MissEllie
Posts: 37
Brisbane, Queensland, Australia
I have recently gotten back into modeling and have posted some new photographs. What do you think? I am more then happy to reply to any comments (on thread or photographs) with feedback.
I'll just describe my reaction to opening your port - first it was a WTF!? and a bit of a heart thump, then it was laughter and then just a head shake with disbelief and some sadness. I also wonder where you were locked up during your absence from MM.
Funny you have some degree of warmth and pleasantness in your avatar shot which is a great set up for the disturbing and pitiful photos inside.
It might not be what you hoped for but its honest and I have been looking a portfolios all day and this one had the greatest impact. Just wish I hadnt done it as I was about to go to bed
MissEllie
Posts: 37
Brisbane, Queensland, Australia
Mark wrote: I'll just describe my reaction to opening your port - first it was a WTF!? and a bit of a heart thump, then it was laughter and then just a head shake with disbelief and some sadness. I also wonder where you were locked up during your absence from MM.
Funny you have some degree of warmth and pleasantness in your avatar shot which is a great set up for the disturbing and pitiful photos inside.
It might not be what you hoped for but its honest and I have been looking a portfolios all day and this one had the greatest impact. Just wish I hadnt done it as I was about to go to bed
If that's the kind of work you like and want to be known for, then I think many of the images are quite good. However, ...
I would lose the first one on the first row because the second one is better and you don't need two similar ones. On the second row I would lose at least one, and probably both of the last two. The lighting is flat and uninteresting and the headpiece does nothing good for you.
On the third row I would lose the second from the left. It doesn't really say anything except that somebody naked is under a dressing table.
You have three shots from a wrecked, abandoned building. The strongest is the final one where you are leaning against the wall. I would abandon the other two.
Finally,I would lose the final image. In fact, that's the first I would lose, if culling.
MissEllie
Posts: 37
Brisbane, Queensland, Australia
WCR3 wrote: If that's the kind of work you like and want to be known for, then I think many of the images are quite good. However, ...
I would lose the first one on the first row because the second one is better and you don't need two similar ones. On the second row I would lose at least one, and probably both of the last two. The lighting is flat and uninteresting and the headpiece does nothing good for you.
On the third row I would lose the second from the left. It doesn't really say anything except that somebody naked is under a dressing table.
You have three shots from a wrecked, abandoned building. The strongest is the final one where you are leaning against the wall. I would abandon the other two.
Finally,I would lose the final image. In fact, that's the first I would lose, if culling.
i think you've got a great figure, but i dont think your portfolio is living up to your potential. surely you've seen better rope bondage photos, and better art nudes. what's holding you back?
what i assume to be the new images are very dark and need to be brighter. i mean as far as lighting goes, not mood. Some of your what i assume are older photos have terrible framing and should be deleted immediately.
ex. http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 1#29994981 18+
The light is too high, which is causing the dark band across the top of your eyes, and long shadow under nose, lips and chin
Photographer has a dirty sensor, gray circle upper right side of photo
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