Best - Cute shot of you! - don't feel like you have to place your hands on the wall though. They take up a good deal of visual space... They would be better just naturally by your side in this shot - or on the hips in a playful manor. (Hands can be tricky!)
Worst - Be careful not to overflex the arm it can make it look broken. The angle/crop does not do much for you either.
You are a cute model! Try to line up a bunch of shoots with some great photographers. It will help you a good deal!
Best - Love the set! Very sexy and strong pose work. The only one that feels forced is the 3rd pose - the arm on the wall takes away from the pose.
Worst - I don't like the black background at all. The comp could be better. I wish your feet were not sinking down into the material your standing on. It makes them look deformed. None of this is your fault. The only thing you could improve is having a bit more of a sassy mood in this shot.
Makeup by Dani B wrote: Please? (Covers eyes with hands and peeks through fingers while grimacing.)
Best - Love it!
Worst - Don't think it does much for your MU port here on MM. It is well composed though... HA!! Sorry couldn't hold back on that one. It looks like he is composing something - or getting ready to fight a bull.
Best - Nice shot... I wish it didn't look quite as Photoshopped though.
Worst - Right arm is bulky due to placing weight on it. In a pose like this you have to make your abs do more of the work to avoid this. I also don't care for the comp on it. You have set a great mood in it though!!