I don't think this is a very good shot- busy back ground and distracting couch.If you shot more looking down it would be better as it stands now - arent his eyes out of focus? The jeans area is too prominent- were you trying for some kind of play girl shot? Then maybe a hand on his belt, The light is too flat as well. There is no mystery in the pic- perhaps with some indirect lighting you would get some interesting shadows.
might have been better to shoot on a bed with some crumpled plain sheets