...so hard to get a good look at your body/curves...
5.  Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 6.5
6.  Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 6...lower sex appeal purely because of your port...it's more fashion oriented...that's not bad...it just doesn't lend itself to sexy...not saying you couldn't pull it off if you wanted to.
7.  What I would do to your port to make it better I would toss up a couple of pin up images and I would add a variety of expressions on your face
8.  Are you list worthy? nothing in my current lists IMO
9.  Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to improve
you seem to have the posing down and the attitude, but the facial expressions are all the same...or pretty close to the same...mix it up a little but...you're allowed to smile if you want...
10.  What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at. I would love to see you do some retro 70s and 60s type of images.
11.  Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? TFCD.

Sep 28 12 02:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jenny Jannetty
Posts: 449
Roanoke, Virginia, US


I asked for you to look at mine on your last thread, but got skipped sad
Sep 28 12 03:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Heather Smythe
Posts: 367
Sacramento, California, US


How sweet of you to do this! I'd love to know smile
Sep 28 12 05:39 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph Reed Photography
Posts: 2,243
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


Jenny Jannetty wrote:
I asked for you to look at mine on your last thread, but got skipped sad

No pouty faces!!!

1.  Best image and why
18+


nice and classy...sexy and cute...well done
2.  Worst image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120928/15/506622b2a5e97_m.jpg
these images with the model sticking a body part through a photo frame either look really cool or just fall flat...it's not easy to do...IMO these fall flat

3.  Best physical Feature and why love love love your breasts....
4.  Worst physical feature and why nose...seems a bit wide
5.  Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 7
6.  Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 6.5
7.  What I would do to your port to make it better it seems as though you spend time on getting a wardrobe or setting all lined up and then there's just something missing from the image...kinda like there was no direction for the shot...kinda through it together...oh let's try this....
8.  Are you list worthy? nothing in my current lists.
9.  Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to improve
work on facial expressions....if you're going to stick a violin between your legs, what are you trying to say?  Say something with your images...glam it up a little bit...plan something out and take the time to get it right.
10.  What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at. think you could do some cool pinup
11.  Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? TFCD

Sep 28 12 07:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jenny Jannetty
Posts: 449
Roanoke, Virginia, US


Thank you for the input!  I appreciate it!  smile
Sep 28 12 07:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
steph amberlyn stewart
Posts: 34
Brantford, Ontario, Canada


i wanna know alsol:p if you find the time of course:)
Sep 28 12 07:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph Reed Photography
Posts: 2,243
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


Heather Smythe wrote:
How sweet of you to do this! I'd love to know smile

Heather, I just reviewed you a day or two ago.

Sep 29 12 05:01 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph Reed Photography
Posts: 2,243
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


steph amberlyn stewart wrote:
i wanna know alsol:p if you find the time of course:)

Steph,

I sent you a PM as requested.

Sep 29 12 05:02 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Cashe Monet
Posts: 378
Los Angeles, California, US


Go for it smile
Sep 29 12 10:26 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Lela Jesse
Posts: 1,148
Arcata, California, US


me please! This sounds like great information. Thank you!
Sep 29 12 10:29 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Zoe Chanel
Posts: 164
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Let me know smile
Sep 29 12 01:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph Reed Photography
Posts: 2,243
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


zoe chanel wrote:
Let me know smile

1.  Best image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120730/19/50174577a332a_m.jpg
just a clean simply image, but those eyes just pulled me in...very nice
2.  Worst image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120520/21/4fb9c0d761edb_m.jpg
there's nothing to this image at all...not fashion, not glam, not sexy, not dramatic, not well framed, not cool colors...it's just bad all around...there's a reason you have 160+ views and no comments on it...

3.  Best physical Feature and why
very pretty eyes...great color
4.  Worst physical feature and why
lips...upper lip thin...based on your images, it's hard to say anything about your body as your fully covered in almost all images...that's not bad, just hard to make any comments in that area.
5.  Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 6
6.  Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 5(your images are not glam/sexy, they are more cutesie....
7.  What I would do to your port to make it better toss some glam in there and make a dramatic themed shoot...
8.  Are you list worthy? nothing in my current lists.
9.  Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to improve - vary it up...put some pinup in there, some glam, some high fashion, until you find what you like and what you are good at...so many models want to do "fashion" and they are mediocre at best....then they stumble upon the fact they are good at pinup or boudoir or drama or whatever....take the time to find what you are good at, not necessarily what you think you are good at.
10.  What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at. hard to say at this point until I see more variety
11.  Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? TFCD

Sep 29 12 04:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph Reed Photography
Posts: 2,243
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


Lela Jesse wrote:
me please! This sounds like great information. Thank you!

