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The WJ Image
Posts: 32
Raleigh, North Carolina, US

I have been shooting for a while now and I am still shooting a lot of TFP. First can I get some feed back on my work...good bad and ugly is welcome. Second would you say my work warrants me limiting my TFP and increasing my paid work.
Oct 05 12 07:33 pm  Link  Quote 
Robert Jewett
Posts: 2,428
al-Marsā, Tunis, Tunisia

I see some strong elements in your work.

However, it's kind of all over the place, and I don't see a consistent look or even a consistent level of quality.

I can't tell from your profile/portfolio who you are, what you bring to the table or why I should shoot with you if I was a model (let alone pay you).

Personally, I'd narrow it down to the best 5 images, pay 5 more top models from your area, and exhibit nothing but strengths in your portfolio.
Oct 06 12 02:40 am  Link  Quote 
dave phoenix
Posts: 1,272
Phoenix, Arizona, US

which one of these do you think is good, and which one is bad?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121005/18/506f8b46d15ef_m.jpg http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091106/10/4af46bc568658_m.jpg
Oct 08 12 02:13 am  Link  Quote 
Posts: 8,437
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Loose the logo
One of your better images

Model too centered in photograph
Solid green grass not dirt for the background

Move away from the wall
Do not cut off the finger tips
Oct 08 12 10:05 am  Link  Quote 
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