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Model
000---000
Posts: 706
Alberta, Alabama, US


Hi!
Please rate my portfolio 1-10! A little explanation would be nice too. I'll return the favor if you want me to.
Oct 04 12 03:34 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Aaron Lewis Photography
Posts: 5,078
Catskill, New York, US


Personally, I like your work over all. Most of your shots are well composed and well photographed. Nice work.

Now because there is a lack of versatility and no full body shots I'm going to give you a  7+

What's you've done is very nice, but venture away from the head and shoulders look. Mix it up. A lot of your work has the same feel and look to it.

The first shot in your port is a little dark and the pose looks awkward. I'm not sure if I like it or not.The shot by the gate is a little odd too. A shallower DOF would have helped here. That's my opinion.
Oct 04 12 07:17 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1,699
Washington, District of Columbia, US


Yep great start!
I'd like to see you work with some talented high fashion photographers to bring out your full potential .

I agree ^ full body shots needed! Rate: 7
Oct 04 12 08:48 am  Link  Quote 
Model
HEATHER 19
Posts: 1,125
Boston, Massachusetts, US


like it - 8 - also have put out there that fullbody shots will help you out.
Oct 04 12 09:09 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,220
Los Angeles, California, US


7.5
You have a great look, but need more variety of photos.
Oct 04 12 09:37 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Farenell Photography
Posts: 17,856
Albany, New York, US


I'd say a 6.5 mostly because it feels like I'm seeing variation of the same image done about 5 or 6 different ways. But what is there is executed nicely though.
Oct 04 12 11:50 am  Link  Quote 
Model
000---000
Posts: 706
Alberta, Alabama, US


Aaron Lewis Photography wrote:
Personally, I like your work over all. Most of your shots are well composed and well photographed. Nice work.

Now because there is a lack of versatility and no full body shots I'm going to give you a  7+

What's you've done is very nice, but venture away from the head and shoulders look. Mix it up. A lot of your work has the same feel and look to it.

The first shot in your port is a little dark and the pose looks awkward. I'm not sure if I like it or not.The shot by the gate is a little odd too. A shallower DOF would have helped here. That's my opinion.

Thanks for your input! For some reason, photographers always end up taking portraits of me. Perhaps I should really ask them more to also make plenty full-body shots (i just recieved some new stuff which I will add in a few minutes..)

As for you: I'd give you a 5.5/6. Technically you're alright, I just wish the pictures were more interesting and vibrant. The colors seem a bit grey.

Oct 04 12 01:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
000---000
Posts: 706
Alberta, Alabama, US


Rachel Reilly wrote:
Yep great start!
I'd like to see you work with some talented high fashion photographers to bring out your full potential .

I agree ^ full body shots needed! Rate: 7

Thanks! I hope I'll be able to work with some amazing photographers in the near future. I do think I'm improving at every shoot (:
As for you, I love how many angles the models body creates in each image. It makes the picture dynamic. I think you should practice even more at making pictures dynamic to make them really memorable.

Oct 04 12 01:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Yin L
Posts: 264
London, England, United Kingdom


7
I love your look in this http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/12 … 7d55_m.jpg

I really like your look in general and have stumbled across your port quite a few times.
I feel that you can do with more varied expression.

keep up the good work !smile


**highly appreciate your advice/ comments on mine smile**
Oct 04 12 01:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mark
Posts: 2,889
New York, New York, US


5.  repetitive mouth expressions, inconsistent hair and most importantly you dont seem to be aware of your market- which is commercial print and not fashion. So you have the wrong photos to get work which you are some what suited for- advertising and life style.
Oct 06 12 12:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Cole Morrison
Posts: 3,958
Portland, Oregon, US


5/10

Your styling doesnt suit you. You need to try different types of modeling and see what fits better. Same slightly open mouth in almost every shot.

Your thoughts on mine?
Oct 07 12 06:23 am  Link  Quote 
Model
steph amberlyn stewart
Posts: 34
Brantford, Ontario, Canada


Hey I would rate it a 8 outta 10 I love your pictures but I'm not the hugest fan of the ones in the purple sweater:)
Oct 07 12 09:00 am  Link  Quote 
Model
PaulDCampbell
Posts: 9
London, England, United Kingdom


I think you have a very healthy portfolio. It portrays alot of experience and alot of your work has been quite magic. I would have to give you a nice solid 8. I don't expect you to comment back on mine Ive only just started out.
Oct 07 12 09:08 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Affinity Finch
Posts: 652
Bodmin, England, United Kingdom


I'd rate you at a 7 smile I love your B+W ones near the end of your port. You have such a lovely face as well, I'm liking your full body ones you have great physique smile Overall good job try some different facial expressioins though smile
Oct 07 12 09:08 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Paul Tirado Photography
Posts: 4,198
New York, New York, US


I would say 6. I would rate your port higher as you have a great look but your shots - while lovely - are all pretty much in a comfortable category.  I would want to see more daring in terms of fashion, setting, makeup, hair, etc.
Oct 07 12 09:25 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Serendipitous Studios
Posts: 32
Beaverton, Oregon, US


I would give you a 6. A 5 would be average. You have a decent portfolio but it is repetitive. You don't have anything that is mind blowing but nothing sticks our like a soar thumb either. With more time and with a variety of different photographers it could easily become a 7 or an 8.
Oct 07 12 11:47 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Drew Smith Photography
Posts: 5,209
Nottingham, England, United Kingdom


I like your work. 7.5/10
Oct 07 12 12:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
A N D E R S O N
Posts: 2,553
Garden Grove, California, US


5, nice look but little to no variation in expression and not much creativity. Try to get involved with some great concepts with a full team.
Oct 07 12 12:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Digital Artist
A T Design
Posts: 2
New Albany, Indiana, US


Very nice, I like your colors and the softness. It's your style! I tend to stick with a lot of the same styles but I'm okay with that..needing a better camera is my downfall I believe. Yours is classy though.
Oct 07 12 12:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kelleth
Posts: 2,503
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120726/17/5011db6087d55_m.jpg

This is beautiful and I love your teeth.

I'd love to see more expressions, more variety of images. Overall I'd say 7?
Oct 07 12 12:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Cyn Michelle
Posts: 80
Vallejo, California, US


8 smile You're portfolio is very good, but a little variety of expressions would be nice to see.

I'd like to hear your feedback on mines :-)
Oct 07 12 01:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
OwenImages
Posts: 3,801
Indian Rocks Beach, Florida, US


Rating of the port...

Well, I would say a 6.5.  Your look is good.  You have some variety which is good.  The photographers you have worked with have done a pretty good job.  But...I would say there is really just one thing holding you back.  I would say you have too many photos that depict the exact same facial expression and it is not the most flattering of facial expressions that you can do I'm sure.  It is one thing to show 'attitude' but I think this is too much and it really doesn't work for you.

The other thing is that you don't have any Florida beach shots.  wink
Oct 07 12 06:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
C A T H Y
Posts: 5,464
Anaheim, California, US


I would rate your portfolio a 7.5

You have some pretty good photos..but just need to have a wider range of
expressions.
Oct 07 12 06:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
PhotoByWayne
Posts: 1,190
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


I would like to see more full length images to show how you pose and images with different expressions.
Oct 07 12 10:23 pm  Link  Quote 
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