Thatcher Photography wrote:

Best. Very hot mood and style!! Wow!!!
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Best2. Great full body shot!


Worst. The comp kills this shot!
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Thanks, I love the two shots you choosed The other one was a trial, I'll probably find something different

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Best. outstanding shot!!


Worst. I don't like the light on her nose. It makes it the focal point on this shot.

Thank you very much.  I appreciate it.

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Best. Awesome viewpoint and sky!!! Wish the style was edgy fashion for this. Perhaps a small pop of light to make it more about the model while retaining your cool sky!


Worst. The comp is not my style! I would lower it a good bit to fill the frame with your subject.

Thanks for the tips...always appreciated.

Mrs Foxy wrote:

Best - Awesome style!


Worst - Just seems boring in contrast to your other work.
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Best - Dayummm!! I LOVE this shot so much! I will take two of these please!!!! Ha!


Worst 1 - Get a pro to do the "no makeup" shot. I don't think you should burn a photo slot with this one. You could paste the "no makeup" shot on your profile page and keep all your awesome ones for your MM port.


Worst 2 - Your left arm go missing in the shot due to the pattern and pose position. If you brought the hand to the knee it would help some. I also feel like the mood does not match the location. This is a happy place and it feels/looks like your puppy just passed away.

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Best - awesome style!


Worst - I love the style... I don't like the hand positions.

Thank you

Rist Photography wrote:
Well, you said you were back at it, as of a week ago, perhaps you will be at it again.
Best:


Worst:

Just feels too edited for my taste.

I will look forward to hopefully finding out your opinion on my best and worst.

Your worst is one of my first MM shots. I didn't do any PS work back then. - other than tone/color work. Perhaps it is the amount of light.

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Best - Love the model and her sexy outfit!! Nice frame work too!


Worst - I don't think that this helps your port look any stronger. I get it... light writing is fun!

Best - Cute shot!


Worst - I don't like the use of the gold reflector for this shot.


You have a lot of happy/fun outfits... Make sure your moods reflect the style of the shoot. Don't hold back on showing a wide range of emotion.

PeachCherryBlossom wrote:
I would love your opinion!

Best - This is an awesome 2 model shot! Love the BW and the style is cool. Nice job!!


Worst - I like your pose and the dress! I just think the comp and view point make you look very short. A tighter crop might help some.

Yes!! We moved to Fredericksburg recently so it was slow for a while! Ha!!

Best - Love it!! Great color tone and nice comp!! Sexy style too! You have a stunning face!!


Worst - I don't care for the light on your face. Not your fault! It looks very strange to me.


Try to change up your mood it looks like you are staying in the same range of moods for all of your MM shots.

Best- Love this set! Nice camera control!!


Worst- Panning slightly to the right to keep her foot from being chopped would help this one. Very sexy model and nice light!!

Best - WOW!! I love this set! Great range and style. The mood of the 2nd shot is AWESOME!!


Worst - Pose wise it is very collected and feels unbalanced in the frame. Creating windows in your pose would help this one out.

Best - Wicked dress and model! Nice comp too!!!


Worst - The other one from this shoot is a much better shot. The post work lightened your backdrop (especially in the facial area) and made the edit work one of the focal points.

Best- I know it is a simple shot, but it seems to jump out at me more than any of the others.


Worst- The light in this shot kills it! It is way to harsh to do anything for you.


The best thing you can do is try to line up some work with some better photographers. It will help you out a great deal! Most of the problems with your port are not your fault.

Autumn Rose Brightly wrote:
Can't remember if I asked before but I would appreciate your input

Best - Nice pose! Great connection!


Worst - Looks about as awkward as it must have felt.

Best - Awesome!!!!


Worst - Post work killed this shot. I would also rather see a shot like this taken in the correct environment too. Not your fault!!

Best - Great style!! Nice comp!!! I wish she set a stronger mood for the shot. Tighter eye and more sassy!


Worst - I don't like how compressed the pose is. It feels clunky on the bottom part of her body... great on the top part!!


Get out and shoot outside more! I dig your outdoor/location work!

Beth Chambers wrote:
Me please?

Best 1 - Great mood and setting!!!


Best 2 - Super sexy outfit for you! Wow! I would love to shoot you in this! HA!!


Worst - The mood on this one is very blank. I wish you punched it up with a sexy mood to match the style!

Francisco Castro wrote:
You have a really good port, every image I looked at was better than the one previous... then this came up:



It's a nice picture, but compared to the rest of your port, it's not very memorable. Very "high school senoir yearbook".

Best. I love the model and that you picked it for BW.


Worst. I don't think it touches any of your other work.

fullmetalphotographer wrote:
Looks cool, I want to play.

Best - Great comp and DOF on this shot! Sexy model too! Nice job!!


Worst - I like the idea, I just feel that the comp in not as strong as your other work.
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