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Georgia Models
Posts: 18
Atlanta, Georgia, US


Oct 06 12 02:55 pm  Link  Quote 
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Mark
Posts: 2,889
New York, New York, US


I don't think this is a very good shot- busy back ground and distracting couch.If you shot more looking down it would be better as it stands now - arent his eyes out of focus?  The jeans area is too prominent- were you trying for some kind of play girl shot?  Then maybe a hand on his belt,  The light is too flat as well.  There is no mystery in the pic- perhaps with some indirect lighting you would get some interesting shadows.

might have been better to shoot on a bed with some crumpled plain sheets
Oct 06 12 05:17 pm  Link  Quote 
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Cole Morrison
Posts: 3,958
Portland, Oregon, US


Nothing special, unique, or memorable about it.
Oct 07 12 10:02 am  Link  Quote 
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dave phoenix
Posts: 1,257
Phoenix, Arizona, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121006/14/50709f4658365_m.jpg

not flattering, sorry
Oct 08 12 03:13 am  Link  Quote 
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