1.  Best image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110208/21/4d5226794102e_m.jpg
love the sign and I'm a sucker for BW images
2.  Worst image and why
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120508/20/4fa9e57c611f7_m.jpg
PM me and I'll tell you...I can't explain without violating MM rules
3.  Best physical Feature and why lips...nice big juicy lips
4.  Worst physical feature and why nose...I'd slim it down a little but
5.  Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10 7
6.  Sex appeal on scale of 1-10 6.5
7.  What I would do to your port to make it better more diversity...spread it out among the various areas of the modeling spectrum...add some glam and pinup, etc
8.  Are you list worthy? nothing in my current lists
11.  Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all? TFCD

Sep 29 12 04:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph Reed Photography
Posts: 2,243
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


Cashe Monet wrote:
Go for it smile

I'll get back to you shortly

Sep 29 12 04:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Elesha Eden
Posts: 477
Southampton, England, United Kingdom


Hiya
oh my i wonder what im letting myself in for
yes please im forever looking to improve

x
Sep 30 12 12:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Affinity Finch
Posts: 652
Bodmin, England, United Kingdom


Im game!
Sep 30 12 01:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kimfit
Posts: 1
Cleveland, Ohio, US


Joseph Reed Photography wrote:
Ladies,

I will tell you the following.

1.  Best image and why
2.  Worst image and why
3.  Best physical Feature and why
4.  Worst physical feature and why
5.  Physical Beauty on scale of 1-10
6.  Sex appeal on scale of 1-10
7.  What I would do to your port to make it better
8.  Are you list worthy?
9.  Somewhat lengthy discussion of what you need to do to your port to imprive
10.  What I think the types of photos you should be amazing at.
11.  Would I pay you to shoot or would I shoot TFCD with you or not at all?

As always, I'll be honest, but not intentionally mean.  No need to check back as I wll send you a message when I am done.

Sep 30 12 01:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ashley Alexiss
Posts: 291
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Chiming in
Sep 30 12 01:42 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
AlliRae
Posts: 26
Orlando, Florida, US


I would love to hear your thoughts if you have time. Thanks
Sep 30 12 01:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph Reed Photography
Posts: 2,243
Indianapolis, Indiana, US


Ashley Alexiss wrote:
Chiming in

I just recently commented on your port in another thread....

Sep 30 12 03:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
youngrebeldesigns
Posts: 25
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


This sounds great!! smile Please, tell me.
Oct 01 12 02:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Sarah_Elisabeth
Posts: 226
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


me?
Oct 04 12 12:55 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Paradise The Goddess
Posts: 1
Columbus, Mississippi, US


ok i want your opinions
Oct 04 12 01:03 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Alyson Pink
Posts: 32
Los Angeles, California, US


^ Mississippi!!

LOL, I wanna know
Oct 04 12 01:20 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Kimmi Fox
Posts: 81
London, England, United Kingdom


I'm slightly curious, as I'm new, would be great to get some feed back and learn and improve myself. Would it be possible in a PM though?
Oct 04 12 01:27 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Adam Mohammed
Posts: 39
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Hi, I would really appreciate it if you can give me any feedback on the female models in my portfolio. Is it okay if you can private message me? Please let me know as I would love to hear your thoughts. Thank you very much for your time.
Oct 04 12 02:28 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Nikita Rumyantseva
Posts: 343
Cardiff, Wales, United Kingdom


Please let me know smile
Oct 06 12 08:08 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Christi Camden
Posts: 39
Birmingham, Alabama, US


I'd like to know!
Oct 13 12 04:58 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Rachael Bueckert
Posts: 1,121
Red Deer, Alberta, Canada


Love too smile
Oct 13 12 07:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Alivia Autumn
Posts: 610
Albuquerque, New Mexico, US


Pretty please
Oct 18 12 11:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
EmilyDoll
Posts: 399
Fontana, California, US


me plz
Oct 19 12 06:35 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Maria Susanti
Posts: 542
Banyuwangi, Jawa Timur, Indonesia


me please?
Oct 19 12 09:21 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Katie Pagani
Posts: 239
New York, New York, US


This would definitely be helpful!
Oct 25 12 08:16 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Devlin
Posts: 682
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


I would love your opinion. smile
Oct 27 12 12:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Alixx Rose
Posts: 225
Atlanta, Georgia, US


yes, a real critique!
Nov 04 12 02:37 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Maggie Xia
Posts: 452
Atlanta, Georgia, US


This seems like fun =p
Nov 04 12 03:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jojo West
Posts: 972
Silver Spring, Maryland, US


I'd like to know...be gentle smile
Nov 04 12 04:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Maruschke
Posts: 543
Darfield, Canterbury, New Zealand


That would be amazing
Nov 04 12 05:47 pm  Link  Quote 
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